About the Poem

This poem is about the beauty of forgiveness the Lord gives us. It portrays how one might feel standing in His presence with our sin.

I Was Lifted Up On Angel's Wings

by WhtDove

I was lifted up on Angels' wings,
And through the Heavens soared.
When I came upon a brilliant light,
I found it was my Lord.

With hair like snow and eyes of fire,
I bowed before His feet.
In His presence it was hard to stand,
My sins felt like concrete.

Head hung in sorrow, tears filled my eyes.
My mouth, it couldn't speak.
My sins were overpowering me.
My soul, it just felt weak.

A gentle hand reached out to touch me,
A voice like thunder spoke.
The love He gave enveloped my soul,
My heart no longer broke.

He put His loving arms around me,
Such peace that I felt then.
I was quite content in knowing that,
He'd do it all again.

Our righteous acts are like filthy rags,
The Lord reminded me.
Come in unto Me my precious child,
For I can set you free.

I was lifted up on Angel's wings,
And through the Heavens soared.
I had been forgiven my sin and...
My soul had been restored.

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59 Visitor Comments

Desirae

your poem really touched my heart i thought that it was all true, obeying the lord and knowing you are forgiven and now can soar! thankyou for the poem!

Brittany

SWEET POEM. WHTBIRD IS VERY VERY TALENTED AND YOU CAN JUST TELL BY HER POEM THAT SHE IS A TRUE CHRISTIAN.

katri

i love this poem is nice and gental for kids and family i love it could you put more of them i love this one that is called walking with the angels is like for the people who loves god and care about him because the lord made us and the angels take care of us and the devil is not a helper he is a bad person that he says bad words thats why me and my family always go to church and thats the place you pray with him and even dance with him sing to him he wants to hear you scream i love you my lord you are my favorite of all i will always love you and you always love meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee love u lord

Rebecca

good

Emalie

This poem really touched me. It brought tears of amazement and gratification to my eyes. Amazing poem.

isa

your poem reminds me of how great the Lords love is. we are so dirty yet he loves us and sets us free. i cant wait to be lifted up on Angel's wings, And through the Heavens soared. I had been forgiven my sin and. My soul had been restored.

amy

this poem has touched my heart and i know that every day i have somthing to be thankfull for the love of god and jesus christ.

mary

This poem is very beautiful, and a reminder that all our sins are forgiven if we seek ye first the kingdom of GOD and just ask.

Kathy

A scientist I am; a poet I am not. I came to this sight looking for inspiration, thoughts to convey what I felt in my heart--WhtDove your poetry is incredible! Both of the poems that I chose came from your heart; they will be forever imprinted on mine.

Forgiveness is a beautiful gift of love.

Sara

I think that this poem was excellent. So did my sister. Before we even read it, the title inspired us, and we sang it to the best of our ability. I am only twelve years old, but I know that God loves me so much, He would do anything in His power for me.

Sara

I love this poem. It was very good! It was a good inspirationa dn tells the story of anyone who has asked God for forgiveness. Great job!

Abigail

As a new christian this poam just touched my heart. It is a poam that left me filled with awe because it truelly shows the wonder of Christ, the joy of being forgiven, and the wonderfull power of God's love.

arjun

i should say ur poem wrightly describes god's nature-ALL PARDENING

mary

We should all believe in angels . this piece put you right where the writer wanted you . and enabled you to feel its words

Selena

this is a pome done by a special person. she was my aunt. i love her and i love this pome. to me i belive she put all of the life in to this. i cry every time i read it.

mylene

Very great!Something worth to share with others, especially those who doesn't know that faith in God can be expressed in poems too like prayers.

Tracy

I just want you to know that this poem has touched my life in more ways then 1 and I want to say thank you I enjoyed this to no limit I even sent this to my mother I hope God blesses you really good! Also I hope to see more from you Thank you Tracy K.

Evangelina

This poem had me overjoyed in tears. It was very uplifting just when I need that boost.

i really like your poems, there really inspirational. Amazing. Keep up the awsome work!

