About the Poem
I found something on the Internet - something that I never expected to find. It has brought me great happiness, and it is tearing me apart. All at the same time.
Have I Ever |
| by Ravenz23 |
| Have I ever told you that if I sit really still and silent, sometimes. I like to think I can hear your heart beating in time with mine? Have I ever told you that when I watch you speak to me through lines and cords, and bytes and ram, I imagine your voice, whispering into my ear? Have I ever told you that I wait out each day in anticipation, wanting only an hour or two, just a second in space and time, to feel close to you? Have I ever told you that there has been times, when I ached for you, ached for you so badly, that the emotions overwhelmed me.. and so I sat and cried? Have I ever told you that sometimes, I will reach out, touching your name on this cold screen before me, wishing I could reach in and pull you to me? Have I ever told you that after the first time I heard the sound of your voice, thousands of miles away, I sat up all night, turning the conversation over and over in my mind, examining it, like some newly discovered species of flower? Have I ever told you that I would give everything up, just for one night to be able to lay near you, to feel your chest rise and fall with each breath you take, just to know that you are real? Have I ever told you that I dream of you often, I dream of you reaching out and touching my hand, simply to let me know that you are there, and everything is okay? Have I ever told you, have I still yet to tell you . . . that I love you? |
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670 Visitor Comments
corriene
This poem is amazine, so amazine. Basically u have taken the words right out of my mouth to which I have been meaning to say to someone which means so,so much to me. Their are certain parts that relates to me and makes me want to cry. I love the fact that you start the sentances with,"Have I Ever Told You". you've made my day, as I have just emailed this to a very close friend of mine who means the world to me. Thank you for this poem. You know if your poem is as wonderful as it is, u must be a wonderful person also. )!once again thanks so much. You take good care and good luck. Keep doing what you do best. From Corriene :) X
Mary
I enjoyed it a lot.
tom
i really loved your poem cuz it is the way i feel each time i talk to the woman i met on the net. it will still be months before i can actually be with her. i leave a few days before christmas to be with her. but till then, i will always feel like this. your poem is great and has so many feelings in it.
Crystal
That poem was so touching it actually made me wanna cry. Keep it up and you will surely touch more hearts than just mine
Ryan
really toching one. he/she got the perfect words . keep it up!
jamal
Me and my homies are really diggen this peom. I sending it to my girl. I bet my gramma like it to. She cool. She the wrapping type. My grampps isnt down with that though. He like classical music like justin T. I want to be a wrapper but my moms says I have to do better in school. Like in speling or grammer. See ya latter man keep it cool. P. S. the ladys like the peoms that why i started to like them.
Ashleigh
I understand the way u feel all the way. I've been in a long distnace relationship for two yrs 1 month n 5 days now. yes it hard, but wen u look at it u understand how strong u rlly r for gettin thru it. all i have to say is stay strong for both of u n tell everything to each other.
Stephanie
That was fantastic! It was beautiful to read
cherry
i met him at the net. we've been in touch for more than a month and he'll be here tommorow to meet me. the poem washed away my fears coz i thought before that my feelings might not be true coz i thought falling in love with someone on the net is a crazy thing. i cant stop my tears while reading the poem coz this is what i felt and now im sure that i love him and i wanna be with him and im not scared anymore. thanks!
Bob
A poem of our time it hits the right spot for internet romance
mark
its just a very very touching poem for cyber lovers totally well written and touches the heart the poet might have experienced cyber love it has been written from the heart
Debi Anne
I really love this poem, cause I did find my love on the internet, and he does live far away from me. Each phrase, has touched me so deeply cause it feels like it was written for me. it brought tears to both me and my love. thank you for such a beautiful and meaningful poem.
Daphne
I loved this one. felt as if you wrote about me
Shenay
This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem that brings back everything i felt at the beginning of my first internet relationship. I went to get my love. all the feelings and the longing to be together was fulfilled and it was so worth the wait and the money it cost to travel thousands of miles. If you are still in the same position i urge you to do the same. experience what i did. It will never leave you. we got engaged. maybe you wil too. keep writing and hoping.
mboniseni
I have red the poem called "HAVE I EVER" i read it to my girlfriend & the next moment she was all tears! I want to thank the person who wrote the poem. PLEASE keep it up u have take my relationship to the next level.
Nathan
this poem is absolutely a work of art. i when i read this i was so touched because this is exactly how i feel about my gf who lives on the opposite coast of the US. we were talking on the phone and when i showed her she cried with joy. i hope this author continues his/her work and know that with this poem alone, they have touched the hearts and lives of many
brianna
its so good
CAROL
THIS POEM SAYS ALL THAT IS IN MY HEART. I HAVE FOUND MY LOVE ONLINE . THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME THE WORDS TO LET HIM KNOW .
Laurie
I think this poem is beautiful. I can relate to it well.
barkha
awessum!. explains just the way i feel for my bf who is miles away from me. and our realtionship started online. really the poem says what i feel. great expressions. keep penning more. good luck
Amanda
Amazing! I somtimes have a hard time expressing myself to my boyfriend in Colorado. This poem is perfect. Keep up the fantastic work!
DaNiElLe
OmG this is sooo real i have an online romance and i feel so close yett so far away. i needed this person to realise how much i loved him so i sent him this poem. i think it helped him understand how much he actually means to me. i love him so much thank you who ever wrote this. so very true and touching.
Joy
Spoke to me about a similar situation. You captured the passion conveyed over "bytes and ram" as well as the longing for another human.
Eunice
Beautiful! Very, Very Beautiful!
Minelle
This poem captured my heart. it conveyed my feelings exactly. i met a guy online and i realise now after reading this poem that my feelings for him are stronger than what i thought. i actually had tears in my eyes when i read this poem. it was exactly how i felt, what i thought, even the words are exactly what i have already told my love.
alana
this poem touched me deeply, as it describes my own feelings after meeting someone very special online. We exchanged words and these words were poetry to both of us,we see each other regularly now and are very much in love.
Brenda
nice poem
Briana
I am just now experiencing first love it is an amazing thing. Like they say, your best is your first
MIke
That was a wonderful poem thank you. I was looking for something that said just how i felt about an incredible person i met online and you pretty much said it all right there :)
pam
My fella sent this to me a while back and it moved me deeply. there is so much in it i can realte to. it seems to encapsulate how we felt and still feel having met on the internet. Thankyou for riting it Raven
tasha
this was a pretty poem. i really liked it ^. ^
tom
thank you for this poem
maria f
i loved this poem cause once well i knew this guy who i have seen but i didnt know him well so i created this email and talked to him like for hours and he would think i was another person and well i didnt fall in love but some how when this joke thing ended i felt something was missing some how i still dont know why or what happened but i love ure poem!
Naomi
Have I ever told you is exactly how I feel about someone I talk to, But for some reason I cannt get up the courage to let him know how I feel. I truly love this poem,its me. Thank you so much for sharing Hugs Naomi
Tiffany
I love this poem it sure touched me in the heart.
clare
i loved this poem so much. i have been seeing a guy for 8mos online and its finally getting to all the serious feelings stage i am in the UK and he is in South africa we are going to meet up for the first time this year and your poem really touched me. it touched me that much i have emailed it to him so he knows that poem is how i feel. thanks for such a great poem
Asha
The poem explain exactly how I feel about the person I met over the internet.
Kelly
i recently just found, i believe, the person to be my truelove. i love her so much, but i live in pennsylvania, and she in wisconsin. we talk everyday, and usually talk on the phone for a couple hours some days, but sometimes i just wish i could be there with her, to look into her gorgeous blue eyes and kiss her forehead and let her know how much she means to me and how much i love her. this poem hit all of my feelings head on, so, well done!
ashley
i luv it
Sonia
It is really beautifull, and are the exactly words that I wanted to say to my internet love.
t-lee
i loved this poem. im going through the same thing =/
kelli
This says exactly what I'm feeling! I love it!
maria
omg this poem so tells about what i feel for this guy even if we camt be together
karra
this poem made me cry i love this guy over the internet and i love him with all my heart and all my soul and this poem really tells how i feel inside
Travis
I absolutely loved it. I wish I thought of something like that for my girlfriend.
Guillermo
I liked the poem so much because of many things. First, I liked how the flow of the words seemed to play right along, like a song. Second, I liked how the poem showed understanding of the subject. Most of all, I love this poem because I can truly relate to what this poem had to say.
Thunder
Its exactly how I feel.
Ruth
A very touching peom to which I can relate to.
Amanda
THIS POEM IS SO OUT THERE. AND ITS SO TRUE. ITS HAPPENED TO SOMEONE IM REALLY CLOSE TO. IT CHANGES U AS A PERSON. AND REALLY HARD TO HANDLE. BUT IT NICE TO KNOW THAT SOMEONE LOVES YOU!
Aarin
Hi i like these Poems alot they are so real! 110%! Bye Bye
Robin
It is often so hard to put feelings into words. This special poem says exactly what I wanted to convey to my internet friend. Thank you for sharing it and letting me share it with someone I love.
natasha
I like this poem. it describes the kind of relationship i am in right now. I often find myself wishing and hopeing that one day i will just pack up and leave just to see him. I really liked this poem. I really did.
Cami
I love this poem this poem is alot of whatr i am feeling right now but really dont know how to tell the person but this helped me out alot. Great poem!
rebeca
omg. dat was da sweetest poem i ever herd. i am so goin 2 cry :'(. lovd it man peace. keep it up ;)
Shannon
This poem touched me deeply, I related to every single word and Im choked up. I miss him so much
tom
how prophetic, truer words were never spoken
Eze
Dang that would have to THE most sweetest thing iv ever read. Gosh! Nice one!
cris
really feels wonderful / great when reading it. VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM
benna
I really did love that poem it did touch me really it did because I like this one boy at my school and I think that he would like this poem if I write it for him. the poem is really great I enjoy reading it and it makes me think about my old boyfriend
Roni
Thank you so much for the beautiful words
nikkki
This poem touched me to cause I am going through this with a guy i had dated for 2 years and still miss
Twila
I have sat here all morning, reading, looking for. something. and finding nothing until now. When I read this, my heart took pause and my breath shallowed. Thank you, for letting me know that I'm not crazy for feeling like I do. Thank you for the knowlege, that you felt it too.
