About the Poem
This poem is about a girl who is so in love with a boy. She thinks everything is going perfectly and that their love is growing. Then one say everything turns around and he starts ignoring her and putting her down.
It gets better again for a couple days. Then he goes back to being mean and eventually they break up. This poem was written about my ex-boyfriend, Danny.
When You Love Someone |
| by Preppie |
| When you love someone so deep inside, It seems like it's so easy to hide. You've loved him for so very long, You would think he could do no wrong. Every day you would hope and pray, That he would always stay this way. He treated you like you should be treated, You thought your life was finally completed. You thought your love was growing true, And then one day it was all so blue. He started putting you down and it hurt, You thought all you were to him was dirt. He started ignoring you and you wondered why, All you wanted to do was curl up and die. You thought your relationship would never end, But that was all so fake and pretend. One night he was so sweet to you, You thought all those things were maybe untrue, Two days later he was back the same, You thought you were the one to blame. He thought the relationship was getting too serious And that you had become a little too curious. By this time you knew it wouldn't last, All the nice things he said were in the past. You thought that you would marry him some day, But this time God wanted to get his way. You wanted things back how they were before, But you knew this couldn't happen anymore. It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock, You heard the news and it wasn't a shock. You knew this was going to happen soon, As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon. |
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1480 Visitor Comments
raven
this wuz soooo good it made me wanna cry cuz my boyfriend ack the same way and it hurts me 2 see how people change just 2 get what they want
SHANTICE
I LIKE THIS POEM!
Jess
You have a 10 out of 10 from me. This happened to me. Ironically, the reason he stopped talking to me, is the person who sent this to me. Keep writing!
Stacey
This is an AMAZING poem it really has touched me and i lovedd EVERYTHING about it.
Jessica
i really like the poem it touch it saying the truth.
crystel
i loved this poem it touched me really deeply it just so real
Ashley
This poem I would rate a ten. I loved it and it is related to my problem tha I am having nw with my boyfriend but, I hope he don't end yp tha way but tha is the road he is headed on as of now. Thanks for helping me express myself with these words.
Brittany
i love this poem, its so tragic yet perfect.
Holly
This poem relates to me and my ex in a lot of ways. He started off the perfect boyfriend then ended up being the worse friend. I am so glad i found this poem it makes me wanna cry.
natalie
i liked your poem because it really touched my heart
York
Love, wat is it to me its nothing to no one life hands u no helps n handle bars so u can keep stable life is ups n downs i loved one guy lol and never again shall i! last chances come and go
LaTasha
aww. i feel like this after my first true love brock up with me
mai
I love it sooo mUCH!
jessica
the poem was great sorry about ur x-boyfriend dany any ways i love the poem
jane
i really love this poem as it sounds like my relationship at the moment. it touches you deeply
Quanya
I WANTED TO VOTE FOR THIS POEM BECAUSE IT RELATES TO ME A LITTLE BIT BUT THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM ONCE YOU REALLY READ IT.
shaniqua
this poem really touch me i would like to hear more
kyshona
dang dat 1 was very deep
mai
i know i had gave another comment about another poem bas for this really contain of sentences and parts that happens daily with everybody thanks for the person who had wrote it and i hope he or she writes again it is very nice and real .
griffin
this poem was awesome you know it really touched me cause my last girl friend we were together for 2 months and then i went to vancouver for a week for vacation and she forget i exsisted
Sheily
It was so great that I decide to use it in a story I am writing hope u can read it. Was really good I love it 10 cookies for you. Lol take care
cassie
i liked this poem because it reminds me abit like wat my last boyfriend was like e used to be ok with me then e wudnt be and i just used 2 wonder if it was my fault this poem touched me
Hinata
this is a vary powerful when i read it,it was like what happened to me was happening all over great job and keep writing the poems if i were you i would try to get published if i was not olready
shaylena
ohhh i love this poem its so good
samantha
it waz a good poem
Laura
That is a wonderful, touching heartfelt poem. I'm going throught something very similar with someone who I care for deeply. I felt isolated and alone but reading this poem and the comments made me fell better and to realize there are many people going throught the same thing. Thank you.
Kateisha
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Recently i went throught the same thing so i understand how it feels and trust me you will be okay. I believe that you cleared some people minds and probably avoided some decisions that they woulkd have made in the future because if I hadn't gone throught the same things a couple months back you would have helped me. So thank you and I hope this vote will help you out.
lilshawty_27
i really liked this poem becaue i could realate to it because i just broke well he just broke up wit me and it is so horrible how it ended because every thing was so perfect but what eve good poem love it portia
Kholo
This poem is perfectly written, I can relate to most of the story. Its a big risk to expect what you give and more from someone because when it does not happen, its too heavy a load to carry. My weekend has been very tough.
JUSTIN
I LOVED YOUR POEM I HAD HURT IN MY HEART BEFORE TO SO I KINDA UNDERSTAND THANK YOU
Ashley
this poem describes my last relationship with a guy. i really loved him, but things just didnt work out. this poem touched me deeply. i love the lyrics. they are so strong and well said.
saru
i m so impressed frm this poem becoz i feel the same what u r feeling. i would give u 110 out of 100.
domonquie
this poem is really touching in many ways you have my vote
Monica
I love this poem
judy
i like thiz pome bacuse it was true grils boy just say tht they love u . but itn all lies. grils dont be fool by ur man.
Kelly
I like this poem. But i mean love sometimes isnt like that. Like one day hes not all nice then hes a jerk then 2 days later hes all nice. I mean it makes since but not relle. I just been in relationships but better than that u kno?? Well anyways i love this poem and i hope whoever who wrote this poem writes more! DEF. Love Always, Kelly
Rumaire
This poem touched me very much. it inspired me to get more into my poetry. I like this poem very much!
maggie
I love this poem i can really relate to it im in love too
nika
this is so true. touched apart of me
Nessa
The poem was great because i can relate to wat was being said. It reminded me of my present relationship a few weeks ago. It was not until i deside to end it an move on, that he came to his senses ever since he's been the sweetest person.
Maribel
Remind's me when i was in a relatioship like that with my ex-boyfrined,Ronderick
Krista
This was such an awfully GREAT poem! You did a great job and put a lot of mind and spirit in it. When I first heard it, I started crying. Your a fabulous poet and you could have a future with poetry! Well Done
manoush
I just really loved this poem and it touched my heart so much-i dont know how to explain it~!~!~
loulou
OMG I LOVED IT!IT RELATES TO ME. I JUST WANT U TO KNOW THAT THIS POEM MADE ME CRY BECAUSE DAT HAPPENED TO ME. KEEP ON DOING WHAT YOU DO
Heather
This poem has really touched me. Its seems this is what me and my boy friend go through everyday. But it has touched me in a specail place in my heart.
jessica
this poems is so very touching it seems like that poem is made for me keep doing a great job
misha
sad. but a good poem!
AMBER
OMG THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL. I LOVE IT
cindy
i realy like this pome it so sweet and me i like read pome mrs . cindy
Jaqi
I loved this poem, this is exactly what I went through with my ex.
Bubbles
I really liked this poem cause it really touched me because i have been in this siuation before. !1
Tiffany
hey girl don't feel bad just remember this guys like that deserve you and remember you will always love him he will always have special place in your heart if you really love him he might come around again and when i read this cryed and i never cry so good job it it a great poem
shelby
I give it a 1000000000 vote out of 1000000000 vote o ya
SAM
I LOVED YOUR POEM CUZ IT IS SO TRUE AND EVERY THING YOU SAID HAS HAPPENED TO ME IN THE LAST 3 YEARS WIT THIS BOY THAT I THOUGHT I LOVED AND HE STOPPED LIKING ME CUZ I TOLD HIM HOW I FELT ABOUT HIM AND EVERY NOW ANS THEN I THINK BOUT HIM HOW WE MET AND HOW WE ALWAYS DID THINGS TOGETHER. AND ON THE LAST DAY OF SCHOOL I KISSED HIM AND HE BLUSHED SO HARD. DUNNO HOW ITS GONNA WORK OUT NOW AND I TOLD HIM ONE LAST TIME THAT I LOVED HIM SO MUCH AND HE WOULD NEVER KNO HOW MUCH I DO. IM ONLY 13 AND I HAVE FALLIN IN LOVE. THAT IS HARD TO GO THROUGH. BUT I STILL LOVE HIM. AND I ALWAYS WILL. THATS MY STORY. WHATS URS
Cindy
I love this poem it remember me of a boy that i love and still love and will aways love no matter wat happen. this is a very good poem
Kay
omg that poem is so true i give it a ten
jarrah
Dis was sweet I feel 4 u man!
ana
I really like this poems it relates with me in a way.
brittany
I eally liked this poem. it reminded me of my ex.
Stefanie
Tha poem is the sweetes poem i've heard!
