About the Poem

This is a poem about making love to someone for the first time. It will let you see that it is best to make love to a friend that is your lover.

Our First Night

by Dorothy Ware

The first time we touched, you held me so tight
that feeling I felt only felt so right.
Things were moving kind of fast and I felt ashamed
You made me feel so comfortable
and said no one is to blame.

You made love to me that night and also the next day
Things went fast I wondered what you would say,
You didn't say a word just held my hand,
That made me feel closer to you....
you were that perfect gentleman.

We are miles apart and I wonder when I will see you again,
I can't wait till I kiss you, hold you,
and just see you.... my friend.

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26 Visitor Comments

kurinji

Great poem.

Angelica

I LOVE THIS POME CAUSE IT REMINES ME OF MY MY BOYFRIEND AND I CAUSE WE R LIKE THAT RIGHT NOW

Arleane

JUST PERFECT! i cant put it in any other words

Karen

i like this. and this is what me and my husband done the first time we got togeather. that was 6 years ago and we are still married

Dani

I loved this poem as it says everything that im going through now. Well done please write more.

Jewel

Oh, my God! This poem brought tears to my eyes. This poem says everything that I would like to say to my "friend". Ten years as friends. and now. This is it. A+++++

Bobbi

I loved the poem. it made me cry. because it touched my heart.

Princess

i love this poem it touched my heart keep up the good work

Stephanie

This poem is good I like it.

Arianna

All I can say about this poem is WOW! This poem is perfect.

lynn

this poem had a strong effect on me because its the feelings that i am experiencing now so emotional . i loved it .

VICTORIA

I HAVE OVER TWENTY POEMS FROM THIS SITE AND THIS IS THE ONE THAT IMPRESSED ME THE MOST! WRITTEN VERY WELL!

Susan

Hit the nail on the head with this one!Loved it

Valerie

The poem touch me. It make me think of the first time and the first night of my life it was so romantic and nice just the two of us by ourself. I really enjoyed the poem. It enspired me.

Girl

Well I think when I make love for the first time, I would love to give this poem to my b/f to show how much i really care and how much he means to me!

Melis

Oh my god. how perfect!

Having just found my 1st love after 33 years this poem touches my heart. The intimacy we have found for each other is represented in this poem. Thanks!

Donna

This peom is very sexy! it makes you think back to the first time your man touched you! great job.

Brandylee

This poem took every single word straight out of my mouth. very touching poem

Katie

This poem really brought the memory back and I can't wait to see my love again.

Crystal

I really like this poem because it made me think of my true love

Donna

your poem is great, it reminds me a lot of how my boyfriend and i spent our first night together

Shelly

I Just really enjoyed the poem. It made me think of my true Love...

lacreesha

This poem is the exact thing that happened to me and my boyfriend. i can't belive it it's like you read my mind.

Ben

A very good poem, sort of reminded me of my first time, very touching.

Jacky

this poem made me think of someone very dear to me...

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