Henny
Beautiful poem - I felt it, because I'm having a wonderful long-distance relationship and I need to tell him how my heart feels.
harold
It is very real
Patricia
This is very good and heartfelt! It says exactly what I feel about my friend. Great poem! Thank you. Pat
Janice
A wonderfully heart-rending work! I cried when I read it. You have successfully captured the agony and bliss of an online love affair. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Angel
I love your poem! It really touched my heart and really made me think about my boyfriend, who i love with every breath I take. I think it's dumb when older people say that youth love is "Puppy Love" Because I am 16 and I love my boyfriend sooooo much, and he has also proved me that he loves me so much too. He has reached in my spirit with an open heart and has completely ulluminated my heart. Your poem made me get the same warm feeling that I get every time I am with my boyfriend. Thanks; it really made my day!
Rishi
I got my true love by this poem. What else can I say?Thank you so much to the one who has written this enchanting poem. God bless you
Duane
Nice poem,
asheni
really inspiring. im in a long-distance relationship so, it touched me so much tata keep it up ravenz
Kerry
thank you for capturing what it is like having a long distance lover! This helped on some of those long nights
Johnnie
"GREAT, GREAT!
Mick
I just loved this poem. I met my current girlfriend on the internet and we plan to marry in the near future. This poem says everything that I wanted to say but couldn't find the words. Thank-you.
JEREMIAH
THIS PEOM I LOVE IT. I REALY LOVE IT.
kanica
nice romantic poem. good for people in love
Karen
This poem says almost everything I am feeling for my love at this very moment,It brought tears to my eyes and pain to my heart because I also ache to be near to him . Thank you so very much for having this posted
Jackie
To the author of this poem: This is the best I've ever read; it "fit" my relationship with my newly found boyfriend. OMG! You are gifted and because of it, you deserve to go on from one degree of success to another! CONGRATULATIONS.
sharon
this really touched my heart and said what i wanted to say to my special friend thankyou so much
happy
its true!
Peter
Beautifully expressed. Captures my feelings precisely.
Kala C
THGAT WAS THE SWEETEST THING IVE READ IN MY LIFE SO MANY PEOMS I HAVE READ BUT THIS IS THE BEST YOU ARE ALSO,ME AT RIGHTING PEOMS YOU HAVE GREAT SWEETNESS IN YOU MIND THAT SO NICE I WISH I COULD RIGHT PEOMS AS GOOD AS YOU CAN GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR NEXT ONE THANKS THATS GREAT!1
Jen
Reading this poem is like looking into my heart and hearing the very same thing. Simply lovely.
betty
great job, this poem was exactly what i was searching for. was trying to find a way to let my friend know how i am feeling and this describes me to a t. Ravenz23 thank u
vanessa
it was like you read my mind. i have been chatting with a man on line that lives so far but it seams like he is right there with me. i love this poem and will tell my friens about. Thanks
alina
i like the poem so much congratulations
rachel
this poem is so true. the same thing happened to me. i started crying when i read this. i prolly sound like a big baby, but we had a fight the otha day and he won't talk to me anymore. i think he blocked me. it's not fair! anyway enough about me. the poem is awesome, you rock. keep writing.
helenhime
This poem touched me very beeply i am going through the same thing. I met this guy on line and we have been a couple for about 7 months now. Even though its going to be about a year till we can meet because my parents are against the whole online bating thing and i am just finishing up high school i still have one more year. But my freshman year of college will the when we finally meet and i am really excited about it. I love him with all my heart and know he is the one that i want to spend my life with. He is everything i want in a guy and can't wait until we meet and he feels the same way. He even asked me if i wanted to marry him someday and i said yes. I can't wait for that day.
Kelly
I have read many poems about cyber love. but i have too say this was the most heart wrenching poem i have ever read as tears streamed down my face , its everything i want too say and more crammed into the most beautiful piece of poetry i have ever read, all i can say is thankyou so much for writing it
jenny
a very nice poem. i can say it 5 thumbs up for me.
d
Thank you, i enjoyed reading this poem and can relate
Anett
wow. breathetaking!
Ashley
Wow this poem really had me to tears almost. ever since I met my online love, I feel that exact same way, it's very touching, you made a really great poem there.
simone
i love this it excelleint
Russell
My God,this is such an amazing poem! The entirity of my so long witheld emotions were there.
Saada
NICE POEM I HAVE SEND IT TO ALL MY FRIENDS.
lady
Oh my goodness. how wonderful this poem was. it says volumes . describes the angst in having an internet relationship.
LERA
THIS IA GOOD POEM=MY FRIEND IN GERMANY=I FEEL THIS AS HE DOES QUITE TRUE=THANK U
Ciara
Loved this poem because the same thing has happened to me recently (which I was very wary of to start with) because I thought it was impossible to want to be with someone that you haven't physically met. So reflects all my feelings and am glad that it can happen. xx
Angeli
I really like the poem,it touches mah heart.
Abbey
I loved this poem. I am in a long dist. relationship right now and some of the parts in this poem are soo true. I just want the poet to know that she or he is a great poet and they should keep writing.
jeremy
This poem was excellent, it helped get my feelings out, as to the way I felt for my girl in Russia.
Maxime
This poem completely reflects the relationship between me and a girl on this planet :)
Cheryle
I share the same experience
marie
the poem exactly expressed what i wanted to say to someone i found and loved through internet.
kia
This poem was excellent! It couldn't have been written any better than Raven put it! It described how I felt to a tee! I am so happy I found this poem! Great job!
hailee
i feel the same way and she put my mind in words i could never have put together
Jasmin
This poem brings back memories of my dreams and thpoughts it ermindes me of my thoughts
Ashley
This describes everthing I felt about my boyfriend online except for the crying part,this poem gets to the heart
Robin
yeh.
Stephanie
This is wonderful, so true, so touching.
Tiffany
I have to say that this poem made me cry for I have found my true love online and yet I am to scared to admit I love them.
ANA
WOW. IT'S A WONDERFUL POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART THANKS FOR SHARING IT RAVENZ23
Alexandra
I love your poem, I cried after I read it because I've been in this situation for 3 years now, and I wish I could be with him so much.
Victoria
this poem is so true :((
Lamont
This is a very good poem to express your true love for your girlfriend and or spouse its one those perfect things to say.
denise
very good and very true, been there
tiffany
very good poem
mireya
i really enjoyed reading this poem. 1 out of 10 i would give u a 9.
robin
I loved this poem! In 1998 I started an online friendship with this guy. never in a million years did I think it would lead to anything. We were friends online for 3 years. He lived a couple thousand miles away. me in California and he in Illinois. Three years ago we realized it was more than friendship. Relocation and 2 years later we are engaged and will be married in dec 2006. SO THIS POEM MEANS A LOT TO ME! Besides hitting home it is well written and speaks to the heart. Keep up the good work!
JOY
I have a love just as you speak of. I have never known a love such as this and your poem just reflects to me that anything is so possible. Dreams are our subconcious showing us what reality could be, maybe?
Courtney
Ilove that poem it really came from the heart i think that person who ever wrote itshould be a peom writer . Love, Courtney Rayford
Pat
What a wonderful poem, it touched my heart, made me cry.
alisha
all l can say that lts one of the most touching thing l ever read and the author has got a great way of putting things. thankyou for those words the only thing l can say ls love lt.
Jennifer
it touched me so because I met my current husband on the internet through an internet chat line while in prison and that was exactly how i felt about him while he was there. and then to be able to finaly hear his voice just made me want him even more. This was a great poem thanks for publishing it.
ineke
I cried, because its exactly what I feel at the moment, and maybe never can tell.
Marie
I look forward to the day when I can send this beautiful poam to my special person, It dose say it all and more.
Brandon
looooooooooooooooooooooove it! ide give it a 9. 5
keith
this poem was very touching and i liked it alot
Falletta
I loved this poem it expresses everything that I feel for this person I met and feel in love with online. Thank you, thank you. thank you! I sent it to him and I know he will enjoy it. We are meeting soon and I can't wait! Pray for us.
james
Hi Ravenz23 Loved this poem alot explains in great detail a relationship i had with a girl online infact she was the 1 who asked me to look at it jst want to let u know u are extremely talented and hope u never stop wrighting poetry. love james xx
Pam
Wow, such a beautifula nd passionate poem that just says so much for the way I am feelling for my internet bf. Thanks for sharing
Shelley
I loved this poem, This touched me. this is exactly how I feel at this moment. Awesome job!
Mari
I totally totally loved this poem. I met someone online nearly a month and a half ago and this poem sums up what I feel for him. The great news is that he feels the same way for me. And in twelve days, we will be meeting each other face to face for the first time. I can't wait.
max
GREAT!WONDERFUL!thnx for sharing with us, i loveeeeeee those lyrics
Melisa
that is a beauitul poem when i read it i think my love who is far away from me and i can only talk to him online and i wanna be with him so bad
Sugar
I have felt every word in this poem. It was like it was written about and for me. It is a great poem. Thank you.
marla
OMG how touching, I have experienced this myself and this poem describes my feelings to a T, thank you so much for sharing it
silly goose
Loved it in return
tammy
Oh my gosh this is great. I Absolutely love this poem. It is like the person that wrote this can read my mind. Everything that is in this is what i have felt. This is awesome. I have met this great man, full of so much love to give online. Oh this is so great. Thanks I am so excited about sharing this with him.
Ng
Wow, this is great! I can feel the emotion in it ! Awesome
Linda
this poem reminds me of my special someone
Grace
I loved this poem. its exactly what i wanted to say to my boyfriend. cause i met him online and so far its going great.
catherine
I love this poem. It explains what its really like to be in a cyber relationship. I have been there before and this has really touched me.
Gail
Oh, my gosh - you have expressed so beautifully what I am now feeling - that inexplicable joy and pain that comes from finding such love over the net. I hope that you tell your love how you feel.
Anuar
Very good Poem keep writin' Ravenz23
Teresa
It reminded me of myself and how I feel about someone. Described me perfectly and how I felt.
Kirara
This Poem Is very Good I can feel what the poem is feeling. Very good job
Krystal
I give it a 10. i maybe only 17 but me and my love are planing are getting married and i started crying when i read yur poem it wonderful
tanya
THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE HEARD ABOUT CYBER LOVE . I UNDERSTAND THE WORDS ALL TOO WELL . AND IT IS JUST LIKE THE AUTHOR DESCRIBED AWSOME.
Tessa
I just think it is awesome. Big thumb up
june
I could not believe this poem when I first read it. The words could have been written by me. They sum up exactly how I feel at this time, the pain, the overwhelming sadness at the thought of never being with him. To have written this, you must have experienced it too. Very touching indeed.