Shanar
I was in love in with this boy and he was my heart he went out there and got marry to somebody alse and it hard bad. He was the sweet guy in the world until now I cant stand him
araceli
WOW!DAT WUZ A SAD POEM I ALMOST FELT A TEAR COME DOWN MA FACE WOW!(SNIFF,SNIFF)
Ana
wow, that poem is amazing. That's exactly wat my ex did.
Rayla
well i like this poem alot it touched me because i really liked this guy named Leland and we were friends and now were not but i really liked him and stuff and now were not talking so it hurts alot
lakendra
that was a great poem. considering im going through the same thing it touched me alot.
shay
this is a very and true poem may God bless you and u keep writting those wonderful poems cause you dont know who you might help with those poems
Kaitlyn
i love this poem it reminds me about my old boyfriend when we loved each other very much
cecy
it wuz really good
brianna
this poem + me
Amgel
Eeeeyyy Hit me up if u can this Poem might change my point of view.
amber
i loved this poem it touched me becouse how ur poem is it happened to me with the guy i thought i would always be with him but ur poem was wonderful
amy
wow. this is EXACTLY what i just went through. that was perfect! it was an awesome poem! i loved it!
Summer
This is a very touching poem and it inspired me soo much! thanks alot
Christina
I could relate to this poem, because I use to be in a relationship like that.
tonisha
what happen to him good job god bless.
deja
this is a very good poem it really touched me i liked it!
La Morena
I LOV3D DIS PO3M. I C0ULD ACTUALLY RELAT3 2 IT. TH3 SAME HAPP3N3D 2 M3. BUT THANK GOD H3 IS ALIV3. U TOTALLY HAV3 MY VOTE. U MAD3 M3 CRY SO HARD. K33P UP WIT DIS LOV3 PO3MS.
brittany
you really hit me wit dat poem u did that keep it up
amy
I love this poem. when i read it i thought the same thing that happened to me.
stephanie
this is a very true poem about love
JEN
That was awesome that was exactly how i felt about six months ago when my boyfriend of 2 years broke up with me a month after he took my virginity. it was good then bad then great then worse you are a wonderful writer and it comes from ur heart, keep it up
Latriece
THIS POEM TOUCH ME BECAUSE ITS WAS TRUE AND THAT IS HOW MY RELATIONSHIP WAS I STILL MISS HIM WITH ALL MY HEART AND WILL ALWAYS LUV HIM WITH ALL MY HEART!
Kimberly
this touched me so much because so many times i have been through that!
Lacreasha
This poem really touched my heart because, that's exactly how my boyfriend is. We are still together we have been together for 3 years. I love him so much that its hard to leave him. I watch the news every time I don't hear from him in a day or two. I already told him if he doesn't stop what he's doing then I'm going to leave him because I don't want him to end up like his uncle, if you know what I mean! Your poem really touched my heart keep on doing what your doing cause you are good. you can e-mail all of your poems to me cause I like this one.
alesha
I went thrue this problem wit my first love and im still hurting and i still love him so deeply no words can explain im only sixteen and Ive been hurt so deeply so i give this poem 2 thumbs up
justine
it touched my heart so much
sacha
i love ur poem. It was written by the experience with your love life. And i love that. Also it was insperational to the girls sayin not to fall for a guy like dat. A+
albertti
Bravo, che cossa bello, bono amorazzo schietto,l`Amore questo di fra ammerzo fa, mio sentimentos qua il canulla. Bravo! its a wonderful touch of human been, usally it`s happen to me, not long ago. you writting its powerful reflextion of the most purest touch, of love and passionated exposed truth for honor heart like you and me. I don`t feel so blue,when this happen to me. love have not,darkness inside us. we live and love today,then we become lover and beloved,and then we learn all love we have, never will be enough, until our flesh die, but never our powerful spirit, good love never found misery.
D
somethin that i can relate too. beautifully put into words(:
Alice
When I read this poem it got me thinking back to this guy who I was in love with but a couple of months later he dumped me. This all took place at my old home in Febuary of 2006. I was dumped in April after I was pregnate but I soon lost the baby! It is now April of 2007 and he is saying that he regrets dumping me! I still have feelings for him but I know he just wants me because I now am a little hotter than I was before!
jayde
it touched me because i've been through it and that's exaclty what happened to me i love this poem its a way of telling others how you realy felt xx
tina
this poem was crazy cool!
dan
this is an awsome poem. it makes me think of a very special person. its perfect.
marie
well i really dig what you saying because me and my ex went through every thing you talked about
angela
this poem was so sweet,im goin through the same thing this poem said i thought my love would alwayz stay but he left me and i was heartbroken and i still love him.
kristina
this poem is so beautiful,. it really touched my heart =)
morgan
Oh My God i felt the same way and did the same thing with my first real boyfriend thanks for "telling" me im not alone
Will
I love this poem!
vanessa
preppie i think this poem was very good i think it's because i know exactly how you feel the same thing happened to me. i know it sucks.
robyn
i think the poems would probably touch many hearts but it really touched mine cause ive been hurt by a boy that i loves so much he was the first one i ever loved.
christtena
i loved this poem
crystal
dude, your poem is so freakin awsome and it says everything that i`ve been trying to tell people about how i feel about that kind of stuff and ut just touched me like alot and its just a really kool poem.
Shannon
i thing this poem is an awesome one, beacause it describe my not so perfect live.
hani
i swear this hapned to me exact same story but yes wouldnt write it the way u did i may have the brains to say it serioulsy u knoe how true love is baout
Christine
THIS POEM REMINDED ME OF ME N MY EX HE WAS SO SWEET SOMETIMES AND THEN SOMETIMES AROUND HIS FRIENDS OR ON THE PHONE OR MSN HE WAS SO MEAN AND RUDE AND I NEW WHAT I HAD TO DO THE NEXT DAY BUT LATER THAT NIGHT HE WAS MURDERED AND THATS WHY HE WAS SO MEAN TO ME BECAUSE HE WAS BEATEN N THREATENDED I WISH I WASNT SO MEAN BACK
Nora
I think this poem was very passionate and also very true! Congrats for being a good poet!
stephanie
this is a really nice poem
Britney
That was a really good poem but sad!
kesha
i really feel as though this poem had a good meaning. it reminded me alot of what i went through with my ex and it made me shed a tear. even though were through and ive moved on i still get them days when i think about how he did me wrong. i write poems but never publish them. and sometimes its nice to read or listen to someone elses work then yours. i rate this "a good as one"
Taylor
This Poem describes my relationship perfectly! My Boy-friend (keep in mind we were goin out at the time) Went on a church trip and it was 3 days long, he siad he wasn't thinking, it was a weak moment. i didn't belive him. he cheated on me with someone he would NEVER see again so this poem really touched my heart.
Chuntara Triplett
This poem was so true. we often think we found one who does no wrong but turns out to b very wrong for us. JOB WELL DONE! CONTINUE DOING GOOD
Ally
kewl poem! it rocks!
alina
this poem was wonderful it reminds me of how my last relationship was he was a huge sweetheart one day and then the next he was putting me down in front of my friends. it takes tallent to write a poem like this good job!
lindsay
i love this poem i can realte to it
Kaitlyn
this was a good poem
amanda
i love it from a scal from 1 to 10 it would be 9
Mayra
This is a great poem i luv it!
amanda
I LOVED THE POEM, IT REMINDED ME OF MY ''X'' VICTOR. THE POEM WAS TRUE AND IT TOUCHED ME!
miranda
wow this is a grate poem and i can relate with the boy broblem. ceap righting poems like this one. grate poem! you'r friend miranda
maribel
I LOVED IT BECUZ IT IS TRUE!
latigra
this poem touched me very much because this has happened in a relationship i once had an wanted to be just like how they describe it in this poem
Jessica
i love this poem it is so sweet and loveing i would love to write something like this
jesssica
hey i loved the poem what you just said was the exact same thing that happened to me well im really glad that im not the only one with the problem well boys are jerks well you will find your true love someday just wait and the same goes for me i should just be patient and wait well nic talking to you gye
Nikki
I'll like this poem because it make me think about my ex-boyfriend and me what we went though. IT WAS TOUCHING
Alexis
AWESOME!
leah
god it was so good. i can relat to that i had a boy that done that to me
Jocelyn
You are an amazing writter. You words touched me and I could really relate. I think you should continue to write.
Rochelle
i like this poem
keshia
i love this poem it really touch my heart i send it to a friend and they love it. so keep doing what you doing and stay srong
jessica
i loved the poem im going thought the same stuff with my boyfriend right now
Anika
This was a very good poem that relates to me
jackie
i love your poems it happen to me
Tania
I really love this poem its like the best poem i've ever read
Ciera
This poem is very true. I love writing poems too thats my favorite thing is to write poems. Ilove writing love poems for couples who are meant to be****!
