About the Poem

This poem is about how sometimes when you love someone, you realize that you can never possibly have them, but you never learn to live with the pain of not being loved in return.

I'm 16 years old and live in Australia.

Clutter

by Ilab

I'm sitting in my room
there's a mess on the floor
I'm waiting in my gloom
to come rushing in the door.

I'm laying in my room
there's clothes on the bed
I'm lonely in my gloom
that never leaves my head.

You're sitting in my room
you're cluttering my bed
bringing all your hate and doom
as you sit in my head.

You're laying in my room
I'm forced onto the floor
my face shows the gloom
as you walk out of my door.

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21 Visitor Comments

Honey

It was great! and i think a lot of us have been through that same kind of feeling.

kenyate

Don't know you but your was so good

Linds

Wow!this poem really touched me. GREAT JOB!

Jessica

I really like this poem, as I read it, it made me think of my first love and it really touched me!

Autumn

i really like that poem becuase it goes back to me and i really loved it a lot

Stormy

This poem was awesome and its simple words were packed full of emotion!Great job!

niki

good

kelly

that was a very unique way to express your feelings into words

colleen

this poem has real tension and feeling i know where your coming from with this

NORMA

I LOVE YOUR POEM IT TRULY TOUHED ME

Heather

This poem reminds me of how i felt when me and my bf of 2 years broke up. For no good reason. But i have learned to be stronger and i realized there is better out there.

mikayla

this poem makes you think a lot and i feally love this poem keep on writing

This poem explains exactly how I feel about my ex! I know it wasn't written about an ex but that's what it makes me think of.

Jennifer

I like the feeling of this poem, It was really amazing and has touched me in a certain way, I think we all know how that feels, we just can't put it into words

Adina

I think the poem is trully sincere. I agree with you.

Felicia

I think this poem is really really good keep up the good wook

LAURA

HELLO! I'M IN THIS SITUATION RIGHT NOW THIS POEM SEEMS TO EXPLAIN IT PRETTY WELL. IT IS FULL OF PAIN!

Whitney

i like this pome it makes me think

Nikia

I don't know if this poem is about you or not, but I feel like you already know me. This describes the relationship between this 17 year old and I. I am too young for him and it kills me to know that if I were older I could have him. Keep writing. You are really good.

christina

this poem totally relates to what every teenage girl goes through at one point

Nick

This poem hits right at home, I have had this problem for about 6 years, and it is very hard to deal with. This pretty much sums it up in a few stansas. Thank you for the great literature.

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