Danielle
this poem is just so touchin. it just remindes me of that o so special someone+ how much u think of them every day + that you'd do anything to be that person for just a day
Jessica
wow this is great! i have my love in Egypt and I'm in the U. S. we have had our relationship for a year, and this poem helps me realize that I am not the only one that feels this way. this poem pushes me to keep my hopes up, and understand that it's destiny. and with my baby, I know it will all turn out for the best soon! Cus we will reach that day when we first lay eyes on one another! I love you Amr! wait for our moment love, know that each day God gives us is a day closer to the moment when we will hold eachother and never let go! and 4 the ppl out there, here's an advise. don't ever give up! fight for ur dreams and u'll soon notice what you've acomplished!
janelle
i think that this poem is one of the best poem on the internet
LaLoopy & cheza
AAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW DATS SOOO SWEEEEEEEEET I know how that feels too, i just broke up with my boyfriend cos he lived far away and it got too much, *sniff* BOOHOOO DATS SOOOO SAAAAADDDDD! *SNIFF*
Adela
I like this poem a lot. I am having a long distance relationship and I feel the same for him. congratulations again
Oriona
this was anice poem
Samantha
Could just cry over and over after reading this poem.
Karen
Hello Ravenz23, thanxs for the great poem it touchd my heart so much. It could have been me sittin writing it it's how my thoughts are everyday since meeting my on-line love. He is so speicial to me. A BIG THANXZZZZZZZZ
Barney
I am amazed how this poem mirrored my thoughts saying the very things I feel so deeply.
Helen
I reli like yr poem. It touches me a lot. I can feel wt u say.
Gloria
omg. this poem is amazing. exactly how im feeling right now. its amazing!
MUSA
Wow! Isincerelly like this poem as it rekindles the glowing splints of LOVE in ma self. It's great.
Renee
I vote this the best love poem I have read for a long time. It touched me so much that I almost cryed. I love the poem and whoever wrote this is a very good poet!
JUDY
easily the most touching poem in this catagory,, thanks
Heather
I LOVED IT. it was exactly the way i am feeling right now and i appreciate you writing it because it really touched me thanks Heather
Kim
this is so totally sweet keeping wrtiing
Verity
OMG this fits a situation i was in and still am. you are amazing with words i wish i could have written something like this it just explains everything so perfectly! thankyou it lets me know i wasnt alone, and welldone it's beautiful xx
katrina
this is one of the best pome's that i have ever read u can tell that it came from the heart and that's great some times i fill the same way lol
Stepha
I love it . its gott my vote . i wanna cry when i read it i feel that exact way bout the stituation im in rite now. its the best)
Cindy
I met the love of my life on the internet. We have been having an on line love affair for 9 years now. Your poem says everything I feel for this wonderful person I love. I cried when I read it. It is a beautiful poem.
Nesett
Wow This is wonderful I have been looking for the right words to tell the one I love exactly how I feel about him. Its nice to know I am not alone in this world with a internet romance.
sara
this is my life story =]
Ardit
very romantic bravo :)
holiday
great words
Charlotte
beautiful! It brought tears to my eyes. You are very talented! Keep up the good work!
Lauren
omg i love this poem sooo much! i have something like this going on right now and its so painful! but its worth it because i love him and i no he likes me :)
malerie
you brought tears to my eyes!
amanda
I loved it. It hits close to home I too met someone online that i fell for but can never have. Not in this life.
CHARLENE
IT TOUCHED MY HEART
liz
wow that is wow it moved me i love it!
victoria
i love this poem it reminds me like pooooooooooooooooooo
Stacy
This poem brought tears to my eyes and I sent it right away to him. I thank you so much for having the courage to express your feelings and sharing them with everyone else to relate too. Ive been searching for poems to relate too but some just missed that one thing. this one has it. but I'm still wearching for a poem that fully relates to our story. I'm going to see him very soon after almost 2 years. I think the only way for me to achieve that poem is to ask someone to write it for me with all the information or i do it myself. Ive tried and i came up with a poem, but it still doesnt say enough. N e ways I'm rambling. TY so much ^_^
susie
i realy like it
ANGELICA
perfection.
Jakey
I got tears in my eyes when I read it . Because I think I'm in love with someone I met ON THE INTERNET, and it's one of those things where you think you're the only (sane) person that's done such a thing . this poem helped me see that doesn't have to be the case. Thank you.
Gena
I have fallen in love with this poem. It clearly states just how I feel about this one person I have yet to have met. I really likve this poem and I hope to hear more from you. Thanks
Emil
Wonderful poem! I have experienced love over internet and I flew to another country to meet her and it was all so good. This poem is exactly everything I've felt and experienced.
Bill
This poem is right on track on what I just went through. I met a beautiful woman on line, we talked,and after time met for coffee. As time went on seh told me that she had a male friend, who was "JUST A FREIND NOTHING ELESE. She said that if she spent time more time with me she knows she could be very happy. Well that never got to happen, you see they were just words, she is no deeply involved with this man, I have asked her out at times before this took place and always got a flat"NO I CAN NOT GO. The pain of that is still deep in my heart, this poem is beautiful and yes withreal meaning
Annette
About a month and a half ago I met this really terrific man on the internet. Since we have been talking things have gone from just friends to more. We email,chat and talk on the phone, but I long for so much more. This poem has touched my heart because it says just what I feel. I never thought that I could love someone so much that I've never met, but i love this man with all of my heart.
lorna
Great Poem !
Jessica
I love this poem! I can totally relate to it
shannan
for people like me its not easy to find love. im the shy type who is afraid to talk to someone the opppiset sex. its also hard wen ur self contious about urself. i no i sholdint but i am. online i can b myself and not b shy and just talk about ramdom stuff. some people might think its crazy to fall in love with someone online but for ppl like me its easy cuz u get to b u and not have to b shy cuz they cant see u.
dana
omy god taht how i fell wen i see a relley good friend taht i like alot idow no y but kep up the good job fom dana
Claire
This is so truthful. it captures all the emotions experienced by such a delicate and unexpected love
Julio
i just wanted to say that this poem is very kool cause i have the same fellingz 4 a girl i havent met before and i your reading this. I love you Carrie
Ashley
this poem really touch'd me. and i hope others. Luv'd the poem its really cute. one of my favorite poem's on here.
Joanne
Wonderfully written. Have felt, am feeling, these exact things, so this brought tears to my eyes.
Raja
hay the author should be awarded right away
Melissa
Aww. This poem is soo sweet. I can relate to this poem soo much. Thank you for putting this on paper, Something that I can only feel but wasn't able to put down on paper.
Molly
Can relate to this . brilliant !feelings come through these words this sums up my feelings right now
Michelle
Your poem is amazing, it describes my relationship with my boyfriend to a tee. We've been together 8 months now and we've never met. We talk everyday over the net, sometimes on the phone. I love him so much and I know he's the man I want to marry but we have yet to meet. But that day's coming soon. In August. :) Once again, I love your poem, thank you for sharing it. Michelle
Crystal
I know exactly what this girl is feeling, i love this poem and i sent it to the one i love!
David
I'm really impress.
Stephen
it is excellent i have a girlfreind on the net and that is how i feel thank you for putting it into words i almost creid thanks again and you gave me an idea for a peom of similar value but of my own devise but it is just a thought tahnk you for speaking someting so wonderful
Christel
i like it has the feeling of being inlove and longing for that
Rebecca
this explains me and my boydriend like so much.
kit
knowing how you feel, i understand and have great empathy. you managed to stick to one thing (wich most poets cant seem to do =\) wich really made it alot better. you did a good job writing it so any one going thro something like that can feel attached to it, like they wrote it themselves, lol, or its just me.
Minaye
i have found this poem very descriptive and interesting. it tells exactly how people feel when they are in love and far away from each other.
babygurl
this was s phenominal to me that i cried. i actually felt what u were feelingwhen u wrote this, it was like u were talking right to me telling me about the sit. im in. thx so much great job.
Tabatha
I really love this poem. I found my love on the internet and he is across the country. We have talked on the phone and this poems reminds me of those times and how many times i would like to reach out to him.
Gemma
This poem allowed me to relte to it so much, all of ythe things in it apply to me and my love. We met online about 4 months ago and already i can't imagine life without him.
Alma
Hi! Just wanted to say that you did a great job! Your poem is wonderful. It really touched my heart as I also had an online relationship. Thanks for the poem! I wish I could also write one like yours. Keep it up!
nat
i love this! sent it to someone special, as a lot of what you wrote could have been what i have said in my heart a thousand times. thank you, it is beautiful
Sara
im a a 16 year old girl an i write poems all the time. But your poem really lets someone know that u have feelings for them i sent it to a friend an had others to read it they all said it was really good so keep up the good work.
Quadeisha
This poem reminds me of the relationship I am in now. This poem is straight to the point and is so touching it is also an excellent piece of art
Kaneisha
I just love your poem. I dont really know what to say but you know I met my boyfriend online too and I really love him but do you know I had just found out that my boyfriend cheated on me and I cried. I love my boyfriend alot and mayb you can help me write a poem to him with me so he can understand.
Efe
This poem is gangstarr. Intrinsic.
Lindiwe
This is beautifull, I love it
MPHO
the poem is very good and i love it very much.
Justin
This is really, really good; it reminded my girlfriend and I of our own relationship.
Leah
Ravenz knew exactly how to express the words i couldn't. I fell so hard for a beautiful soul online that I know will never be mine but still if I could tell him, this would be what I would have wanted to say.
Daniel
Touching. Great poem, great sentiments. Great writing.
stephanie
WOW! I loved this poem it says all the things that i am feeling toward this one guy.
tikeela
oh my god i just cried when i saw this poem this person is wonderful in writing i made i copy of it and had it frame.
Jasmine
It made me think of me and my boyfriend and I started to cry. I love it.
natalia
I had met on the Net nice friends. One of them sent me the poem. I had the same emotions. love. tears and breaken heart too. That's wonderful world of illusions and dreams. But we can make"some dreams come true" for real if we want.
Me
OMG. I can't begin to say how much this hit home with me. love accross the wire is so beautiful. and so hard.
DANIKKA
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. IT SEEMED TO REACH IINSIDE OF ME AND PULL UP EMOTIONS I TEND TO IGNORE AND FEELINGS I HAVEN'T ADMITTED YET.
maureen
Moved me to tears, i have fallen inlove with someone from my past who lives in Australia now and it is tearing me apart.
Jessica
I think that the poem is just great and never stop writeing them.
jenny
I really like your, it touches someones's heart who can never tell or speak personally.
Candy
This says it all. wish I could share it with the one I love
elsa
simply superb!