Keima
The Poem was so intense I really enjoyed reading it. I can really relate to this Poem.
cindy
this is a great poem in it will caugth a lot of teens eye
nothando
the peom has a strong meaing in it and all of it is true in what is going with a lot of relashionships
Sarah
I really love this poem. the same thing happened to me except i broke up with him before i could get hurt anymore.
kaylynn
did this rely happen to u well great peom luvs u lots always kaylynn
Jordan
OMG this is EXACTLY what happened to me. I was sitting here reading it i just started crying. U are an awesome writter. Write on chika
destinee
that was a really good poem and i think that your really talented. good luck with your poem writting
katie
i really liked this peom it had so much feeling to it
Brittany
I Love this poem it gets right down to the point and its the truth ! Its Scary in a way because for all the girls out there that have been in love and got hurt you know how its feels . You are Scared to ever get into another relationship because you cant love someone like you loved your first love and its really hard to get over your first love ! Its hard i know but i dated a guy named Gerald and im telling you i would have done anything in this whole entire world for him but he wanted to treat me wrong and eerything by messing around with other girls and things like that ! Then his parents got split up so he had to move i cryed and cryed it was so pain full and still to this day if he ever came back to this school i would drop everthing in a heart beat for him just like that that is how much i loved him 4-real i dont think anyone can ever get over their first love! this poem was really exciting and it made me wanta cry but i didnt because i have a boyfriend that loves me dearly and he does the right things by me ! so that poem was great!
Berenice
this poem really thouched me because i could relate i was in a relationship, that everything was perfect, then evertything just went down the drain.
jasmine
this is a nice poem because im going therw it rite now
sarah
i know i you feel iv been there and it nice for us girls 2 read you poem i think iam not the only girl hurting
sarah
omg! i loved this poem
Melissa
It's sorta happening 2 me right now
kiimberly & kapria
I think that this is one of the greatest poems because I once went through the same thing.
natalie
this is a great poem.
shorty
i lov3 thi$ po3m it r3l@t3$ with my lif3! @nd with my 1$t lov3.
Ashley
I loved this poem it really touched me.
maria
WELL I REALLY LIKE THIS POEMS BECAUSE I WENT TROUGH SOMETHING THE SAME WAY. EVERYTHING YOU SAID IN THE POEM MADE SENSE WITH WHAT HAPPENDED IN MY LIFE. AND HIS NAME WAS ALSO DANNY. BUT KNOW I SEE THAT THINGS HAPPENED FOR A REASON. AND NOW ME AND HIM ARE BACK THOGHER. WEVE BEEN GOING OUT AGAIN FOR 2 YEARS. AND AM SO HAPPY. BUT WHAN I READ YOU POEM IT MADE ME KNIDA CRIED.
Josey
I think that this poem has similar situations of what me and my boyfriend are going through and it makes me feel better to know that somebody else is going thru it too and i'm not the only one.
nate
this poem was good i had a girlfriend who did the same she "loved" me so she said but almost all the things in this poem happend to me so thats why i loved it!
Alberta
THIS POEM IS DA BOOM! I MEAN IT DIS IS DEEP! I LOVED IT!
autum
that is a great poem
eva
I like your poem coz make touch my heart. thx!
emma
omg luv dis poem so much! ive been in da same positian but myne was a lot worse Lol neway mint poem luvin dis syte loadza class poemz on ere :)
Sarah
awwwww this poem is well sad but true aswell!
cristina
this is very nice and true boys will ways be boys i like this one cuz it happen to me
Shaina
wow i really love this poem because this poem somewhat relates to something that happened to me.
anthony
wow fantastic poem i can so relate i just had my heart broken by a girl whome i was with for almost 3 years i like it alot and iam sure that other people can relate to it too. the best poems are the ones like this one that people can relate too. i like it. thanks for the poem
Gillian
This poem truly touched me it had such a meaning to it. The verses were written so well. My favourite line was about standing in the moonlight the last one.
brooke
i thought this poem was very good, because it reminded me of me and my ex. who ever wrote this GOOD JOB! and dont feel bad because im going through that same thing.
rachel
it inspired me too be causious in my relationship to not always think it is going to be like the past that you shouldnt look to how you felt in the past but you should look into how you are going to feel in the future
Naomi
i really liked the poem alot:). i just broke up with my boyfriend so i really understand it
yoanna
this poem is so good i liked it alot it was so true everything u said relate to me and many teens as well welll it was good
ashley
I THINK THIS POEM IS GOOD OR GREAT IF U WANT TO SAY, FOR SOMEONE WHO IS FALLIN IN LOVE IT NICE AND TRUE BECAUSE THATS HOW ALL BOYS GUYS MENS MANS WHATEVER TREAT FEMALES AND THEY THINK IT IS ALL RITE AND IT NOT.
claudia
i think this poem is soo sad ans sweet!
kimberly
this is a soo sweet poem!
monica
i think this poem was very touching. it help improve my relationsip with my boyfriend.
Jamie
I really liked this poem. Reason being I can relate to the things that this poem says.
Ashley
This pome is good it describes how you really feel and let me tell you it did not only happen to you i have been through it to hope you take care
jessica
this is so true because all guys are the same!
Stephanie
This poem touched me in the right places but I hope me and my man never go threw this because I think it would kill me.
tasha
dis poem has reeli tuched me cz it just lyk me nd dis boi called marcus hu evah rote dis knows jst the ryt wrds of how too discribe da feelin
deloris
your poem is great and very true. i give you a 10.
brittney
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM CAUSE I KINDA FEEL LIKE IM GOIN THROUGH THIS RIGHT NOW BUT I TRY AND LOOK OVA IT CAUSE IF IT HAPPENS IM GONNA BE HEART BROKEN BUT IT WOULDNT HAPPEN 4 NO REASON GOD DONT DO NOTHING FOR NO REASON!
natasha
i voted on this poem not only because it was good but because i really related to it. i kno exactly what the writer was feeling. and i KNO many others have also realted to it! GOOD JOD!
Racheal
This Poem is one of my favorites. I love it that is how gurls really feel about guys these days. i really like it. Guys these days don't really care about how gurls feels these days.
amanda
I was truly touchde by reading this poem. it was so touching. No break up is easy, ecspecially when you feel that person is the one and they turn around and stomp on your heart by putting you down.
rebecca
this poem is so true my first love hurt me this way to!its still so soon but its exactly how we wre and after two weeks hw moved on !after i gave him and loved him for two years!
cynthia
girl your poem is touching. ive been threw the same situation with one of my ex boyfriends. i hope u find the right person out there because the one that truly loves u wont hurt u at all!
Tara
This poem is just like of my past relashonships so i give it the best vote ever.
Angelica
i really like this poem it's very good and some teens my feel the same way.
Mercedes
This poem has toched me so much as a teen. And i hope that you keep on writing teen poems.
Ranice
ooooooo gurl i really like this poem cuz i know where ur comin 4rm i jus broke up wit my boyfriend and basicly the same thing happened to me i jus had to let u know that bye
tawni
IT WAS A CUT STRIGHT TO MY PAST WITH AN OLD BOYFRIEND AND ALL THE TEARS I WENT TO AFTER HE WAS GONE! ;)
Kaya
my bf just broke up with me today! i'm still in tears!
LEE
this poem was realli nice it made me think of ma man
erik
from the scale from 1 to 10 i give it a 9 1/2. i like the poem cause it was real nice,and it is something that i myself has gone through as well as many people i know. keep up the good work
Amanda
The poem reminds me of someone
kinner
gret poem!
kayanna
i love this poem its liek a true destiny and fairy tail i love it and i printed it out and put it in my book of love poems thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us!love always and forever Kayanna
Eli
i think this poem is sweet and tells the truth, it really cool.
elizabeth
this is an awesome sentimental poem that shows lots of emotions about love honesty and life
Josh
This poem brings put your true feelings
elissa
i really like ur poem. it sounds really cool. and true.
Caroline
This is a really good poem and i an relate to it very very much!I have feel in love with it!
via
i have to say that as i read this, i felt like i could finish the next line. there was this guy (his name was danny too!) and i really got along with him well so we started talking and i ended up liking him. one day he told me he really liked me. and i liked him back too eversince. but then i found out he had a girlfriend! so i asked him about it and hes like oh. yeah. and it was so stupid cause he would take me out on dates and there i was thinking that he wanted a girlfriend relationship with me. he was always always sweet saying sweet things. and then i find out he has a g/f and on top of that he takes other girls on dates too. it really sucked so i decided i wasnt going to be the other girl. so i acted like i didnt know. and i played him up real good. i kissed him real hard. and then just left, leaving him wanting more. i then quit him. ignoring his calls. just to show him what a jerk he was and for all the girls he hurt. importantly, for me. i dont need him.
danielel
i like your poem very much. it makes me think about the time i fell in love the first time because i felt the same way.
Tamara
It's just how I feel but it's not over not yet. thank you who ever who wrote this. now I know what to do. thiz is really nice. bye and thanks
Reachnny
That was deep! That was a very nice poem. I know how u feel because that happened to me also.
Maria
This poem touched me. I felt that it echoed all the troubles I feel inside. What I am hoping for now is that it ends well for me. I love this boy so much. I just wish he could see that and treat me the way I should be treated. But for now, I'm willing to hold on to hope. regardless of the pain I sometimes feel inside. Thank you!
stormy
this was a great rhyming poem but did u ever think about the ending and wht happed
NAYELI
THIS IS SOMETHING SO VERY TRUE.
