About the Poem
This poem explores the feelings that surrounded me late one night, when the 'projector in my mind' was playing reels and reels of someone that I love. The twist, as real as the feel, the reality is not the Picasso painting I have created in my mind, but a space filled with questions unanswered, running to, to run away - and the harsh truth that I have to open my eyes. But it is oh so nice, with my lover, in my mind.
The reason for the Act number is that I have written other poems regarding what goes on in my mind.
Still My Mind - Act 1 |
| by Bentwig420 |
| Still it rushes through me, in every pore, through every cell. What is this . . . what feeling is this? I cannot tell, what secrets unveil capabilities unknown to limits. This absolute emmersion blankets my every conscious thought. Drawing you closer, bringing you here. So close to me I dare not say - still not within my sight. I feel your breath, heat penetrating my skin like a hard summer rain. I feel your face, your eyes, trace your mouth with my fingers. You give me breath so close to your mouth, still we do not touch. Smoldering fantasies ignite burning, lust and longing. Desire tempts me. "Move closer . . . " she whispers, "closer, closer. " A paradox? Closer to you, like the finest lace - our bodies occupy exactly the same space. Deeper you come! Taking you in - surrounding me and filling me up- and down- push, shove CRASH! Eyes open, must I see? Truth is now . . . this reality. |
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26 Visitor Comments
Katherine
In my heart's silence, you fill the empty space with thoughts of love and caring. Thank you for your generosity.
Joni
I feel touched by the this poem because it's just how I place my love for my husband, who is going to be doing five years in prison. During his time, I also am doing his time with him, only, I am doing five years raising my 5 year old daughter and our 5 month old baby daughter on my own. However, We are still one in mind and soul, so, I am going to send him a copy of your poem. Thank You. Sincerely, Joni
Raychel
This poem is great it reminds me of when i first seen my current boyfriend and in which i had a crush on him for 2 years and those are all the things that were thought when i looked at him in the hallway as i passed by i vote a 10
Tiffany
WOW THIS POEM WAS SO GREAT IT HAD SO MUCH MEANING TO IT IT GIVES YOU FEELINGS THAT YOU COULD NOT IMAGIN BUT HEY WAT DO YOU THINK?
Tamika
just lovely
Robyn
great and incridible. i loved it
Noreen
Wow! One can certainly become moved to action reading this. Wonderful, thankyou:)
DEANNA
REALLY NICE
DSGB
I could visual this happen. tight joint
LaRosa
this is a good poem, keep up the good work.
lolly
this poem got me very emotional. wow im so speechless thats how good it was!
MELINDA
THIS POEM WOW. YOU HIT ON MY DREAM. TO WANT SOMEONE SO BAD. AND THE ONLY WAY YOU CAN IS TO SLEEP. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
Shereca
This poem is hot.
frank
this is fantastic. has a smooth touch and flow. keep up author
kristi
That was truly incredible!
Anna
Juxtapose this poem beside the painting called "Alone" by Henri Toulouse-Lautrec and the stage is set!
alissa
Wow, it's like you read my mind! Keep using and sharing your insatiable talent.
dianne
thankyou for moving me
Brenda
I love it! Your poem awoke my spirit,very passionate!
ANGLE
it was good
Val
This poem is very spritual. It touches me deep within my soul like poetry should do. Please post more of what you have done. I would love to read more!
Alendryal
This is absolutely wonderful.
ladysweetleaf
it seems someone finally captured for me the reason why sometimes it hurts so bad when you lose someone you love.maybe your poem speaks to me differently than others.but to me it is beautiful.
Leigh
i love this poem cause it reminds me of what i feel when me and the love of my life are getting close together, this poems really captures the feeling and lust of two people sharing so much. if you can't find the words to tell someone how you fell about that, this is the poem to send. it gave me shills just reading it cause you explained everything so perfect.. thanks for writting this poem. please write more like this. thanks Leigh McCormick
suzanne
I think this is deep, thought envoking and again spirtual.
GERARD
IT TOUCHES THE REALITY! IT IS ABSOLUTELY THRUTH, SPEAKING OUT OF EXPERIENCE. I LIKE IT VERY VERY MUCH!
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