Gen
I know EXACTLY how that feels. mine is 5000 miles away from me. very touching poem ;) XxX
yeraldine
This poem is very touching. I had a really good friend from school, and I only talked to him through AOL. I fell in love with him and I would just touch his sn sometimes and feel like he was near by. rating:10 excellent
Alicia
I loved this poem! It really fits a situation I'm in. The poem explaines my feelings to a T. Great job!
Jean
It is very touching!
Rachelle
WOW! this poem is absolutely beautiful! i can relate to it, because the love of my life lives 5 hours away. we have yet to meet but i know when we do it will be magical. people say that you cant love someone you have never met, but you can, and i just wanted to say your poem was absolutely wondeful, and you should write more!
Narenzgal
Beautifully well defined of one's true feelings from deeper core of the heart. my soul always thirsts for these sweet words. This is not just a poem; IS A BEAUTY OF HEART & SWEET MELODY. I'm very happy to spend my sphere time reading an amazing poem. I can't wait 2 share this poem w/ my guy. DATZ A GR1. Thx 4 sharing w/us. (. _. ).
DOM
Beautiful I have just sent these words to someone very special in New Zealand. They summed up everything and more that I have wanted to say to her from here in the UK Aroha
Emma
This was such an awsome, yet unique poem. I really enjoyed it very much and I hope you write more soon.
Elaine
It feels so good to know that I'm not the only one who feels so strongly about someone I have never seen face to face. Reading this poem felt like someone had took all my emotions and put them into the perfect combination of words. Thank you so much
Kat
To the Author This poem hit me and that's why I realized it was perfect for me and the one I love. you did a great job. thank you
dallas
i have read your poem several times over and it's brought me to tears everytime, it really touched a side of me and a very big part of my life right now with a very wonderful gentleman john i have met online. i have to believe in my heart we will become 1 one-day
Becky
This poem was really sweet and suits me and my boyfriend loads so i sent it to him and he cried. Thanks :-)
Dez
Omg. your words were beautiful and had so much meaning to me. You said the things I've never been able to, and you have given me hope. My online relationship right now is not so well, but you've let me see it all in another light. I'm glad to see that I'm not alone in how I feel. Thank you so much.
nadine
this is the most touching poem ever i feel exaclythe same way and im still crying over this poem
lovin
very touching
Riza
This poem says everything what i have to tell my boyfriend, whom i just met thru the net. The feelings, the longingness, the loneliness, the happiness are embedded in this poem. I can say, it is an excellent piece. I commend the author. BRAVO!
Gwen
Having found long distance love on the internet, your poem touches a spot with me. We still live apart because of circumstances but hopefully all the things you mention in your poem will soon just be a memory. Good Job!
Louis
This is just the poem I have been looking out for. It express exactly the way I feel about my girlfriend. Magical
Hoa
So touching, and so real. Thank you!
Reg
awesome
goodangel
I realy enjoyed reading your poem. I am a poet too. I sometimes feel this way when I have spoken with others online. I can't wait to read more of your poetry. Thanks. and Have A Great Day!
ReyNa
I reAlLy LIke Thiz Poem. ITs coOl
Jan
Ravenz23 Thank you. I have tears rolling down my face as i write to you. I guess you and i have been to the same place. A poem full of truth and emotion Thank you again
Melody
i really likethis and may use it here in the near frture to tell someone special i been talking to online that i care about them more then they know. thanks
Ghada
This is extremely perfect poem. It touches my heart. I really admire it so much. Sometimes I need to say these simple words, but I can’t organize them like that. It’s excellent poem. Thanks
peggy
Awesome your poem, i LOVE it! May god bless you, much luv from germany!
Michelle
This poem just perfectly explained how I feel each and everyday since I too am in a internet/long-distance relationship with someone. Those feelings of longing and hope are just a constant reminder of what we can have with just a little faith and a lot of patience for the day you can both finally meet. Beautiful poem, I loved it :)
Cathy
Very nice and i can relate to this one!
Peri
Very nice poem. I was really feelin your emotions wit it. I'll be putting my poems on here soon.
Joana
This peom realy touched my soul and explains the feeling that I'm feeling listening to The Cure and dreaming of someone special. Best poem I ever have read.
Rusty
this is a reallllly nice poem one of the best ive ever read.
Catherine
This poem captures cyber love. It expresses my emotions that I could not put into words.
Simon
hi ihave an online gf who i love very much and this poem jus man it sez how i feel its great the author is genius
Emma
A really nice poem. you convey how you feel in your heart so well.
rachel
i met someone on a game i play and we've been talkin with each other for a like a month or more now and i just love talkin to him hes just so, i don't kno, its just the highlight of my day when i can talk to him. i really wish we could see each other hes really sweet hes like everything i ever wanted in a guy. this poem describes perfectly how i feel when i talk to him, thanx so much for writing it! it beautiful!
Alina
My God, this poem is so true. I am amazed! and experiencing it.
Ocean
Wow. I am out of breath when I read this poem. How true. This poem brings back the exact feelings of anticipation and loneliness I feel when we can't be together. It really does hurt so bad it makes me cry. I met Lance more than a year ago and he is so so far away. But he is always there for me through good and bad time.
bayani
your poem is great. :) your brilliant. keep it up & God bless.
Roxy
I just wanted to say I love this poem. It's really really amazing. It touched my heart deeply.
Ken
Hello, On reading your poem I was struck by some of the things you referred to, they being related to my own situation. Thank you for expressing those words that we would all like to put so well in poetry form. ken
Domingo
this is one of the most down to earth Poems iv seen in a long time. bravo
Chirstina
wow i love your poem i feel the same way about this boy adam whos in 9th grade and im in th but im 13 and hes 14 god i love him so much i just dont know how to tell him! could i give him this poem?? PLZ
Simonrex
i did enjoy this poem in a way it kind of reflect my own inner thought about online romance and dating keep up
april
i vote for this poem because it is beutiful. it says things i have felt in my heart but never been able to set into words. this poem speaks of feelings too deep to describe.
Julie
I really like this pome it says everthing that I feel for a guy that my friend is try to get me together with.
Lynne
this poem brought tears too my eyes, i once felt that way about someone i met online, was too scared too tell him how i felt, wish i had seen this poem then, we might still be together thanks for sharing
K
Very moving. Grasps the words out of my heart & head that I am not able to communicate. Thank you.
martin
Excellent poem, really enjoyed it. Thank you Martin
kim
i love this poem, it touched me. everyting about it i've done b4. if i should rate this poem from a scale of 1 to 10 i would give it a 10!
Elizabeth
I love this poem! It reminded me of this guy who I met and lives only like 20 miles away, but I fell in love with him. and the day we went out and had a picnic and we both had SO much fun he went out to dinner with some friends and he got a little drunk. well he asked a girl out and they have been dating for like a week and I didn't have the chance to tell him how I felt. Well i sent your poem to him today and well we'll see what happens.
kherstyn
i love your poem it touched me so much
Lara
Perfectly eloquent. It brought tears to my eyes.
Lynne
This Poem speeks my mind out. I recently met a wonderful guy on the Internet and we chat on messenger everyday. We intend to keep in touch and see what life has in store for us. Thanks for this poem, i have just sent it to him, i know he will love it.
chantel
wow
Carolyn
I saw this poem and like many others here it reminds me of a predicament I am also in right now! The man I love lives at the other end of the country from me and we plan to meet very soon which we would have done if it wasnt for him being ill recently! I think of him every second of everyday and cant get him out of my mind. We talk on the phone and the internet almost everyday for hours on end! If you ever see this Rob! I LOVE YOU!
David
I really impress by this poem, it is very useful to someone that may not have an opportunity to face a lover face to face that is a powerful tool to use to confront someone.
trudy
this poem touched me to the very center of my soul for you see it describes exactly the way i feel about someone on the net i know i can never have. thank you!
dee
I think that this is the best poem ever writen. I truly mean that. It really touched my heart, and my soul.
linda
wow. this really moved me.
Melinda
Oh my God this is so true! I met my boyfriend over company email and he's 400 miles away. This poem brings back the exact feelings of anticipation and lonliness I feel when we can't be together. It really does hurt so bad it makes you cry. Bravo! Excellent!
samantha
this poem is really good. it reminds me of someone
Skgge
This poem is AWSOME! It expresses the exact predicament i find myself in . right now ! :( 12/10 :-) excellent !
kate
this is a great poem. i can relate to perfectly. i met this guy on the internet and we got to knwo each other really well, then when he was supposed to come and see me for the second time he never showed up. and we havent talked since so, i love your poem.
Stephanie
this poem fits into exactly what i feel. i'm in love with a guy who lives miles and miles away from me. we talk on the phone now and we really care for each other. he doesn't know what i look like but he says he that it doesn't matter. we're planning to meet in 5 months and i can't wait. write more poems ravenz. you're really good at what you do.
Kim
Wow! This poem describes everything I feel for someone I met online. we have been talkin for approx. 3 yrs but he's afraid to meet. and its tearing me up. this poem is wonderfully written.
Wizzy
this says everything I am feeling lately. TY for writting the words I could not express to the one I love so far away!
Tammy
You touched my heart with your words. As i was reading this, tears rolled down my cheeks. AMASING!
mo
Such a relief to know I'm not alone in the feelings this poet expressed. Sometimes feel like I'm going crazy! Thank you.
kristen
All i have to say is esquisite!a butiful piece!as if you took the words out of my mouth!i kow the felling!it is wonderful!you have a tallent. pursue your dreams!
Majesty
This is the best poem I ever heard. This peom could win any poetry contest there is.
M
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM!
Chelsea
I cannot begin to explain the beauty of this poem. The night I read it, I sent it to my online love, who my greatest desire is to meet him one day. I love it almost as much as I love him! Thank you so much for this beautiful poem.
Christine
This poem was absolutely beautiful. It touched my heart so deep, I cried. I have found the woman of my dreams on the net, and to express my feelings as this poem does, would be a miracle. I love it and thanks to the author. You have a great mind and heart
Ashmaly
your poem was very deep and i realy like it and i give you props so you are good.
molly
i think that your poem is really well written. i can relate to most of your poem from when i was with my ex boyfriend whom i met on the net. thanks for a great poem.
sakura-chan
i love dis poem it makes me think of some1
kristina
a very touching and meaningful piece of poetry
Angie
This poem was sent to me from a guy I met here on the net. He sent it too me two years ago. Our relationship has ended but the poem has held memories of what was once was and although it will never be. The poem is a memory I hold dear to my heart and for that I thank you for writing it.
daisy
i can really relate to this poem i have this feelings about a guy but u couldnt express it in words until i read your poem, thanks for writing such a wonderful poem.
Anon
I'm going through this right now, except i met mine last night, but reading this makes me think of everything that we did and talked about, and i do miss him right now.
