About the Poem

Have you ever felt like something with someone is wrong. You can break up and not know why; This poem explains a lot about feelings you may have had.

What A Life, What A Girl!?

by Pymp4evr

A young relationship can never last long,
To get through some days, you must be strong.
Should have listened to the words my friends gave me,
Too late, puppy love got a grip of my heart and raped me.
I still like her and wish it would get through,
I screwed, so what, whatcha gonna do.
You know what they say, opposites attract,
Too bad with same minds no time to react.
Too much in common with too little time,
Sitting here wishing you'd still be mine.
If I'd have waited just a little bit longer,
The relationship would grow, friendship be stronger.
Never realize the precious time that love takes,
Cause the puppy inside me ain't ready for heart break.
Time heals all, through the best and the worst,
Even when laid out, toes up, in a hearse.
Sometimes I feel stupid even when not my fault,
Cause still intact, though beat up is my heart.
When you melt pure gold, it's as gold as ever,
When you break a heart, it's broken forever.
Time comes in relationships to never say never,
Cause in my heart you'll live forever and ever.

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28 Visitor Comments

Gabby

Thats a nice poem about what you use to feel 4 yuor girl don't trip some one will come soon than you think.

Shirley

your poem was really good its good that you can express how you felt in a poem cuz i wouldnt b able 2 do it!keep up da good work baby boy!

Tiera

I really liked this poem. It reminded me of my own situation with my ex boyfriend. I felt your poem came straight from the heart and you meant everything you said. It was also an inspiration. Thank You!

josie

i like it it also happened 2 me memories don't fade but i wish they would

Aiwanna

It really hits the sole of every bad break up.

cyndi

totally true, boys just never understnad how much they've hurt u, they just think that we hld it in infront of them it's all good but if he really knew u, he'd stick by your side through the break-up. love cyndi

Jennifer

AWWWW. Your poem is gold to me, cuz I have the same feelings inside that be lasting forever. You just need to keep your head up baby boy, and things is gonna get brighter. So I wanna vote for your poem cause it reached the core. -one- J-breezy

Jenna

your poem was soo touching. I put that poem in my profile on AOL and my ex boyfriend read it and asked me if that was for him, and I said yes, and we ended up getting back together. We have been together now for almost 2 months and we are still happy and going strong! thank you so much!

LA NENITA

I loved your poem. It touched my heart. Good work, I guess you had a rough relationship. but best of all ur poem was great LA NENA

josh

i can relate to this poem because it explains exactly how i felt when my heart was broken. I'm 15 and i just feel like this poem is talking to me. This is the best poem i've ever read period.

brittany

this poet is wonderful. i can tell you are not like other boys. what ever girl gets you will be lucky to have you. shes dumb if she leaves you. good luck with the writing hope you write somemore!

Mishika

I think that this poem is good. Many boys dont understands that love hearts.

College-girl

Hey Army Guy. Well I think your poem is good. Hope everything is going well for you. REMEMBER EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON. Keep up the good work on writing and the military. Remember men in uniform are great! :)

wendy

EY BOY I DON'T KNOW U BUT I CAN ALREADY TELL YOU AIN'T LIKE MOST GUYS. YOU PUT FEELING AND THATS WHY IT'S SO GOOD. GOOD JOB AND KEEP WRITING POEMS AND I'LL BE READING THEM!

brandon

hey this is my poem. i appreciate the comments. ive neglected my talents the last few years. ive been in the army doing good things for my country. ive kept a folder of all my work since high school. my friend is holding on to it until i get home. thanks for the comments.

PeDrO

This is a nice poem. I felt exactly what you said in the poem. What i learn is that everything happens 4 a reason. I'm still looking 4 that reason. Later on you huys reading this can later see some of my poems that happened in my life.

Chelsea

i reallt liked you poem it reminds me of me and my ex-boyfriend.

leeann

this poem really made me feel like it wasant just me that was going through all this woth my ex boyfriend. keep up the good work, id love to hear more like that.

LYSA

I hve read your poem more that one time and I love it and I think that you should continue to write poems on love and other stuff. =)

ale

this is totally what i am feeling about with my ex-boyfriend. i know its about a girl, but it totally fits with what i am feeling. i really regret breaking up with him, but i had to for many reasons

mercy

this is a nice poem

Amanda

How Cute!

mya

omg ur poem is the sweetes its soooooooo sad and so true i think u have a real talent

Tasha

this poem was off the chain, its so true

CLAUDIA

really good poem. it describes just how i feel! keep writing!

shenicka

this poem was really wnderful and true to the fact of life.

SHANDI

THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD POEM.

pLaYaKaY

its just awesome and you can tell it's real

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