Brigail
I really did love your poem it seem to be so true to me.
Nicola
Diz poem gt 2 me :(:( becus ma bf keepz ignorin me and flirtin wiv uva girlz and i jus feel unwanted and lyk i ent worth nufin im jus der for wen he wantz me.
janett
i loved the poem it was very sweet
jhanak
It was realy nice about love . I just want2 say that it was too good
nicole
Hey, i just wanted to say that i like ur poem and 2 keep on writeing!
Cloressa
I really loved your poem, and I wish to read more of your writing.
Morgan
This poem ROCK! This poem reminded me and this boy i like.
nikki
this is a beautiful poem i love it so much keep on writing these poems great jod again i love it xoxo ~nikki~
Destiny
I really liked this poem cause it reminds me of my relationship with my last serious ex boyfriend. I miss him so much but I will never go back to him.
nida
i luved dis poem. it rockz. itz so touchy. n it iz jst awsum
Mo'Mo
OMG! this poem remindz mii of mii me and my ex-boyfwendz relationship! it is soo touching. KEEP THE LUV FLOWING! Peace
Amanda
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM. ITS SO TRUE AND IT HAPPENS TO SO MANY PEOPLE.
amanda
it was a very good poem
maria
this was great because it reminded me of a past boyfriend who was so careing but as time went on he was so mean and i thought i was just me but then one night i get a call from his mom sayin he was haert vere bad and i should go c him and the next day he was no longer with us so yah this poem mad me cry
Trixie Ma Lou
This poem really hits close to home. I have been through the same thing. so thank you for sharing this poem with the rest of us.
daisy
SO SO TRUE! iim just goin through that now BUT I WOULD GIVE MY LIFE IF EVERYTHING COULD GO BAKK BEING DA SAME! =[
Mariah
This poem is very true. I mean sometimes you just have to learn from your mistakes the hard way. I can relate to this topic so much and to have someone that you truely love or like and they break you hurt you just don't know what to do!
Arlette
I love this poem
Irene
oh I like this poem this happened to me.
Morgan
i loved the poem and it touched my heart. you write really good poems. i cried when i read it.
daisy
i loved your poem i know what this person thinks ity hasnt happened to me but to my friends it has and the pain they i could feel it too your poem toyched it is a really good poem !
matt
i think this poem can relate to a lot of people. me especally only it was my girl friend not a boy u go gurl!
razz
hallowww ! i realli luved the poemm ,,soo true ! :D keep it upp ! ;)
brittany
i like this poem because it teaches me that when you love someone you should never give it up. keep loving the person even if the love is so deep. that means your love is growing stronger
Jordan
i loved this poem it touched me cause i felt the same way in my love life.
nicolle
ya this poems is welll good xxxx
Christina
this is a great poem it reminded me so much od my friend this is exactly what she is going threw!
Dikya
I love it can you make me one
Ania
I love your poem! your such a good writter and i hope you'll write more poems. It really made me think about life. Im not really old enough to know how it feels yet but i know i will. Well i just wanted to say that your poem inspired me and it will help me along with the many obsticles that are going to be in my life.
Jennifer
I had a friend since we were two. We were best friends and seriously loved each other till fourth grade. Then he dumped me for the school hoe. I felt just the way you described for a whole year. We hate each other now. I just wish we could still be friends. I miss the amazing person he once was. Thanks for making me feel like I'm not alone.
ashley
the pome was really neat i really liked it and it made me think of pass times and of all the things my boyfriends have done and said
Valentine
This poem reminds me of something I've been through.
Sharna
This poem really touched me because what was explained in the poem is what happned to me. Every emotion and event in that poem was what I went through and it was written in a great and artistic way. Keep up the good work.
kendra
I love your poem. Because i'm in the same mess. And it hurts and i have to find away to let go
Shureka
I feel what u is talking about cause i been through the same thing the u was going through it is hard to lose someone like that, that u really loce and want to be with. I am glad that i don't have to go through that no more. The same way he did u i got did that way. Be strong and keep your head up and i wish u good luck and the future. But i want u to Know that i love this poem and i have it on my wall in my room.
Jykia
This poems was very good
Angelic
Wow this poem is so true i know how it feels! i could totally relate and it hurts to know that im not the only one that goes though it but that all of us do! i wish it wouldnt happen but all we can do is wish!Right?
Ashanti
I really like this poem because I been through this. This poem really touched my heart.
Brittany Dunmoes
This Poem just make rember all the good and sad times i've had in my life.
Shantenysha
your poem is very nice and it sends a meaning
Krista
This is a great poem it is like my life with my boyfriend right now.
Liddy
This poem discribes EXACTLY what happend to me this weekend. and its quite weird cause your poem mentioned Saturday around 10 o clock. and thats the day and time me and my boy broke up. mmm. great poem, thanks x x x
courtney
love your poem it made me feel like it was all true about how things have been going with me at this time
Ho
This poem is so cute i almost cry this poem make me think of my friend. She cryed alot and me two cuz i cryed with her I love this poem just so sad LOVE IT!
Amy
this poem brings back painful memories of my lasy boyfriend. It makes you realise you dont have to be put down. you are who you are.
Samantha
I think this poem is very much like me end my ex-boyfriend it really touched me!
niki
i loved this poem words cant express it was very good.
nicole
i really liked this poem it was explaining like exactly what i was going through with my boyfriend carlos. he started changing wiht me in alot of different ways. but he has changed now so everything is good with us. but i LOVED your poem. good choice of words. love Nicole.
kassandra
i love this poem and it is so true it hurts so bad when this happens but i guess its life and somehow you have to find a way to move on and give love another chance becouse he wasnt the one you were looking for in the first place if he treated you like the becouse if it got to this point i know and you should to that you deserve better! well much love from kassandra
emma
im crying i cant even see strait lol
manny
i love the poem but its sad poem. I love my girlfriend very much and we have been through a lot. Things may change but i hope our love stays the same. Our song is You were my everything, kind of weird th song is talkin about a guy who lost his girl away but my girl just holds me tighter. I love her with all my heart and my love for her will never die
Taylor
I loved your peom was very inspiring 2 me! I really felt your sadness. I also have a Boyfriend that I feel exactly the same way with! & he is going through the exact same changes! Yours truly, T. S
Hannah
WOW! I know how you feel, I have been before. This is really good.
minnie
oh my, what a touching poem, truly. Yes, it is rather confuing whne you've been let down upon. You will feel so lost as if you've lost a part of yourself. All you can do is weep till your eyes run dry. This poem summarises the rotten feelings one feels after a break up.
amy
i think this poem is the most beautiful poem i have ever read keep making poems because you are brillant
Rosalind
i think this poem should be #1!
benna
I really did like that poem right there it touched me inside making me want to cry
Katie
I love this poem. I love it because it is exactly what happened to me.
Danielle
I thought it was a great expression of feeling. Teens can really relate to this and the hurt that comes along with it.
Hannah
i really like this poem cuz this poem is definately same with my heart beats
JENNY
0MG i L0VED iT!iTZ S0 TRUE!
Nequina
I loved the poem so much keep up the good work!
Danielle
I really Love the Poem U wrote. It remind's me of my ex boy friend. I was going with this one boy for like 4 month's and he was so nice to me and we would always be around eachother and hang out and have fun. But until i went to Bismarck and stayed up there for 2mth's and then i came back and it took us like 2week's to talk again and we started talking again and then after that i have no clue what happened to me and him. He told me that he loved me and i said it back once i think. my old friend's would tell me stuff about him and i didnt want to belive them because they liked to lie to me sometimes. They would say he's talking about you and calling you names. Then when i came back from biz i heard alot of thing's about him and i cried alot. Im still with him but i dont think i should be going out with a boy like that. But yea i love the poem you wrote. BYE
Koty
This is so true that it is touching u think that someone is something special and then they just quit acting the same!Its sad that things happen like this!
johana
i really like this poem alot itre minds me of me and my ex and the guy a with right nw i feel like i relate alot to it !
Stephanie
I thought your poem was good. you spoke the truth and i could relate.
Hope
i loved the poem. i wish things like that didnt happen but the sad truth is, is that it does. i can totally relate. great poem!
bamm-bamm
As sad as it is to admit this poem actually did do a big impact on me. My gf accuses me of doing this to her, pushing her away etc. but I really never knew how much it would hurt her until I read this poem. THANK YOU for having such a good talent in expressing how you really feel.
Sheree
I loved this poem. It reminded me of a year ago when my boyfriend died and I had to hear it on the local news about a car crash that had killed him after he got to the hospital. That was a very touching poem and it made me tear up. I hope to see more of these poems from you. It realy made alot of since to me. Thank you. Now i know that there is someone else who understands what i have been through and what i continue to go through.