Jo-anne
I moved from Australia Tasmania to Denver Colorado after a 5 1/2 month on line affair it really does work. I have been married to my internet lover for 4 years now"Love is to have a great attachment to and affection for. To have a passionate desire, longing and feeling for. It is an intense desire or emotion for another, to feel warmth, fondness and regard for the other person or thing. "
basma
It is sweet dream to love online. More sweet is to find and read this poem that describes so well your dream. Write more poems, raventz23, u have real gift.
anonymous
omg. this poem is so beautiful. it really touched me. it really is beautiful. i was almost gonna cry when i read it. plz write more. that was really good :)
t'MA-ra
it seems as though you've extracted all my thoughts and put them on paper. This poems hits straight home. Its absolute. It really captures that yearning to be with someone.
claire
wow. yea that is how i feel. i like someone but i have never met them and he lives miles away. wish he was mine. wish i could tell him that i like him.
Zyan
Its an Awesome Poem. Just what I was looking for to tell my grrl How I WAS FEELING. Way To GO Ravenz!
Lluvia
*APPLAUSES* WOW! This is by far just one of the most amazing poems I have ever read. GOOD JOB! Keep up with the great work! :)
aadya
i loved it. i loved it so much that i sent it to that special someone in my life whom i met thru the net. and yes, he told me he felt just the same way. so really, u and i are going thru the same stages in our own different relationships and i hope urs works out wonderfully and ur 2gether soon. gosh i really wanna say so much. this poem is the tops. its the only one in this category which really makes me the feel the true love behind it. it is. just wonderful! life IS love!
Janeva
this poem has touched me deeply i 2 share a loved one and i know that my heart is true with the feelings i have for him i would give anything to be by his side i hope you write more and i wish you well with your relationship
Jamie
It's really nice to know that there are more people out there going through the exact same feelings as me. Great poem.
Debbie
This is a very sensual poem. It has touched me in ways,only I know inside. I have dreamed and thought these very same thoughts. You have a talent expressing them for me. Thank you.
Tawny
U are a magnificient poet. I have NEVER read a poem that explains my feelings better then this. Thank you and keep writing
christin
this poem really spoke to me. it sums up eveything im going through and feeling right now, because my boyfriend moved away with his family and we have been dating through the internet and letters for almost a year. it's nice to know were not alone and other ppl are going through the same thing. thank you and lot's of love
Amy
I liked this poem
J
I loved this poem. It portrayed exactly how I feel about someone I met online. It's almost as if I wrote it myself! It's a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work!
Salina
i just want to cry right now. i want to sit down and bawl my heart out. i've met someone so perfect, so wonderful, so far away. you speak from my heart and touch me in a way that i cant possibly thank you for.
Goosey
I realised a lot of things after re-reading your poem. that most importantly I failed to tell him how much I love him and need him in my life. Thank you for clicking my goosehead.
brenda
beautifully written. it touches the heart. if i were a credic, i would say 4 stars
jim
This poem is so right on and its everything I feel about my Lynn. WE have fallen so much in love and are so far apart that you captured both of our feelings like you were right inside our minds. Thank you for letting me tell the person I love how I feel thru your poem. If our wish ever comes true then this is the poem that will be read at our wedding. Thankyou so much.
S
Very touching and true, something I must say I feel everyday.
Ravenz23
I wrote this poem a few years ago about someone who I connected with so deeply that there are no words to describe exactly what it was like. Unfortunatly, it didn't work out between us. I have been offline for awhile now (trying to rid myself of my internet addiction ;) anywayz, it didn't work. haha. But, I just came across this old poem and was absolutly AMAZED at the response it has gotten! Thank you all so much for your comments, I am glad that maybe, just maybe I was able to touch someone out there with my words. And to you, Warchild, wherever you are. I still think of you, and I will always wonder what might have been
Raven
I LOVE this poem sooo much I started crying when I got down reading it because I feel that way for my boyfriend right about now
ole
it is one great poem love it!
Mia
This beautiful poem speaks from the heart of a soul that has truly loved online. I know I have been there and am still there, living it every day. Never thought it was possible, but it is. to love and want someone so much, and having never met him, and to know there never will be another like him. To have your heart crying for him and your arms aching for his touch. Your poem made me cry for the feelings were so real, so much like my own. Thank you for this gift of your poem.
Kim
I really understand this. she did a beautiful job on it. I know how she feels because i really think i love someone but i just long for us to be together and i wish i know if he felt the same. I just hope that someday we will be together it just hurts so bad that i do not know what his voice sounds like and how he feels. what he really looks like. in motion because i have a picture of him and i just love to stare at it. i understand it. it is very good
Z
I am living with my internet lover, but these words capture much of what I felt when we were apart, as well as what I feel now. I am missing him now,and reading this has mad me sad that I am not with him now, but also happy, for I know we will be together in not too many hours.
ashli
this is exactly how i feel about someone.
Nuku
My gods. this poem is one of the single most moving things I've ever had the pleasure of reading. after the second verse I was breaking down in tears.
bUbU
i feel the same way too.
annin
I started to cry when I read this! I love this poem!
Val
I really liked it. It was so pertty because they wish they were together and that is how i feel with me and my boyfriend.
louie
there is this girl that i like but did not know how to tell her untill i read this pome so i thank you for writeing it it's just the best i have ever seen
Zhanna
made me "sit really still and silent" thanx.
DRian
This was a wonderful poem. Its the only poem on here that really explains how i felt about this person. thank-you :)
flip
wow that was so close to the truth , i thought it was just me. v. nice
Thuli
I have read lots of poetry in my life. This is the 2nd greatest poem I have ever read. Profound stuff!
CB
This poem is simply stunning. I'm currently having a relationship with someone online and this poem sums up EXACTLY what I'm feeling. Thank you.
Blaq
I was feelin this. much luv to you on this
diane
wow! so true, I felt every word you wrote there.
Anna
I have just recently experienced what you talk about in this poem. I have met my "MR RIGHT" online. He is all the way in Italy, in the Navy. and won't be back in the states until March. I have never felt this way about anyone I have never met before, but this poem says it ALL! I know I will be with this person FOREVER!
marsh
boy -this poem hit the nail on the head. says it all
Nette
I rate your poem 10! I really like it because I have a lot of friends that I met over the internet and everything you said on your poem is sooo true. That's kind of like how my bf and I first started. Well we were just friends at first but then the more we talked the more we got really closer. So yeah keep up the good work ok.
lisa
It could have been me writing this veru poem as it is just the way i feel right now and felt before. ten out of ten. this is so classic indeed!
NIKKI
WOW THIS POEM WAS GREAT I AM IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE I MET ON THE NET AND THIS POEM REALLY TOUCHED ME.
Cute_one
Wow, I love this poem, when I read it, was like seeing all my feelings in it, and I'm sure glad I'm not the only one!
Vi
All I can say about your poem iz. " WoW. " =)
Bojan
thats exactly how i feel about someone right,and she's 7000 miles away from me
bren
love this
meagan
Wow its so true too. I mean I have a bf that lives in Pa and I live in NY and its so hard to tell him how I feel because the words are not coming out but this poem Help thank you!
Vicki
I loved that poem it's like it knew others and I exactly. I think this poem is great and an inspiration to express your inner feelings! Thank you for writting this!
Eric
This is THE best poem I have ever read. It relates to me and to the feelings I have for a girl I have known for over 2 years on the net. I love it.
Molly
This is the best poem I have ever read. I love it. I hope to read more of your poetry. I realte to it, and I love it. Thanks for sharing this with the world.
shery
Fantastic work, captures what I feel exactly,
M.J.
hi, i am like, crying right now. You couldnt put in any better words how i feel about the boy i love, you just said the exact things im felling right now for him, you are just THE BEST thank you so much for writtign this!
Marie
Hi baby! That is so BEAUTIFUL I don't know what say!
Mandy
This is the best poem I have ever read. Right now I feel this way about a guy that I met on the internet and so I am going to send it to him. This poem is well written Great job!
Mandi
this is by far the best poem ive ever read and related to. it reminds of exactly how i feel about my one true love, Alex. He is my eternal love in life and death.
Irene
Your poem sums up the way I feel about a guy I met online, who lives over a huge ocean. I heard his voice for the first time recently, and though we are miles apart. to me he is only one heartbeat away, so not that far at all.
Emma
After reading this poem i felt like it was me you were talking about i have fallen for someone on the internet and that explained exactly how i was feeling. It was wonderfully written.
Alex
Very well put and realistic. I can almost feel the pain of a lover pining for his loved one as you describe in the section of hearing the heartbeat.
angel
nice work ravenz23, its what i feel right now in my online relationship with this guy. every word of it. is happening to me. really really nice poem. keep it up!
Jo
I love this poem it reminds me of someone i have learn to love but cant love me in return.
Aimee
Wow. this is a very beautiful poem. the moment i read it i had to share it with all my friends. Ravenz23 is a very talented person! wish i had that gift for writing! keep it up!
Ahmed
Superb
Peggy
Your beautiful poem touched my heart and soul. Thank you for expressing feelings that I have felt. but couldn't find the right words to convey.
mon
i thought this poem reminded me of my boy friend only if it was reel.
Carli
How real the feelings in this poem. well done!
Riva
I love this one. It s so beautiful and descibes how feel for my 'cyberlove'
lizzi
this poem is exactly how i'm feeling right now. ravenz23 ur a great writer, keep up the good work
laura
this poem really touched my heart and made me cry because i met a guy on here and we still haven't met. he really means a alot to me and we are in love. keep up the good work.
Shady
Well, umm. I dont know how to explain my feelings on this, Its just too overwealming. Ravenz23 you have a great talent, please dont give it up. It would be greatly appreciated if I cound be kept up to date on wour work.
Aina
i wish i could write as good as u. thanks alot for writing this lovely poem.
lilah may
This is an amazing poem, it really touched me because I have felt this exact way with someone I recently met. It has been so hard, trying to find a way to express how I feel, this poems says it beautifully! Thank you
Jess
this poem really describes the struggle of love found through the internet. i wish you luck with this man (if it is based on a true situation). thankyou for an enjoyable poem
Sandy
Its as if the author read my mind. It says exactly how I feel about my very special friend. Especially her description of the aching, perfect!
PRIS
WOW. THAT POEM EXPRESSES ALOT. GOOD JOB ON THE POEM, IT'S REALLY GREAT
Hans
It truly is a very beautiful poem, but what srtks me the most is that i see only women's names on the voting list, aren't there any men out there like me who are totally and whoelheartedly in love with someone throught the internet as far as 7000 miles away !
