About the Poem
When all is quiet but your thoughts are loud, you looking upon the one you love and realize that they are much more then the sum of their parts.
I Look Upon Her |
| by Raven |
| I look upon her face lying on my pillow Lit by the light of my bedroom window Wrapped within my gently arms Knowing she will come to no harm I look upon her hair, soft and fair Unable to find the words to compare Answers she has given me in times of pain That love and hope will visit again I look upon her lips, moist and red Giving me life when all was dead She restored my heart when it was lost Melting what was covered in frost I look upon her breasts, firm and strong Knowing that love could not be wrong Slowly moving with every breath Always knowing she was not like the rest I look upon her hips, round and smooth Gently touching not daring to move I fix the sheets with delicate care But a gentle kiss is all I dare I look upon her face staring into mine Filling my body as if it were wine I close her eyes with gentle kisses For she has answered all my wishes. |
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46 Visitor Comments
Scott
this is the way a man looks at a women when he is TRUELY in love.
Paul
This poem is so amazing and true. the way you feel when your so in love.
Fran
So tender. How I wish a man would write such a poem about me.
Haley
Wow, this poem blew me away. It's effects are fantastic. Raven you write such beautiful words, they seem like true angles flying from your heart. and landing in mine. well done!
Jeff
This is a very touching poem, it was done masterfully.
Nick
This peom said everything I never could bring myself to say. A work of art is all that needs to be said
dawn
this poem was so beautiful and tender, a true work of art!
Linoluim
That poem is beautful. My boyfriend gave me a copy of it. to make me feel beautiful and it worked the girl who its about is very lucky
Amie
Oh my God that poem gave me goosebumps! I haven't read anything so beautiful, or something that would give me goosebumps in a LONG time. That is gorgeous
Natt
My boyfriend has a tough time expressing himself to me, and he found this poem, and asked me to read it. he told me this is the best way to express his feelings that he has for me. once i read this,i felt my heart drop. such beauty in words is hardly imaginable. thanks for helping my boyfriend express himself, keep up the good work. you have a wonderful talent and it should not be wasted
Kymm
I loved this poem. I sent it to my girlfriend. When people come into your life & change your heart forever things just seem to stop. When you find someone that can freeze all that & bring warmth back then you know that you have certainly found a special one. Thanks for helping me find just the right words to show that special person how I feel.
Laura
This is the most beautiful poem I have read so far.
Lucy
tenderness speaks volumes - love so much more than words or actions. beautifully written
joker
sorry exchuse my french when i say this.. "A good one mate" 10/10
Jim
Eloquently expressed the exact thoughts for the one I love. I've been there Raven. Thank you!
Donnatella
Poet, this poem is very sweet and I am quite fond of it. You look upon this woman beyond her flesh. You see the 'features' which are not clearly evident. You have respect for her, and I very much admire you for that. Good thoughts, good job.
glori
love is very deep and emotional u express it perfectly
Jessica
the poem was very good i thought it was cool
Kenn
this one reminds me of my wife and how much she means to me
sarah
This is a very beautiful poem. I love it.
Kasia
Very beautiful poem, reminds me of how much my fiance loves me.
Sonja
Such beautiful poetry can only be written by a woman. Correct me if I'm wrong... but to me this poem is about two women in love.
DAVID
I FELT UNSURE OF HOW A PERSON FELT ABOUT, NOW I CAN SEE THAT SHE LOVES ME, THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS DAVID RUSSELL
Ernie
She enjoyed the poem. Thanks for writing on my behalf.
cheri
YOUR POME REMINDED ME OF HOW I SEE MY PARTNER WHEN WERE LAYING IN BED.
Kelly
I really enjoyed the poem i wish some one would have writen that one for me
Danny
I know a very special woman who this reminds me of: she gave me this special love that you have brought to my mind in this poem.
Toby
I closed my eyes after reading this poem and thought of my love. I look at her sleeping head, so serene. I know I could never ask for more, coz she means everything to me!
Joern
How beautiful love can be.. It can hardly be described more beautiful. I sent this poem to my girlfriend, and she was really touched.. thanks.
Cynia
It is a great poem!
AREONA
WOW, I REALLY LIKE THE POEM, VERY INSPIRATIONAL. I WISH MY MAN WOULD WRITE ME A POEM LIKE THAT, YOU ARE VERY TALENTED!
Joe
magnificant job expressing love unconciously!
ammar
Great poems man u were in true love when u wrote it i salut u
Zang
I dig this poem; very beautiful.
Precious
I would love to know more about this author. This is the second poem I have found by Raven. I admire both of them for the musical, lyrical quality.
Danny
This poem is gorgeous and It just expresses so well the way I look at her.
Will
Something tells me Raven has been looking in my windows at night. Great capture of the most precious part of our lives.
Nynni
It is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. It has so much love. Whoever is his lover must be really something special. I wish I could be described like that!
Kitty
The best and most beautiful in the bunch!
Autum
This is a beautiful poem...It made me jealous of the woman whom he was writing about. We allwish to find that specail man or woman. Thank You for sharing your thoughts Raven.
LeAnn
beautiful......sensual...... passionate and yet so very sweet and full of love.....
Kori
This poem really makes you think of the one you love.
Sarah
this is a beautiful poem,.....wonderful,...just makes you wanna go to sleep and enter a world of dreams.
Miss
Superb poem, excellent in every way! thanks!
whitney
Reading this poems lets a woman know that there are still men out their that can still feel this way about us. I loved this poem.
jerrell
wow I've , well the writings right out of my mouth, very true when your in love thank you for the insperation very much.
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