Kayla
This is well written poem and is true with most people and it touched me, thank you for sharing your poem with me.
princess
i am really touched by your poem. I felt the emotion that you are trying to deliver to your audience. you were able to express your true feelings with no hesitation and thats really what made everything good. I like the way that it is somehow based on experince well atleast thats how it sounds like. I really admire your work
jUlz
hii bubz how u feelin l8tly dis poem was sad in sum ways bt bubz u should m0ve 0n nd enjoy life bc life is 2 sh0rt nd i always tell every1 dis smile coz u dnt noe wats g0nna happen 2m0r0 :D peace bubz tc mwaa
louise
this poem was so lovely and dramatic i loved it! you really felt for the person he was doing it to and you felt so down as well. beautifully put. ***** i think this deserves a 5 star!
Kay
Wow this is kinda wut happened between me and my man it is really sad and true and i really think this poem is like awesome
Gracie
I liked this poem a lot because I went through this exact kinda thing. I liked this guy for so long and it broke me heart to hear that he didn't like me back any longer.
heather
THE POEM GOT TO ME THAT ONE DAY IT MAY HAPPEN TO ME SOME DAY SO NOW WHEN IT DOSE HAPPEN TO ME I NO WERE TO GO TO MAKE ME FEEL BETTER OR IF IT HAPENS TO ONE OF MY FREINDS I CAN SEND IT TO THEM
Emily
This is a really good poem. It goes s good with the relationship that Im in so I hope to see more of them!
Emma
I really love this poem
Christian
i really like this poem seems like iam putting up with this rigth now :( with my boyfriend i love him sooo much but its seems like i am not there in his life. so dont worrys bcause thats happening to me now :(
courtney
This poem was so pretty. Keep writing them and I'll look for all your poems.
Shanta
I really like this poem it remind me of me and my boyfriend.
lydia
i FELT THE SAME WAY WHEN MY FRIEND THAT I HAD FEELINGS FOR DIE ON ME SO I BEEN IN THE SAME SPOT
shakreshia
Explains ecactly how I feel.
Jasmin
i like this poem! it relates to my life! well good work!
Crystal
Its amazing. I love this poem. Im going through everything that she is talking about right now. It is also making me open my eyes a little to the fact that im not the only one who is being treated this way.
shadae
i really like this .
sandy
OMG i went through that about a year ago i was the hardest thing. it was september 20th 10:00 at night and he called and told me he didn't want to be with me anymore we were togother for 2 years it was so hard to hear him tell me that i crid for along time but now i'm over him and looking for another guy but won't let it get that far again intill i'm older.
siansen
this poem is really nice u must have a lot of feelings 4 someone it really means a lot its true what u said because it happems in real life life is not a fantasy its true
kat
brillant! this poem is very nice. :)
Tiffiny-Lynn
Oh my. that me sad it said every thing that was going on in my life. and i didnt think any one could under stand but i think you do. it was the best i loved it sooooo much!xoxox
coco
this reflects my last relationship, PERFECTLY, its amazing how someone that uve never met before can speak such true words into your life, this is such a good poem, keep up the good work, love coco xoxox
Michelle
wow. omg i love your poem it is so emotional and true i can really relate to this poemit happened to me it made me cry. it is amazing i love it! i really like this guy and he said that he likes some other girl but he said he will rememeber that i like him if himand this girl doesnt work out but i dont wanna be the sub if it doesnt work out i really like this guy so. im not sure if i should wait around or move on. but thank you i love knowin that ther are other people out there that feel the same way as i do
Cookie
I like this poem because it helps me cope with whats really the meaning of love
TINISHA
IT NICE I LIKE IT MAKE A
Janae'
I really like this poem becaus it tells the truth i have had a recient relationship just like this so to the person who wrote this i truly do understand where your commin from with this poem.
kristina
GURLL, this is really how i fell about my bf! but i love him and he live soooo far away! i barlly ever see him! i dont know wat to do. can u help me?
nina
I love this poem it speaks the truth about how girls fell about thier boyfriends!
DANISHA
THIS POEM IS VERY GOOD. WHEN I READ THIS POEM IT MAKE ME FEEL WAT YOU ARE SAYING. BECAUSE IAM GOING THROW THE SAME PROBLEM.
Shiont'e
I feel that I can relate to what was explain because I been through it to many times. I know how it feel when you throght you found Mr. Right, and it comes to be he was Mr. Wrong.
Ka'Niesha
i loved your poem and it iz true because it happen to me before and iz sad because we young and when we love someone we say alot of stuff but it never happen because of jeolusy and haterz.
kelly
i think this poem was amazing ive never read nothing like it its truely remarkable!
chynna
i think that this poem is so very true because i'm a teen and i was in love and the same thing happened to me. but i luv this poem
Angela
that is a good poem it describes the real meaning and actions of love and how it works in mesterious ways
kierma
i really enjoyed reading this peom. all peolpe that is peom loves they should read it.
FELISHA
~WOW THIS IS A REALLY GOOD ONE AND IT IS VERY TRUE FOR ME~
Zion
100% Good and True.
Darla
This is a great poem. i love it
JULIA
I LIKED IT
Teri
dat is a well gd poem i can reli relate 2 it i av only jus broken up wid my b. f n dats excatly how i feel xxxxxxxxxxxxx
nicolle
this poem is good brapppp!
Jocelyn
i love this poem not only cuz its good but my last relationship was exactly that and FINALLY someone gets the point and i found a poem that is exactly how i felt, but now im with an even better guy so. FORGET U DARRICK!
Tyhara
I really like this poem because I am in a relationship now that is just like the poem. One min were good and the next its like oh man what just happend. The poem touched me in such a way the only thing i could do was so wow this is so true. Please continue to right poems because i think that you have a real talent i wish i could write like you and put all of my feelings on paper.
laura
this is a great poem. i love to write poems also. this one is very touching because my ex-boyfriend, odell, was the same exact way. he even cheated on me a couple times. i love your poem!
danielle
this poem is so true as you know hits home when i read it and i like that alot it made me think about the times as you wrote and i really miss those times but i knew that it would happen but if i had your pome then it would have help me thank you so much
Ruby
I was touched by this poem because it was almost like my problem.
latara
this poem is got so much loving and caring in it its saying how much they love someone and then it goes on saying i love you
Priscxilla
Hey sis I feel your pain. I´m going through the same thing and i am really depressed. I cry all the time but i just wanted to say that it´s a great poem,a reflection of life.
christina
I FEEL THIS WAY ABOUT MY EX BOYFRIEDN! I LOVED HIM SO MUCH! AT FIRST HE WAS THE SWEETEST GUY EVER THEN HE CHANGED HIS WAYS. HE STARTED TO SHOW HIS TRUE SELF. HE USED TO HIT ME AND YELL AT ME.
nicolle
this poem is wikid and sooo true about me x.
caitlyn
i can relate to this poem so good from a time when i thought i was in love. i was very wrong && this poem shows exactly how it feels very well writen!
Terrika
i really like this it is deep and true
Kelsey
That was such a good peom. that is how i felt when my boyfriend did that to me. It was so hard to get over but i moved because of that one little poem I read
Kelly
i think this poem is great and touching! i went through the same thing.
Diana
i think this is a a great way to say the t you are in love and it touched me alot.
Amberlynn
did he die at the end ? i was touched by ur poem because iv been throgh that thing b4 and i know how bad it hurts but i still havent gotten over him and its been 10 months well write sum day bye
cortrease
why i vote for this poem cause i can relate to this and really touch me when i read it
juan
man now that's what you call a real poem and really nice because my girl tell's me every day that she love's me so much and that she will mary me no matter what
Felicity
I love it because its the exact same thing that happened to me!
India
i BEEN THREW THE SITTUATION BEFORE AT THE END JUST KEEP YOUR HEAD UP, BECAUSE GOD WILL FIND THE PERFECT ONE FOR YOU. AND THE OTHERS WOULD BE DIRT. "LOVE IS ONLY LOST IF YOU FOREGET WERE IT LIES".
ASHLEY
it makes me think how some guys are and u wonder what if this happens to you what will happen what will you do but you need think what to do before it happens to you
sanja
i really like this it's great you did a good job
Elizabeth
i love this poem u r very good keep making good poems
angie
i liked it cuz it reminds me alot bout me and it is so true !
Yesenia
I loved it. I was touched, it made me feel somthing inside. it sent me a message.
Amanda-Marie
hey guys. this poem is gr8 it is sumthing that wuld touch alot of ppl i can admit i have been in this position b4 and it wasnt the greatest either this poem is exactly the way i felt. it a gr8 poem i loved it =] much love manda XO
ashli
This was a very touching poem sometimes things really do happen that way
Elizabeth
i loved this poem and it really touched me cuz it is the same as what i have gone through
dani
this poems really describes things that happen in real life. i know from experience.
sabrina
I really like this poem it really touch my heart because i had a same situation like that with my baby daddy/boyfriend.