Jolin
i am involved in an online relationship, and the words in this poem were never so true. i was awestruck the first time i heard that beautiful voice of his, i still am. and i too find myself touching the computer screen and seeing him in my dreams. ravenz23 you are a true poet
Cara
That poem is so true! Its exactly how i feel. You have a great talent, put it to use.
Ck
That made me cry. I have felt like that since I met my sweet prince online a year ago. That was so touching Im crying. Thank you so much for that. *Applaude*
moe
soooooooooo tender. i dunno how to say it, it is beautiful. more than that
S
Just the way i feel
KT
this is exactly how i feel, its comorting to know that me and my online guy arent the onlys ones going through this. i didnt think falling in love on the internet was possible till i met him. this poem made me tear up casue the likleyness of us ever meeting is slim we are seprated by the atlantic ocean.
Kayla
I am in an online relationship, we met through a friend. This is exactly how I feel right now.
ALEX
thats exactly how i feel about someone right now. its so good this poem. it really makes you think. i love it.
Daniel
I write poems about everthing mostly love but I don't think i could have said that better your very insightful your a true poet. I relate to your poem i feel the same for someone on the net.
Kristy
You have captured everything i feel in your poem. Im glad im not alone.
Sarah
this was by far the best poem i have have read in my life. i started crying with the first few words because i know exactly how it feels so love someone that much even though u have never seen them
Tricia
How utterly complete. Only someone that has loved thru a screen would know of these feelings. I'm not going to read anymore today.this was that good.
nay
I cried when I read this poem just because it was everything I felt for my internet lover. Its absolutely beautiful!
Rich
Amazing, that's all i can say, i read this poem and it just overwhelmed me!i sent it to my g/f and she loved it, thank you so much for writing it.
crissy
this peoms tell how i fell about the man i care alot about and love, hes makes me feel like i have a reason to get up every morning and a reason to sleep at night just to be able to dream about him.
ralph
i really loved this poem. it reminds me so much of a girl. that i have yet to meetin person. great poem you wrote everything you were feeling in your heart,and thats wonderful.
wild_angel
i love this poem. it is exactly the way i feel about someone i have met recently on here and i sent it to him. its beautiful bravo
michelle
this poem is almostjust like my life. i met my love but he had to go back to india and now the internet and the phone along with letters is all we have. and that poem is how i feel
Joanne
Every word in that poem struck a chord with me, nice to know I'm not going crazy and the idea of being in love with someone this way is not completely ludicrous after all
Delia
Well what can I say those are the most beautiful words ever it says just what I feel Great Job
Amanda
I have an online relationship, so your poem truley touched me. It literally made me burst out with tears. Every word rang true. Unfortunatly I cant write poetry, but oh god you can. Good luck to your life, your relationship if your still together and to your poem/s.
Shyangel
I think this poem is so beautiful,I sent it to my love I ment on the internet,love is possible in any form,hopefully,one day I will meet my love,I wait in anticipation of that day,till then I will continue to send him great poems like this one to keep our love alive.
K
I was going through old e-mails and my b/f that i met on line had sent me this poem a long time ago and i re-read through it and just smiled as it's so so true of my feelings towards him still. We're still together and going strong :) I loved the poem!
Shyangel
AS I READ UR POEM TEARS WERE FALLING FROM MY EYES,I THINK IT'S REALLY BEAUTIFUL,LOVE ONLINE IS NOT IMPOSSIBLE,FOR I HAVE LIVED IT MYSELF,IS AS TRUE AS IN REAL LIFE.
MARTHA
PERFECT
sky
o my god i feel the same way about someone. you rock at writing poems!
teddybear
This is exactly how I feel, Ravenz23. Thank you for writing this one.
Andy
A touching and descriptive poem that I don't think sums up my distant relationship better anywhere else. A great piece that expresses each word with great love and feelings..Good work.
Tina
Before recently.I would never have thought it possible.but, now..I'm a believer.
Lara
LOVE IT
Sue
Had tears in my eyes when I read this. Very well said!
Amanda
This is the first and only poem I'll read today because I don't want to spoil the way it made me feel. I very much identify with the author's feelings. I know the craving, the need to be near that soulmate
Cammie
I loved this poem and its exactly how i feel about my g/f Ty for writing it and keep writing
Julie
This poem truely desrcibes the love I have for my online boyfriend. Although he lives in Washington, and me in New York, I dream about him every night. I love him, and this poem is very true of internet relationships.
kiki
this poem was so beautiful..it touched me a way i would've never imagined.it almost made me cry since these words describe exactly what is going on in my life right now..
nicola
i needed words to send to the man i am falling in love with online, you gave them to me, i've sent him your poem, thank you
JessicaRose
I just met the one I have been searching for (online) . and although we only spent one weekend with eachother in person so far, it was so magical and breathtaking! Although we have met already. this poem still brought out what I think constantly. You are awesome. whoever you are!
Amy
I really like your poem. I think it sounds really nice!
lixy
Being a Chinese girl I don't want to express my feeling explicitly I think this poem just tells my feeling about one guy on the net.It's so wonderfuly and i have sent it to him.Thanks
julia
That poem totally made my heart twinkle! It gave me chills from the beginning all the way up to the beautiful closing.
Audra
Thank you so much for putting into words the feelings I have in my heart for my new love.keep up the wonderful works!
michelle
This poem is so beautify. It gave me this feeling inside that I can't even explain. YOu have extrodinare talent. It's so touching it almost made me cry.. Keep those beautify poems comming
isabella
Just beautiful and captures what I am experiencing myself right now. The hope, the dream, the anticipation, and the ache :-)
Paotina
As many others have commented, this is so true of my feelings of my love for my special man I have fallen in love with onlone.Thank you for sharing
Jim
A very heart felt poem . It really touches the heart in so many ways . Thank You
Catherine
The only one to catch my attention. really wonderful !
MzRed
Wow, i had to stop and catch my breath.it really struck a nerve..its beautiful.
Zach
Wow. I am speechless on how true that these words feel to me. Great work here.
Rolls_Royce
As a man almost 70 years old, I am now experiencing a love for a woman that I dated 50+ years ago
vickie
that poem WAS WONDERFUL ..you have a way with feelings and words thank for this poem that touched my heart and helped me to understand how i feel about my internet relationship thank you
Jesica
Very, very pretty.
Dawn
I'd just like to say that reading this poem brought tears to my eyes. I have been so in love with a guy over the net for a year now and times I feel like nobody could understand that even though I've never really touched him I still love him with all that I am and would do anything to simply touch him. Thank you
Michelle
Thank you so much for creating this inspiring poem! It reflects everything I wanted to say to my new love who is 1000s of miles away, but couldn't put to paper myself!
Lara
Wow! Your poem was truley touching.
Nina
this poem is soo true for love on the internet.. its really great and very touching..
Danielle
This poem was terrific! I am falling for a cyber romance, and you took the words right from my mouth, Ravenz23. That was wonderful.keep up the good work!
Smee
I love the fact that it strikes so close to home. It's like u came in2 my head & caught exactly wat i was thinkin, great work Raven really loved it! Keep up de great work.
Mandi
Your poem was really touching! I sent this to my online love, and he really liked it. I love this poem! Keep up the great work!
ArMeNiAn*EyEz
LISTEN THIS POEM IS THA BEST YET THAT IVE READ, I HAVE AND STILL AM GOIN THROUGH THA SAME THING, AND THIS POEM EXPRESSES EVERY ONE OF MY EMOTIONS. IM REAL GLAD THAT U WROTE THIS ITS AMAZING NO JOKE. THANX A LOT AND UR A GREAT POET, SO WRITE SOME MORE
andrea
That was a great poem! At one time i felt that why about a guy online too.
Delores
I love this poem so very much. I am many, many miles from my love. And I do wish, sometimes, I could pull him through space to be with me.
pebbles139
this poem is awesome .thank you so much for sharing i truely enjoyed it ..keep up the good work and best of lucky to you!
Nathaniel
This poem was amazing, it reminds me of how i felt.how i feal
Emily
Your poem was awsome! It hit so close to home. I find myself asking the same thing each day as I relize i'm falling for someone over a thousand miles away! It was great!
Misty
That poem was so. great. I met this guy on the net and we both really really like each other. We talk on the phone and everything. He was the first guy to ever send me roses. Ever word in that poem is how i feel about him. That is why iam voteing for this poem. It was really great.
james
it's perfect. it describes the way i feel about a wonderful woman i've met recently, and i am falling in love with her. this was great. thanks.
Angel-Girl
It was stunning! When I read it for the first time I knew it was exactly the way i felt about a special friend of mine...
zo
oh man this poemis so extremly cool i love the writer of this poem this is very beauty full poem thanks for writing this poem
Dane
Wonderful. It describes exactly how i felt about my relationship. I've been lucky, we've now met despite 6000 miles and plan a future together but i've sent her this to let her know that she is still here in person each time my screen comes alive.
Amanda
I think this poem was incredible.I am in love with a person i never met also, and i describes everything i feel for him.
Jodi
man! tears! thats excellent! i'm feeling this exact feeling right now in my life!!beautiful!
Syida
Awesome poem.it really touches my heart.
satu
That poem made me cry. It is so true. At the same time it makes me feel sad and happy. Thank you for helping me to say my loved one what I feel..Thank you :)
Marlene
My heart is with my love...alas, he lives in the States...and we met on the net...We're going to marry and this poem stole my heart, thank you!
Richard
This poem was great 'cause it gets right to the point with clarity and the right message to ease your heart and emotions. I love it very much!
Mikki
I loved the poem! It honestly describes the way i feel for my internet boyfriend, Mike.i know he feels the same way! He had told me a million times! And this poem is beautiful in words and feeling.
gloria
i can't believe that you actually know how I feel about my husband.. thanks and keep writing!
Genie
W.O.W..! This is the best poem i have read on here! . you did a good job , keep writting & I tottaly relate too these situations what you wore trying too say..
Milla
This was something much more..
vera
i really love this poem. It touches me every time that i read it,and it makes me think about Dylan. Thank-you ravenz23, you made my day a lot better.
Angel
I truly am moved by your words you have a beautiful gift of expressing them . dont ever let that gift die for our sake please=) thank you so much
Bobbie
I met 2 years ago CLint this wonderful guy perfect for me in ever way were soul mates . But he lives all the way in Australia and me in Louisiana . and this poem describes exactly how i am about him , one day i hope ill get to meet him and let him know in person words like your poem.
