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I wrote this poem to describe the moment I fell in love with a very special man. It has very special meaning to me and I hope that you will like it as much as I.

A Simple Hug

Through body and air,
Feelings shoot with care.

With every touch,
The rush was such:

Sadness striking deep,
Hurt afraid to seep,

Pain in a furious state,
Awaiting someone to open the gate.

A simple hug
Causes a strong tug.

Tears start rushing.
A friend starts hushing.

Feeling another's pain
Leaves a rare stain.

Through it all,
I hear the call.

Love shoots between our souls
Giving us our life goals.

Happy or sad,
Sane or mad,

Painful fears,
Hopeful tears,

Frowns and smiles,
Carry us over the miles.

Life as peaceful as a dove,
What we have is love.

Amazing as it seems,
We will fulfill our dreams.

Thanks to a hug so tight,
We know our love is right.
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3 Visitor Comments

lina
I really loved the poem and i think that u should defenitley write more and put them on the enternet.
Marion
OMG - this is so amazingly beautiful and nothing needs to be said anymore because your words say it all. It's too wonderful to describe. Thanks for such a wonderful, dreamy piece!
Marion
That's just a perfect declaration of love! It's just perfect. Straight from the heart. Thanks for such lovely lines.

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