Savannah
I thought this was a GREAT poem
kanica
nice poem for all those people there who have loved truly and lost,only theuy will understand the true emotions behind the poem
Sabrina
this was cool it was sweet and everythin eles
nicole
this poem touchede me in so many ways
CARLA
it is so true
cameron
i loved this poem you really know how to relate to feelings
natalie
great poem!
jamie
i liked your poem
samantha
it was a good poem had alot of feeling!
Rubi
This poem really touched my heart and kept me thinking about how much i love my man and that i don't want anything to take that away.
pamela
this was a good poem. i liked it alot. hope to see more poems from you on this site.
felicia
this poam is so true . i love it
Brittany
This poem was very good! Keep up the awesome work. -Brittany.
India
this poem touch the heart.
Vinolia
I like the fact that I can relate to it since something like that 1s happened 2 me 2. Its a reallity poem so I luvd it!
Stephanie
I vote for this poem 100%
beautifull
hello i just wanted to say that this poem is beautiful and so true i kinda had a problem like that it brought tears to my eyes good thing im still a virgin and didn't give my self up. thank you for your help please send me some more poems when you have time.
Beth
Just wanted to say that the poem is great. I'm currently going through the same situation but sadly i keep hanging on so just be glad you got out when you did.
kacey
oh my that poem is so true, it sounds lik the way my life is at the moment with my guy man its great GREAT WORK MATE! love kacey
Felicia
I really liked and and I can relate to it
sarah
i can relly relate to this so i would like to vote for it because it does happen probley every day.
keela
omg! this is so sad. i feel you because this have had happan to me before. it hurts to let go but life move on!love hurts i got to say and when u lose the one you love it makes you feel like u dont want to believe anymore. because u are scare they will do the same too!
nella
all id like to say is this is a very great poem I LOVE IT i cant really explain wat to say x-cept that its true
juliet
OH my gosh it was so amazing. it really and really touch me. I love this poem so much. I always thought that i am the only one in this earth that get this experience but now i found out it happen to other peeps around the world too! you are so amazing, and this poem was so awesome!
tholi
i like this poem it talks about something happened in my life. i am gay and the man i was thinking he loves me played down with me and i was hurt a lot. after reading it i felt good becoz i knew that i am not the only one who experienced this problem.
Candie
I love it.
Brittney
I THINK YOU DID A VERRY GOOD JOB JUST KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND DONT LET ANY ONE TELL YOU, YOU CANT DO IT BECAUSE YOU CAN DO ANYTHING YOU PUT YOUR MIND TO. BRITT.
robin
i thought it was kool better then some or alot of mine lol
keisha
This poem was deep,and thought about. It had great detail. It was beautiful and sad all at the same time. I really liked this poem.
Vanessa
I really liked this poem because it talked about me after my really, really hard break-up qith my ex Ryan. This poem has so much emotion in it.
Erica
This Poem touched me because ive had the same exact thing happen to me. I'll never forget how many times I have sat and cried over that one boy who to this day will never stop loving! It was a very excellent poem that it brought tears to my eyes. :)
tangia
i like this point it reminds me of my last relationship and wat went on it also speaks from this person's heart keep up tha good work
jessica
the poem was beautiful i read 3 times i really liked it alot!
christy
This was the best poems, i've ever read!
Savannah
The same thing always happens to me i cant find love even if i tried!
Samantha
I love this poem! i have been there and felt this way i think most people have and the feelings dont go away easy this poem has stoped me doing something stupid and going back to my X b/f out of i give this 9 and a half.
Martika
So true coz for it came true he said he loved me but he treated me like dirt so i got rid of him and im still hurt
Dorothy
i really like it,it makes me think of people that i like.
Heather
i love it its sweet i have a boyfriend that i really love to death! heather
Danielle
I really enjoyed this poem because it was like the same thing that happend to me about one month ago with my ex- boyfriend and then he wouldnt call me for about one week and I was wondering what was going on and all of a sudden my younger sister got a phone call from him the following day to tell me that it isnt going to work out between us and she said well arent you going to tell her and he said I cant will you do it for me she said well I will try so I was in pain for about thirty minutes and then I knew that it was comming soon even though I was with him for five year but this poem really touched mt heart I really loved it!
aimee
i loved this poem it really touched me. the reason i think most poeple like it including me is because they can relate to it i think it is something that has happened in lots of past relationships for everyone
tamara
i really enjoyed your poem. It touched me deeply. When i got done done reading it i couldnt help but to cry.
aimee
i loved this poem because it really moved me it sound just like the thing that was happening to me with my old boyfriend so i can relate to the person it really is a lovely poem
mildred
i love this poem the most itz just like the sitiuatin i just got out of but only i broke up with him because he was kinda scaring me but it hurtz because as much as i want to be with him i know i cant because well i can but i choose not to so its hard i dont wanna go througt the same things one more time. itz just to hard. i love him so much maybe preppie you can right me a poem on that i write poetry to but u are awesome! with love mildred fereiras
Nell
LOVE IT. I mean it's so real and true to me, It's just like what happened to me just a few days ago, It has passion,completness,Emotion. It's wonderful,Keep on the poems girl, They're AMAZING
jEdDaH Lyn.,
iT is a veRy nicE poEm. ,aNd i Love iT sO muCh. i waS tHinkiNg tHat,,wHat iF it wiLl hapPen tO me. gOsH. wEll tiLl heRe. tHankz. niCe.
keyah
this was good
Nicole
I love this poem because i went through the same thing and i know exactly what it feels like. I just broke up with my boyfriend and i know what it feels like. I loved your poem keep writing!
Alisha
I really enjoyed reading this poem! When I read it I really felt where you were coming from. It hurts but keep up the good work!
Rashida
I feel 4 this poem. All of it bring back memories to me and my lost love but Now I've found someone new and i'm loveing every moment of this true new LOVE.
Emily
I am really sorry for you. I really like my bestfriend and if we got together i wouldn't want that to happen to me that happened to you. In the beginning of my school year, my bestfriend, Austin, really liked me but i didn't like him back, only as a bestfriend. He understood and went on. He had a couple of girlfriends. Now that summer vacation is here I finally realized I loved him from the start. My mind just didn't want it that way til now. I hope you find another guy that won't treat you like dirt because I bet he would want to be treated like that if he really loved a girl the way you loved him.
angeline
Your poem is so impressive. It really caught me if you know what i mean. You just inspired me. Nice poem you got there!
confused
Wow i really no how u feel i just got out of something like tat 2 when you think everything is fine and he starts ignorin you and i think tat its funni because when i got the news it was saturday night too well ur a great poet mak more!lol
brittney
this poem was so nice cause i can relate to what was being said
ASHLEY
i loved this poem i have the same problem and situation with two different guys and it still feels like you wanna cruel up and die this poem is awesome
dean
i reckon ur poem was very good and touching it touch me and i just wated to say whoever wrote this poem they done a good job thank u of that.
austen
WHEN I READ THIS PEOM I THROUGHT OF DEBBIE I LOVED HER SO WITH ALL MY HEART STILL DO MY LIFE HAS STOPPED IT WAS 10 YEARS NOW I CANT GO ON WITH MY LIFE IF I ONLY NEW Y SHE LEFT ME ONLY THEN MAYBE THEN I COULD BUT UNTILL THEN I ONLY THINK OF HER AND WHAT MY LIFE WOULD HAVE BEEN I WORK COME HOME THATS ALL I DO I WOULD LOVE TO ASK HER Y SHE LEFT ME
rayray
hey preppie that was an awsome poem maqn if you went though this i know how you feel cuz that is almost they way i feel with my ex that just broke ^ with me and this poem really touched me some much that i actually cryed and i hope that you keep righting and dont let anything make you stop righting poems
ei
i love this . i dun no why. this is relli grt
aixza
every day i read the poem and it makes me feel real sad cause the exact same thing happen to me but he broke up with me to go out with my bestfriend which were not friends anymore because of him later she broke up with him to be with his best friend and then after that me and my ex-boyfriend strated to be good friends but at first it was wierd but then we argued like we were boyfirend and girlfriend again he still has his own girl and i have mine boy and he tells me his problems and i tell him mines his parents and my parents say that one day we wll get married which i dont think but thats what they say because we're happy when we're together and when he's with his girlfriend he's always arguing with his girl and do the same with my boyfriend and sometimes i do thnik we're but then he disapoints sometimes i just dont know what to do.
Stephanie
I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM BC IT REMINDS ME OF MY BOYFRIEND BRANDON. HE USED TO MEAN SO MUCH TO ME,THEN HE STARTED ACTING LIKE HE DIDNT CARE,SO YOUR POEM REALLY INSPIRED ME! FROM 13 YEAR OLD STEPHANIE
aixza
this is the best poem it reminded me of my past relationship except the dieing part but when he broke up with me i felt like i was going to die just because he went oout with one of my good friends that was like a best friend
iesha
this poem remind me of myself. it's wonderful who ever made it you is going all the way.