Rachel
Thank you so much for sharing this poem.It is lovely and really touched me very deeply.I have read it over and over again.
bethanie
this so relates to a guy i know, that we live in the same state-but we feel millions of miles apart, and i sent this to him, and ends up he cried-that is so sweet.tnx for writing this poem, bc it means sooo much 2 me
Katrina
This poem was really good, and when reading it you can feel the emotions, and you can feel the passion of the poem itself. I really loved the poem, and I hope to see more poems on here from you Ravenz23.!
xterra
Simply a beautiful expression of what so many others have found and felt unexpectedly in an online relationship. I wish I could send it to the one I have a special bond with, but I am afraid to take the risk just yet. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem that has touched so many of us!
Shirley
I love the style you wrote this in. I love the content. It speaks from truth,I know because I am in love with a gentle man who I met online. We are separated by many miles, but have gotten together once and hope to again soon. This poem is beautiful to me. Thank you for writing it.
William
I thought this poem was very beautifully written, It shows the hidden emotions that many people have, and it was wonderful the way you captured them with words.
nooksie
i love dis poem..its really good..keep up da good word!
iguana
i have no idea if i'll ever able to express it the way you do. it definitely makes me touched and i love it..u got a wonderful talent! :)
lynnda
Beautiful, just so amazing. The words jump right out at you and pull you in. i love it.
AJ
Wonderful, makes me cry all the time.
Amber
I found this poem and automatically thought of a guy I have over the internet. It's a great poem.
Joe
This was a great poem once i read it i just burst into tears thank you for this inspiring moment!
Sarah
What an intriguing poem, I found it to be intense and truthful when feeling drawn to another over the wide world of the web. Desires of touching, feeling and loving that other individual sitting thousands of miles away, a hunger of their touch to only be known by those that have experienced this. Well written!
Monique
the greatest poem of all !
Mike
Beautiful Poem ! It explains exactly how I feel about my online relationship !
kim
I love your poem,it is the best in the world and i want to tell you that my boyfriend love it.Thanks you so much for your poem
Zamani
I am a 30yr old professional who wthought love had passed her by. That is until i met my online mate we haven't met yet but i feel like 16 again it is so nice to have someone fall for what's between my ears instead of what they can see. This poem so aptly describes what i feel and more importantly it elicited the same response from him. wish us luck
Francisco
This is a great and a very touching poem i've ever heard. I would like to say keep it up and try to write a poem about a someone being so broken hearted till someone special came into his life and should him how to love again.
ZOE
this was areally touching poem. i know exactly how it feels i meet someone on the net 4 years ago and he is now my husband i am from australia and he is from norway. this poem just makes all my old emotions reappear the feelings i had before i met my husband. IT JUST GOES TO SHOW DISTANCE DOES NOT MEAN ANYTHING.
Raquel
This poem is so true, This is what i call real love, when u just want somebody:)
Liz
Your poem has inspirade me to send it to someone special that I met.feeling this same.I have for him..I love your poem
Angelina
This poem is the real feelings i have ,i lived these moments for real,i just sended it to my love
Ali
well this is a suplendid poem which descrides all the feels one can have in the world of internet romance!
Jenille
I wouls like to say this poems is one that I can relate tob/c I feel the same way about a person in my like and it is so true, keep at the good work
Zill
was lookin for a poem to send my on line love.this was the first one I saw.Needless to say.I didnt look any further. Thx.
Maggie
What a lovely poem. You captured my very thoughts. I sent this to my own special "love" it is as true for me as I know it is to you. Thank you for sharing!
Laura
Rav, Your poem is beautiful It reminds me of who has been in my heart for 4 yrs. I hope someday I can give him all that has been locked up within.
Dedee
This peom is the best it said everything I wanted to say to the man I love Thank you
danielle
I love you poem wa s very cool.
Cathy
This poem is exactly and to the point of how i feel for my new found love.we met on the net and have grown to love eachother more than anything..I have sent this to him and i am sure he will love it as i do. Thank you for writing what ive been feeling. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
rhondas
I really loved your poem. It's like you entered my mind and heart and wrote down everything I have been feeling. Thank you!
karen
really touching.very true to life
jennifer
Thank You so much for expressing ur feelings like that it really helped me express my feelings to the love of my life that i met online..thank you again
Claire
expresses everything i feel.very emotive.brought tears to my eyes.wonderful.
Mika
What a master piece! Its cute.
tami
i really liked this poem because there is this guy that i met on a chat room and i feel the same way! I think anyone that has a cyber relationship should read this poem its the best!
shuga
OMG! This is such a beautiful poem! It describes my feelings exactly about how I feel about my internet boyfriend Chris. I am completely and totally head over heels in love with him. AWESOME POEM!!
marie
i loved the poem.i could feel just what she felt. the pain of wanting him so bad was so real. i enjoyed the poem-i know it came from the heart-cuase my heart understand completly.
susan
it made me cry
yustina
great poem!
Roddy
I think this poem is really worth reading it.It does mean a lot things that you want to tell somebody.
Kathryn
This poem summarizes beautifully the feelings that my cyber lover and I are experiencing right now. Thank you so much.
Maria
i'm impessed..really.
Flirtybabe1482
Hey Ravenz23... I Absolutely loved that poem you wrote and so did my boyfriend! Me and my boyfriend have a long distance relationship and we met through the internet!When i read him this poem
He liked it soo much and so do i! Hopefully you will have another one like this!!Good Luck : )
ashli
this poem says so much about what ive been through in life its very beautiful keep up the wonderful work. your a natural
jorge
if I didn't know better I'd say raven was watching me and my girlfriend.this poem has hit not close to home but straight into the heart
nicholas
this poem was wrote for me...thanks from 1 to 10 i give it a 10
JON
I LIKE IT
Fran
One of the best that I ever read. Reminded me of myself and someone I met on line. Thank you for posting it.
paola
wonderful !!!
Dorothy
I think that this is one of the prettiest poems that I ever read! Thank you Raven! God Bless you all!
mandy
i would like to say that i really enjoyed this poem, it touched my heart and made me cry and cry. this really is great and beautiful!
Linda
Never have I read something more powerful than this. It is so true. Thank you!
Sarah
wow
suzanne
i meet my boyfrined on the net and as i was reading this i felt so real and so happy. i love this poem
Heather
This poem is one of the best I have read on this site. It touched my heart deeply, I know exactly how this writer feels...I've felt the same way, still do. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
steven
this poem took the words right out of my mouth
Carlos
I am going through the same thing.I found my true love over the internet.
theDave
Oh my god.. I cried. I have just met the love of my life online. Never met but it is so right. You know when you just know? I have loved and lost love online. Lost real and lost cyber. Thank you for this poem so much
martha
this is lovely for my boyfriend was gone out of state. we mostly chat by internet. i sent this to him today. thanks for helping me express my love
Joe
Two words sums it all up - simply impressive.
Angel
It really brought to light ,of the same situation I am in right now. It was very heart wrenching and yet displayed the true feelings of an internet romance and the longing of being loved
Maria
I luv this poem its a relly pretty poem at is truly fact.
Phil
Who could have imagined 10 years ago that we could fall in love screen to screen? Who could have imagined that telephone cables would pour as much energy into our hearts as blood does? Now it is happening and the rules of love are changing. We desire differently; we ache differently; we long differently. I appreciate this poem because it captures well these new feelings.
Eugenia
It's really beautiful and lovely this poem... it's just I'm feeling right now... it's really wonderful...I give you 10!!!
Melvin
I think this is a beautiful poem. I've been reading lots of poems lately, as well as writing some myself, and I haven't seen much that I could really understand, and relate to. This is really a great poem. No rhyming, no real rhythm.. but it doesn't need any. Awesome job on this. I can sense you've stamped this poem with your heart, and I respect that. If I may say so, tell him/her that you do love him/her. If you wait too long, sometimes it's too late. Live life, don't let it live you. Good luck. If you want to talk to me or anything, cause I really do want to meet you, then email me at melo_is@hotmail.com or icq me at 32283336 or search for my hotmail address for msn. Hope to hear from you. Bye.
Tom
Very Very Nice just what I feel...
jeannine
it was great and it reminded of a guy i fell in love with on line it really touched my heart
jim
this poem touched my heart like no other because it tells the story of my life for the last two months. i have met someone very special online and i just love her, i don't know how this is possible but im able to love someone that is 2500 miles away from me. i thank you for such a beautiful poem that touched my heart
ARCHDRAGON
VERY NICE!
james
I'm not a poetry fan. While doing an English assignment on Love Poetry Throughout The Ages, absoulutely bored me. I came across this poem, and i can totally relate to this. This poem is the best and has given a better appreciation of poetry.
Birgit
I really like the way the poem is written! I enjoyed readind it. It expresses feelings very good! Nice job!
danielle
this poem made me think about me and my boy friend......i almost cried because it describe everything i felt.
glory
I have met a wonderful man on line that lives over 1000 miles from me. And this poem expresses the way I feel so well. But I plan to meet soon.
Sammy
I just fell in love with this poem. It put all my feelings into words that i myself just couldn't quite figure out how to get out.
Felix
Very nice Poem Seems that Raven has a hearth
Arpine
By reading this poem, it really showed that the writer had and experience from it. I really appreciate that there are writers that do actually think about Cyber Romance. Thank you very much... it's a great poem.
MAXIMINO
TRULY THE WARMEST EXPRESSION OF HOW LOVE ACT ON THE INTERNET.
Zara
This is the most amazing poem i have Ever read. It describes exactly how i feel with my online love that will soon become RL.
bowen199
I think this is the best poem for its catergory.
Gill
This is so true, I met my current partner on the internet chat pages, and before we met for the first time, it was like having a love that was somehow not real, but now it is very real and we are making a life, together. Lovely, sentimental and very true.
Denise
This was one of the most beautiful poems that truly expressed my feelings that I could send to the one I love. Thank you for writing it.
Tasha
I love the poem.....it's brilliant
deb
no truer words have been written to express the way I feel about my newfound love! thank you!
julie
this peom is awesome. i really like it so did my boyfriend considering we r thousands of miles away from each other
PF
Wow that poem sucked ass!
Julie
That was absolutley beautiful! Well done!!! keep on writting, coz you have talent! I loved your poem. Later.. Love, Julie xoxo
Nakul
As you said , the poem is really beautiful in every sense . Its meaning is even more so for those kept apart by distance .
blinkerz
i love your poem. I can so relate to it.
Amnesia
these are feelings only someone who has experienced this could know. and they have been captured perfectly in this piece thank you
kirby
The reason i had to vote for this poem is because it is so lose to my heart. I am in love with someone i can never see and never touch...but maybe one day.. Kd
Brandy
It was very touching and sweet. It was very melancholy too. I sit here in hopes that this couple will eventually be united.
