About the Poem

This poem is a description about how teenagers often feel about others; but they don't have the guts to speak up - so they end all through their teen-age life wishing that they had spoken up.

Love

by Jen, Jess, Jess, & Kate

As I stare at the sky,
I see a shooting star.
I think of you
And all that we could be.

I made a wish
Upon that shooting star,
Hoping you would love me
The way that I love you.

When I looked into your eyes
I knew it was true;
I loved you,
And I thought you loved me too.

Since then you found a girl;
I wish that I was her,
But I am not,
And I won't stop wishing for you.

Day after day,
I wish you would hold me tight.
Kiss me with your soft gentle lips,
And say that you love me.

But every time I see you,
You're holding on to her;
You're kissing her so gently,
And saying you love her.

I love you more than words could say;
I wish I could hold you night and day.
I'll love you always and forever,
Even if you don't love me.

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36 Visitor Comments

McGee

I ike this poem because it reminds me the same thing I went through at the beginning of my school year.

Sarah

I loved the pome I really hope u write some more.

Yezenia

I love this poem because it reminds me of my ex-biyfriend that I'm still hoping that we would get back together but so far it hasn't but that doesn't mean I don't love him from afar!

stephanie

i like that pome because that reminds me of my x boy friend and that is the best one i read so far love always Love Always Stephanie Finch

Shatyrra

i like this poem it reflects on my life and what i used to think when i didn't have anyone or even felt alone with no one to hold me in there arms.

mike

that is very good it is what im going thru

Toni Marie

I love your poem and i know you hear that alot. But i was with a guy for 2 years and i would have done anything to make him happy. Even for the longest time after we broke up. But now he's expecting a kid and he got married without telling anyone. He's only 18 going on 19 in July. It kills me to see them together even though i dont want him back cause i found someone better.

nada

this was a good poem i think you guys should write some more poems this was a good poem!

stacey

omg it reminds me of the time this boy wanted to go out with me wen i talk to him the next day he had a gf but in the end i start seeing this boy and he found i was the right girl for him and made his changeand made it hisself im still with him nowand that vote made me think of him thanx

ANGEL

WHOA THIS POEM MEANS SO MUCH IF U HAVE BEEN IN THE SITUATION I WOULD RATE IT A 10 ITS SO HARD TO EXPLAIN BUT I LOVE IT

Antonio

that poem was beautiful. You deafinately have writting potenital.

Krystal

hey!The reason i like your poem is i can relate. this boy casey hurt me bad. So i know how you feel. But i dont wanna love him but i really do!

jasmine

i like that

dakela

this was a great pome. thank 4 the hard work . it touch me in a alot of way.

Regat

I like to write a poem and This poem is the best.

Ashleigh

i like this poem it brings memorys to me myself i have somebody who i could dedicate that to his name is brandon but i dont really love him anymore i do but then i dont

emmy

I love this poem so much it made me cry it is so true and i have gone through something just the same i really love this poem i think its great.

titus

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tara

ure poem was really sweet it sounds lyk wat im goin thru

rebecca

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Raven

WOW! If I could rate this poem, I would give you 5 stars! I really loved this poem and it made me all fuzzy.

tosha

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En Taro

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Brandy

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misty

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Drew

This poem really hits home for me. I think it hits home with a lot of people because of the sentiment behind it. I am going through almost the same thing right now, and I am glad others feel the same way I do.

Nique

oh my god. after the all of the poems that i have ever read on here. yours is the best. and i mean it. i swear to god that as sone as i started to read it i knew that i was about to relate to this poem. i just had that feeling. then all of a sudden i started to burst out in tears, i swear to god. i have never cried about a poem in my whole life. this poem really brought out some real stuff. you is a really god writer. keep up the god work

Ally

I really loved this poem it really makes me feel like i am not the only one going through this problam as much as i try to tell matt i love him i just can't seem to do it i always write poems but none of them ever turn out to be any good and this one explains it all

damaris

that poem is amazing. every word you said its me i feel the same way you do i'm going though the same right about now!

Camila

hey yo! great poem keep up the great job u have a talent. this poem expresses how many teenagers feel.. thnx

Lisa

Excellent poem but the best thing is, is that it is all true!

Theresa

T his poem is so cool. It explains exactly how I feel about a guy

catie

this is so true and cool it makes me think!

Jeanne

This poem touched my soul as it made me realise that someone else knows how I feel! It's beatiful!

CARRIE

I THINK THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD AND IT REALLY DESCRIBES REAL THINGS IN TEEN LOVE

Bettina

I love this poem so much because i was just outside looking at the stars and thinking about the guy i love so much and would do anything for but he dosnt know that i love him so much so thank you so much this is the most Beautiful poem i have ever read!

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