Stevie-lee
this was a awsum poem and it really touched me
chantelle
IT WAS ABSOULETLY GREAT
jamie
I am 15 years old and this poem truely touched me. It put a picture in my mind and your words helped me to understand what form of pain you went through. I hope with passion that you are O. K now and your work is absoultly touching. please write more xxxxx
monique
i loved it truly it touch me cuz ive been there before well my boyfriend didnt past away but the relationship turn sweet to sour i really loved this poem though
siearra
I LIKED THIS POEM ALOT IT SOUNDED LIKE WHAT HAPPEND TO MY BEST FRIEND THIS POEM IS VERY POWERFUL AND UNIQUE
Jessica
This poem explains exactly what happened between me and my boyfriend but onlly difference is that he would be migrating and when i found out we wee goin to break up i was actually happ(very happy)
Ciera
wow, that was really good foreal it had alot of meaning to it. im srry to hear this happend to you but glad that u can share this with teens and teach them or help them learn a thing or two! ~ciera
nohely
This poem really touched me because i have gone through all of it
Janessa
This was the best poem that I have not heard in a very long time keep up the good work.
alanna
i love the way that you feel about been in love with aguy
Kelly
This poem really touched me this poem i dedicate to my FIRST LOVE TERELL
Kimmie
I really like this poem, at the moment I liked this guy he was being really sweet to me, saying we should hang out. Then he goes and be's all funny with me when I saw him. So this poem kind of touched me abit!
kristal
its so touching and sentimental i love it
JESS
THAT WAZ SOOO DEEP MAN WHEN I WAZ READING IT I WANTED 2 CRY
Ashley
I like it. It makes sense and it's the truth for some.
redbuddafly
I liked the poem and I could relate to it because it happend to me before. It was almost like you knew exactly what happend and how I felt when one of my ex's did the same thing to me. I hope to read more of poems so continue writing.
Latrisha
i voted this one beacause it happened to me and i can relate to it , the first couple of months was so good i thouhgt it was a fairy tail but after that he started not talking to me , and i thought it was someting i did but he is so nice sometimes and just not himself. so i hope you win
Maryoum
GREAT POEM !
Kassandra
I love this poem. It reminded me so much of me and my ex boyfriend Jorge. When he broke up with I wanted to curl up and die. I cryed when I read this poem.
Precious
hey this is one of the best poems that there has been in a long time!KEEP IT UP! LOVE ALWAYS PRECIOUS!
radhika
how true how true how true! i vote it 10 on 10 . excellent! brilliant. i love the way its jot down!
dannya
I BELEIVE THAT EVERY ONE HAS GONE THROUGH THIS LITTLE PHASE ,WHEN U BELIVE THAT THAT PERSON IS OH SO PERFECT, BUT IN THE END IT IS ALWAYS SO NOT TRUE.
shambria
this poem really touched me and i know what your talking about i went throw the same thing with this guy that was the love of my life one day but the one i hated the next.
jessica
that poem actually sounds like me and my first love falling apart i loved that poem
rachel
this vote made me cry im going through the same thing omg im like feeling this poem its soo good who ever wrote this is an amazing poet ! -sincerly rachel
Alisha
You did a wonderful job on this poem. You need to write a book of poems that's how good they are! Keep up the good work I write poerty too on teenage love, because I am a teenager.
maysoon
Hi. I liked your poem soooo much. It is very nice,impressive and I think you expressed your feelings in a very good way.
Jade
Your poem was very good. it showed true pain and hurt.
brittany
i thought this poem was very good. it reminds me of me and my ex thats exactly what he did to me so whoever wrote this poem dont feel bad because it happened to me too.
samantha
yes i really love this poem because it tells me story that happen in my life once this poem was true to me coz it is the same thimg that happen to me while i was reading it i just start crying because of what happen to me and how this poem touch my heart
Erika
i really liked dis poem cuz it touched me!
hussain
well i really love a girl and in the begining me and her were so crazy in love never stopped thinking bout each other. but after a few months things changed she acted as though i wasnt anything to her. i would see her in the halls of our school and try to go up to her and talk to her. she was always surrounded by guys and when i would want to talk to her it seemed as though she had no time and would walk away. i really love her and i thought we would marry but all she does is put me down and doesnt know how it feels she knows i wont leave her since im too much in love with her so she always does stuff to hurt me but im not the kind to hurt back so i just leave her alone and walk away me and her are still together been together for almost 2 months over a year and i dont know if i could still be with her the way she is i would love to meet a person who has gone through this and would never treat a person like this.
sara
this was a really grate poem im sorry that the boy dumped you. it hurts i know i been there before too so i hope you find someone really true i did 4 years latter.
Andeshia
I liked this poem alot it really made me cry
heather
i love the poem alot it reminded me of what has happend to me and if this has happend to you all i can say is hang in there it will get better i promise it may take some time but i promise youll get over it. once again i loved the poem and if writting helps you then write until your hand cramps thats what i did!
Jasmine
This poem was so true you want it to true but all he is is not true. I feel you gurl I feel you
rose
i think this poem is awesome. it reminds me so much of me.
Mandy
I absolutly loved ur poem it so has to do with me and my boyfriend! Some times he is so clueless!
Lili
This poem was a great poem because it is what i am feeling right now and the same way they explain it on the poem, thank you that helped a lot.
Kait
This poem was nice!
Courtney
This poem was so like the way I have been treated for so long! I finaly relise I am not the only one thats being treated this way!
niya
UR POEM IZ SO NICE AND IT MAKES U THINK ABOUT THINGS SUCH AS DO WE REALLY WANT TO FALL IN LOVE BECAUSE 2MORROW IZ NEVER PROMISED. GOOD POEM
linchea
the poem was nice so ill give you me vote
Brooke
this is the most touching poem and its so true! thats jux tha thing i needed to hear!
Loren
I REALLY liked this poem. I gave explaination without just spelling it out. You had to read and pay attention. Those are my fave kind of poems and this raked in my top five. Great job!
Kimberley
i loved your poem its really whats going on in my life now i just send it to him in an email and it even made him cry. thank you
katie
wow i really liked this poem. I t describes everything i am going through with my guy "friend" right now. I never knew how to write it in a poem but thanks to you now i do. but don't worry i wont copy it.
samantha
This is cute poem this reminds me of lot n my life
vanessa
it's kool
Amber
I relly liked this poem and i just wanted to let u know.
Jessica
I think that this is such a good peom that I was touched by it Love Jessica Salinas
lexie
OMG! i felt that you looked right through me. I mean that is exactly how my ex acted. I got so fed up with it that i DUMPED him. your poem told my story so exact that it's not even funny.
kiera
the reason why I wanted to vote is because I think that this poem is very toching I can real late to it in so many ways and how I thought that life was going to be perfect but its not and at first I thought it was a lie but I need to get over it tell the one day it happens it all comes crashing down on you and you cant do anything about it because its to late then I realized that it was true
Matthew
Hmm, a most excellent poem indeed. Your talent surpasses most I've seen on this site, excellent job. This poem, even though I haven't had the same experience, really got to me.
angelina
this was a good poem hope to read more of what u wrote
bernadette
This a great and touching poem I went out with this lad once and everyone told me he was bad news and it wouldnt last. I brushed it off because I loved him. Now I am happily married but not to him. That relationship went wrong. he put me down too much and i couldnt cope. I got so bad I sunk to depression but now I am over it and the reltionship. The poem is great XxXxX Bernie
raquel
This was a very good poem I really like it this was the best poem ever read in my life keep it up maybe one day you can write your our poem book.
Juanita
this is so poetic i love this!
VANESSA
i loved this poem it remind me of someone and they need to he this please make more and i give this poem a ten :] .
Sarah
This poem is very touching, I know what it feels like to be treated that way, its not long since happened to me, this is one of the most incredibly brilliant poems I have read before
Mikayla
Hey That was really deep I'm feeling the same way about a guy too! it's like you're me tryin to tell my story, only I can't!
Dominican grl
OMG I REALLLLLLLY LYK DIS POEM IT REMINDS ME OF WHEN I WAS WIT SOMEONE LAST YR. HE CHEATED ON ME ACTUALLY WIT ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS O FEEL SOOOO BAD FOR LETTIN THIS HAPPEN I FEEL LYK ITS MY FUAL TTHAT HE DID IT BUH OWELL. I GUESS I HAVE TA MOVE ON N' I DID IM WIT SUM 1 DAT IZ TREATIN ME SOOO GR8 U DNT EVEN KNOE I MET HIM ON MYSPACE
Vianna
your Poem Was really Sweet i really liked it. it hit close o home. keep them coming!
victoria
pure class an oh so tru!wel done!
laur
i like this one alot
FOFO
wow its very great poems i feel the same way that u write with the one who ilove i wish to u to complet in this way thanx for u
Beautiful
I liked this poem because of the fact it reminds me alot of my ex girlfriend supposably she was in love with me but all she was doing was running game but you cant run game on a player that's already pimping you. I thought we were at least going to last for a good while but the thing was she already had found her true love and i was someone one the side. She broke my heart and now I dont even know what to do
Lindsey
This poem is just what i went through with my ex-boyfriend. It really touched me in all the things it said. I really loved it
edna
Ilove this poem,I think this happened to me when I was in love,too with a stupid guy.
ciara
this poem is relly nice it relates with my life
Crystal
this poem is awsome! i really like it. i know how u feel about that guy it happend 2 me 2 im sorry but ur poem is so awsome love always Crystal
abby
thers nothing to say exept. wow,thats great. the emotion makes it that much better.