CHERYL

ABSOLUTELY ONE OF THE MOST (IF NOT THE MOST) BEAUTIFUL POEM I'VE EVER READ! KEEP UP THE WORK. I'LL BE WAITING FOR MORE!

Candace

This poem reminded me of when I rededicated my life to Jesus Christ. Your poem it just what I felt like.

suzie

this is a very good poem as i feel that i'm all alone and this peom has cheered me up

violet

GREAT! I felt it in my heart.

katie

hi i'm 14 and i thought that was the most heart warming poem i have ever read in my life. that realy gave me a new perspective. thanks for your beautiful use of talent. you really know what youre writing. you touched my young heart. so i say again. thanks

reese

AWESOME!

Marc

BEAUTIFULL, I can imagine being in Heaven and in Gods pressence, visually effective.

gene

I'ver always wanted to fly unterthered to any device, and one day thanks to theLord I will. This poem only helps to make me want it more.

Mary

Beautiful!

CREA

I FELT THAT THIS WAS AN AWESOME POEM! I AM PRINTING IT AND GIVING IT TO MY GRANDPA, HE'S A CHRISTIAN, I KNOW HE'LL LOVE THIS!

angela

This poem really touched me.

Victoria

God's wonderful works are reaching out to people through you. GOD BLESS YOU AND DONT STOP REACHING OUT TO PEOPLE THROUGH YOUR UNFORGETING POEMS.

Anil

Hellow my name is Anil and Im an Indian. Iwas very much inspired while reading this poem. Thank you WhtDove.

James

Thanks for this poem! If you haven't been at the point when you could go no further, if you have never HAD TO just give up all hope of making it alone. without being sure even that God Almighty would have mercy, but just sitting or going on about not even resisting sin or trying to 'win', then get ready to wait for the real shock & awe, the marvel that the true Savior is SOOO able to deliver it's brings such victory & grace that you could never have believed that much was possible! Keep writing!

Amen! What a wonderful, uplifting poem! And so refreshing to see a vision of all powerful love and forgiveness rather than damnation. A beautiful God expressed with no hint of weakness. Keep upthe good work!

i love it a lot good job

michelle

I think the poem is very touching. It tells the truth. A lot of people in the world who suffer. Need to know all this. I mean about God's love

this one is very good i sent to all my friends

Rogue

Well if there wasn't a way before there is now. You're poem is awesome, it totally describes the feeling you get when He grabs you up under the arms, though sometimes unexpected. You've been truly blessed with talent.

Netta

This poem touch me.

Aggie

Hey this poem struck me very heavily it sounded like when it happened to me. Earlier this year I went to a camp called Deeper it was a christian camp and I really felt gods presence in me and know reading thi poem i remembered how much god has given me and how much he loves me. Thanx Love you all.

Dannett

This poem is one of the best I have heard in a long time. you done a tremendous job. Keep up the good work. God Bless!

Chris

I loved this poem. It was perfect for what I needed for.

Trish

This poem I think touches a part of God's love for us. It shows us what a great God we serve. I love it!

James

WHAT A WONDERFULL POEM MAY GOD BLESS YOU

peggy

this is a sweet poem and i love it

Peggy

I think it is a great poem. I have shared it with my friends and family. Keep up the good work.

julie

I thought this poem was very beautiful and well written.

Gilda

Beautiful warm poem. Full of God's Love.

Christine

This Poem really tuched my heart! It was just beautiful!

Annette

Great Job ! Please keep up the wounderful writing. Thank you so much.

mystic_mallory

This is a wonderful poem.

DONNA

TOTALLY AWESOME!

Gena

this is cool that all i can say about this peom.

Boshing

I really liked this poem not just because I am Christian but anything written about God his discendants or Angels {you get the point} is a gift.

Sherry

Amen!

Connie

I really liked this poem of deliverance it brought faith, hope, and good cheer to a very sorrowful soul. I loved it. I intend to use it for my Eng. class at Ivy Tech college for my poem analysis.

boshing

i think this poem is very touching and if God had read he would be very proud WhtDove has written a lot of beautiful poems

Ashly

This poem is very touching...I am a beginner on believing in God and this poem touched my heart...Thanks for writing a beautiful poem

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