Pam
I sat here and cried and cried when I read this poem. It brought home all the feelings I have my heart for my internet friend.
Shell
I think that this is an excelent poem. I kept it short and sweet.
Kelley
I LOVE IT!!!!
Yoriko
This poem is wonderful. Good job, Ravenz!
Richard
I really love your poem. It help me found someone that I truely love. Thank U for writing this
Tiger
This is the best poem I have ever read!!
Richard
hey your like me hehe stuff you say is 101% true.. you must fall soo much love with her hehee. i like it keep it up.
Roxann
beautiful! just beautiful! keep writing your poems.....there very good,,,
C
It's great! Has alot of heart and soul...
heather
This poem rocks. Internet love is strange, but real...
linda
this poem is lovely and says the words that sometimes you are scared to say
wendi
i loved that poem...it really hit home..i too am in love with my cyber boyfriend..who will actually be here with me in just a matter of days..good luck to ya and keep writting
Bethanii
I can relate to your wonderful soulful poem as if I myself had written it.I wonder how many people's lives you have touched on besides mine.
Jen
This poem is totally awesome...while reading it my emotions went wild, felt sooo real.
evelyn
omg!! i felt every word! only because i have been there. and what a wild world it is.. god bless!
dee
i really loved your poem. i feel like that almost everyday. u put my feelings down like i couldnt, its just kinda nice to know that there is someone out there that feels the same way.
Kim
I love this poem! It says everything i have wanted to say to my internet boyfriend. We were definitly met for each other and he just loved it to!! Thank you so much for this wonderful poem!!
Katie
Perfect. You captured everything.
jjv
this is explosive and really hits the mark with a vibrant flurry of words.
BJ
Awesome poem.
Bob
We met in a chat room. She came in for help and no one helped so I did, and that started our love affair. She is thousands of miles away. We talked on the phone..But your poem describes it beautifully,Thank you
natalie
This poem touched me in so many ways.With every word that was written was like it was taken straight out of my heart.My feelings are such the same towards my love which lives far away and we also met on the net and fell in love.I am just thanking the author for writing this poem so much.I love it and hope you keep writing such great poems!!
Max
well.....it's simply one of the best that i've ever read
Tammy
I really like this poem it is very warm and inspiring. thank you
gaby
one of the best poems i ever read about cyber-love
ScarlettNL
I thought I was the only one........!
Robin
I'm not a poet...but I coudn't have said the words better myself...thanks raven...I sent this to my cyper love.
Rosamary
I like this poem. It expresses my own feeling. Thank you.
pandora
I'm going through the same thing in my life so i can relate to what is being said here. keepup the good work. It pulled at my heart strings knowing i'm not alone.
Mandy
This poem describes exactly how I feel about my Internet love. I identified with it in so many ways and reading it reminds me of him!
Sandi
And in this, I can say....I know how you felt. excellent.
kali0617
very realistic, hit close to home...
M.
This poem is so true so real and expresses exactly what I feel about the man I have met online
ssypress
what a beautiful, beautiful poem. It brought back wonderful memories Thank you
irene
Has the author speaks my heart beats with his words....Bringing emotions that touches the soul... Taking my breath as I read.....Touching my heart as it beats.....
Kristin
This is a really good poem, it reminded me of my relationship. I can definitely relate to it, almost made me cry.
Harley
Nice poem. It made me inspire again. Thanks for that. She likes it too.!!
claus
very nice work....nothing else needs to be said. CH
Chris
What a beautiful poem,it completely expresses my feelings for someone very dear to me,but so very far away.Thanks Ravenz23
Brian
My father once had a book entitled "Other Men's Flowers" which was a book of poetry collected by someone who was not a poet. This poem makes me wish I could write poetry and not have to use "Other Men's Flowers" to send to my beloved Luisa. Beautiful - it brought tears to my eyes.
susie
Lovely,you have the wonderful knack or capacity to say what many may feel, think, hope or wish for, or try to deny. thanks for sharing your gifts.
Don
Excellant ....thanks for writing this
sadpsycho
THIS POEM IS DA BOMB!! IT TOTALLY DESCRIBES HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS ONLINE ROMANCE I'M HAVING...THIS POEM IS #1 AND THE AUTHOR IS DA BOMB~!
Nareman
This poem has gathered all the emotions I feel at this moment in my life. Thank you so much. I too love to write and have written something very similar but not so sweet.
Hridi
Nothing could be closer than what you have expressed in this poem with such simplicity of words yet so deep in the thoughts. Really loved it. Congratulations. All the best. Hridi
Giselle
I can't believe how beautiful this poem is. Congratulations Ravenz, because this are deep words, and just as me, there are a lot of people that feels the same way. =0)
CRISTINA
THANK YOU TO SHOW ME EXACTLY WHAT I WAS TRYING TO SAY... VERY NICE!!!!!!
Kellie
This poem touched me. The words were easy to absorb because I feel what they expressed all the time. My congratulations to the writer as I think this is a fantastic poem for those of us dealing with these circumstances.
moon
hi, i just loved this poem. it was so sweet and it really moved me. and i really felt like crying. i got this poem from my best friend online who is a guy. i hope that this poem would lift low spirits and move people like it did to me.
susi
This is a awesome poem. I have felt the same way. I wish I could put my feeling in a poem like you did. It is perfect.
Jennifer
I was sent this poem by the love of my life and i could not help but cry out of the beauty of this poem and how much i was able to relate to his poem!! it was amazing!!!
Ien
These poem helps me with my poor knowledge of the english language to tell my dearest internet-friend how I feel.....
Russell
Thank You This Poem was the best to describes the way we feel about each other. We just meet on the internet. Again Thank you
Melissa
This is such a good poem!!
gg34
Touching.
carolyn
this poem is beautiful, and touched me deeply, I have sent it to my soulmate on line and i hope he enjoys it as much as i did
Anne
~just wonderful~ I feel the same for a special person who lives very far away...
Heidi
this poem was the greatest. It gets right to the emotions of the heart.
Sensual
Thank you for this wonderful poem.If ever words were written that speak the truth for those that seek the internet for that special someone,this is it!
Jan
I love this poem , it says exactly how I feel about Ian. I haven't met him yet but I am going to. I sent this to him the night before valentines day. The words are so simple but so expressive. Since finding this poem I have read it nearly everyday and it touches me more and more each time I read it.
Wendy
Every thing that was in this poem is how I feal for Mike! Loved it!
Janice
I'm not normally one for poetry..but WOW.could I ever relate to this one. The author said the words perfectly.
lula
I think this is a beautiful poem.
Ann
This is one of the most beautiful poems and so very true to life it is.Thankyou for this.
Micaha
This pome says every thing that I would ever want to say to the person I love. Thanks your you insightful mind to write something ever so beautiful.
Maria
Beautiful, this poem really portrays the person behind the keyboard, great job!
Katie
This poem is exactly the way I feel about a man that I met on the internet! I could hardly believe there was something that could be written that so truly expressed what I felt.
Laura
That's esactly what I'm feeling right now! :(
Kimmie
There is something about this Poem that reaches into my heart and finds the words I been meaning to say to my love whom I met over the Internet, and many of times we still talk to eachother over the internet..Great Job!
Maria
I love this poem so much.. it is exactly how I feel right now.
Ridvan
WOW! i was truelly moved by those words. I have had many online relationships, and even married someone i met online. These words ring true now as they ever did in my past. Thank You
Hanna
this poem is so true. you did a wounderful thing by making poem so real.
Linda
Wow, incredible.
allison
excellent poem....awww, it stole my heart!
Jeannie
This was very good.
suz
Your beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes.thank you
Florence
I enjoyed this poem so much and it said just what I was feeling and wanted to say to someone special thank you ..I love it
Joyce
In this poem .. Every emotion i have.. was written down on this poem. It touched my heart!
Cookie
It´s the best poem I ever read !! It really touched me ! It totally reflects the feelings I have for my boyfriend (who lives a million miles away )!
Mayali
This poem is excellent and absolutely true. I was looking for a way to tell my cyber friend that i love him and i found the ideal way.
Thomas
I was moved to read this work through watery eyes. It is so full of emotion. Wonderful!
Janis
It made me cry!
CJ
I love this poem. I have done and thought of everything that the writer has spoken of. It was well written, and you could feel all the emotions that went into the poem. It was excellent, and by far my favorite one!
Russ
I just began an on-line relationship with a very special woman, and this really hit home? I look forward to reading more by you. You've got the experience exactly.
Sandra
This is a beautiful poem. It says exactly how I feel about someone. It makes me cry. I love it.
Alfred
The poem is indeed excellent. Give us mor of the same.
Brandi
I love this
tracy
This is the most beautiful poems ive heard.
aa
what an awesome poem,, great job
emy
This is one of the most beautiful peoms i have ever read..it is something i can related to so much..its as if someone had taken all in my heart that i couldnt express..and had put it into words for me..
Rhonda
I love this poem..it was very well written and it touched my life.
Brandi
I really like this poem. It truly descibes hoe I feel about a certain guy I met on the net.
Beckie
this poem is wonderful, i have felt it all before and am at this very moment about the most wonderful man i have ever met on or offline. we are making plans to meet when i am legal too, LOL.
nishia
i thought that you poem was good
Davis
Lovely poem
Tony
I have been looking for the perfect poem to send to a very special lady in my life, after reading your poem, i sent it to her straight away, we both love it.
ashlee
You did a wonderful you it speaks out to me b/c i have a major crush on an internet guy! Keep going you have great and amazing talent!
Josie
This poem is beautiful.....
King_O_Diamonds
It was nice and to the point
Stephanie
I thought this poem was wonderful. It explained the exact feelings I have for someone. Thanks for something so beautiful to read.
Coralie
I met someone on the internet four months ago - I live in Toronto, and he in London, England. I have just returned from a three week vacation in England where I met him for the first time personally and we hit it off instantly. Reading your poem just spoke about all I felt before I met him and I think it is such a lovely poem and speaks for those who have met their partners through this incredible thing called cyberspace.
Dan
I'm a male that this poem fits. I just got back from meeting in person someone I met online. I have fallen so deep in love with her, that this poem makes me cry evertime I read it.
Loren
it draw the real emotion of love found in cyberspace.
Jenna
You've done somethin that i could never do...you have writin love on paper...and you have done such a wonderful masterpiece that i could relate to so well..thank u..for just being a person that actually feels the same thing i do about a guy i love online.
Peggy
Fantastic
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