About the Poem
The aftermath of pain can be almost physical when you lose someone that you love - A pain that is blind to anything else - Just a world of hurt.
Agonistic Spirit |
| by Jayzee |
| Thinking of you - acid rain falls - or are those tears which burn fiery paths of hurt down my face and on my neck - where I can't swallow or breathe - can this choking be my end? Yes - but the pain has just begun as the heart thirsts for love but only soaks in anguish - which drains it of life - tearing a jagged scar - a raw wound open and screeching - echoing through a tortured mind - then time is the enemy - all that remains is a skeleton of agonistic spirit - singing a haunting melody - "I'll love you to the bitter end." |
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4 Visitor Comments
losergirl
Amazing.
Andre
I got the word. She is over me. I saw it coming for a very long time and looking at this site is one of many things I have been doing to deal with it. I can appreciate this poem because it described what it felt like, when I finally understood that she has moved on in her mind and possibly into the arms of another. And it is times like this when I wish I was blind.
babygurl
You use alot of description and that takes skills! it is hard to let go of the one u love (trust) i know and its been 1 year and u still cant look at another guy.
cammy
very good poem
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