Jasmine
I LIKED THIS POEM IT WAS SAD BUT IT SEEMED SO REAL AND HEART FELT
Andrew
I tell u, tis is lyk ta best poem i hav eva read! It tell u wat, it made me reflect on my actions, n i found out tat i had been lyk tis. . thks 2 tis poem, i hav realised my mistake n i will try 2 change. GO PREPPIE!
Britt
i loved it it was so sad it really touched me
Kayla
Yoou have great talent to write such a poem. It touched me the first time I heard it because I use to feel as if I am in that same position. Great jog on the poem and I will love to read more from you!
Kay
I REAALY LYKED YA POEM BCUZ IT WAZ REALLY TRUE N I HAD ALOT OF EXPERIENCES LYKE DAT BEFO N MY LYKE
maria
this is a bom poem, all of this is true
Tiara
This poem is really good, i think that if Preooie's ex read this poem that he would relize what he did to her an how her heart was broken but i guess thats a guy for you!
Nancy
THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM IT IS VERY INTRESTING!
Dee
Good poem!
detesia
this was a very nice but sad love poem i give u an 7
Andrea
your poem really touched me in a very personal way. right now i am dealing with a problem like that with my boyfriend and just like you said how we wish that things could go back to the way they were, and they change and become a person that you never thought that they could ever become, but yes i understand, i miss my man and he started treating me bad, then one day good, then back to the same patteren. your poem helped me though alot of my pain. deepest regaurds, Andrea Lynn *thanks*
Cashae
i love this poem so much it make me think about my last love that hurt me.
amanda
i really like this poem it touched my heart the same thing happened to me. u are an really godd poem writter.
Jasmine
I love the poems I love you and When Someone Love you and Saying Goodbye. Please e-mail me more Thank You, Jasmine Manigo
bambi
I loved this poem, it is really great it kind off reminds me what i write in poems I writer similar to you
Amy
If i were to rate this poem out of 1-10, i would rate it 10! it is really touching and i really understood it. It nearly made me cry, probable because i have been reading lots of other sad poems. ok. i really loved it! Bye Amy
Coralma
This poem was sooooooooo nice omg it really touched me. i really like the flow omg this poem made me cry. Cry because all this poems says its true like what every couple goes through and especially my friend. I really love this poem and datz why i have it up on my wall THANK YOU for writing this poem yo ur the best. Sincerely, Coralma A. k. A Flaca!
simone
i can really relate to this poem. It ties back to many of my relationships. Its beautiful and it really touched me!
Jalissa
That is too deep man. i felt dat a couple of months ago! :(
Kaycee
this is wonderful poem, because my relationship is exactually the same as the poem. Talk about daja voo.
laporsha
wow i loved that poem i realli understand were u are coming from
holly
i really like this poem because me and my boyfriend just broke a relationship of 7 months and he was just like that soo great job.
Amy
This poem was very touching when I read it. It is true when you love someone you want them to stay.
ashton
this mis a wonderful poem and i can so relate. It was like if u wrote this for me
Brittany
I can really relate to this poem it sound like it was written just for me
Shantique
I think this was the best poem that i've ever read. I mean i am a teenager that hasn't had a lot of experience with boys except one which is my boyfreind. His name is charlie and he's the love of my life, but we have our ups and downs, but he's actually a nice guy and i love him and this poem reflected on our love and relationship. And i would really like to see more poems online by Preppie. Great job!
Jasmine
I got to give you yo props. this poem was off the chain it made me cry peace,love, and chicken greece
amanda
I ahev to say that peom was very touching cuz i had something just like that, my first love, the only one so far that really had me think that he was the only one i need and the last one. but he didint want me anymore and he was ingoring me after it, noteven saying hi. it hurts. im still not completly over him but i will evnually, keep writing that beautiful poetry, and ur not alone
Lolo
this poem was really good. it touched me deeply
Martha
WELL ALL I WANTED 2 SAY IS THAT YOUR POEM REALLY TOUCH MY FEELING. I ALSO WANTED 2 SAY THAT I KNOW HOW DOES IT FEEL'S THING THAT HE IS PERSON U WANTED. N THEN LEAVING U .
anu
this poem doesn't concern me, but at times this happens to me, because my bf is a jerk to me , but like I always tell him, that I run things around here, and then on out he listens to me,but we argue oever that but then everything goes back to normal,and that's why we are like this, but I really like this poem and I hope that alot more people read this.
Rashida
I think this is a great poem for the ladys. Holla at your girl if you write anymore.
Ashton
I love this poem. I am going through the SAME EXACT thing right now as I write this. Me and my bf went out for almost 6 months and then he decuded we should go on seperation. Well the seperation lasted for 5 days and then we got back together and things are not the same between us and I think I am about to break up with him. This poem really touched me and it hit home.
sylvia
this poem let me realize how there can be guys so cruel and self centered it really showed me how to think of guys
shenean
this poem really touch me. I have been through this situtation before! it hurt me bad!
tiffany
omg thats was the best poem i have eva heard!
Sheila
For the first time I read "When You Love Someone" Iwas really touched by this poem. It remind me of how my boyfriend treats me. Sometimes i have mix feelings about the relationship iam in but its probaly that i need to let him go and i wil even if i get my heart broken but is better for me then no love!i give the poet 5 thumbs up!
Faith
this poem is so true i thought who ever wrote this was following me because my x-boyfriend broke up with me rite before ten and on a saturday night i thought i almost wrote that poem. i loved it
TROYNESHA
I LOVE THIS POEM
krystal
i understand were she was coming from i truly hearts.
sommer
Iliked reading it and it made me think about of me and my boyfriend. I have the same feeling like that and sometimes i just cry about it because it makes me feel better and i know he loves me alot but sometimes i'm not sure about that and i don't know if he really does or not but than i just think of the times we have together and think of him holding me in his arms and than i know just how much i really love him and how he really loves me too.
kierra
this poem is s peaking about what im going through now. i loved it.
Amanda
This poem reminds me how I feel about my ex-boyfriend. Maybe he should read this poem. I really love this poem, you're really good.
angie
I know how to feel when I read the poem. I feel like that with my fiance. He stopped all the great affection months ago and when I bring it up to him That I'm hurting he gats mad. you Are not completley alone. angie
Bekah
I thought this poem was awesome because it reminds me of the tough times I was havind with my boyfriend at the time and everything that poem said as I was reading it felt like it was what i've been through. I would love to read more poems by this author and see what they have to say about other stuff that teens go through everyday. Well, g2g so,l8ter. LOVE ALWAYZ, Vampire15 a. k. a, Bekah
karissa
i love this poem it touched me deeply and i was a witness of something like this. thankyou karissa also i'm a poet.
shoneequah
This poem I believe it was for me to read today. I went through this same thing with my boyfriend. He stopped calling me for 4 days and then he called sweet talking me and stuff and then he got a female that I don't get along with to call my cell and tell me he wanted my friend instead of me I and I didn't get mad because im 16 he's 19 and she's 14 so I thought to myself he broke up with me for a child. He a child his self but he did play slick and got his friend to call me asking me questions while he's on the line listening but me and his friend is not together but we have freindly conversations, but now I know who my real friend are:GOD,my mother,and my cousin Courtney but the only thing different was I got my bad news Monday insead of Saturday.
Keetra
This poem reminds me so much of me and boyfriend girl u kno how 2 write a good love poem i was almost n tears because of this.
Tia
I loved your poem because the same thing just happened to me. I mean it was almost exactly the same but he ended up going out with my best friend. I know how hurt you are but everything will eventually end up being okay.
Alisha
I liked your poem alot! Its the perfect poem to describe me and my xs relationship! i printed it out and im going to give it to him. i write poems sometime and ive tried to explain how i felt about him in them but it seemed like i never could find the right words and this poem did it i think! i liked it alot! Keep writing!
mariah
This poem is GREAT! you are a great poet keef it up.
Brittany
I really think you did a great job and you should do more because you are realy good at them. Good Job
Angie
owwww that was cute
Amanda
this is a good poem it reminds me what my ex-boyfriend waldemar one day he was mean the next he was nice and now he has al these other girls but i dont care about him anymore
Kayla
That poem really did touch me. I almost cried when I read it. Whoever wrote this is a true poem writer. Very Very Poetic.
Kristie Marie
this poem made me cry. it reminded my of my ex-boyfriend!
samntha
its a really go poem and i love it
shari
I loved your poem and it was really good. It made me think alot. good job!
ashley
i liked it very much thats how i felt about this 1 relationship!
CRYSTAL
WELL I THINK YOU HAVE A GREAT HEART AND YOU NEED TO KEEP YOUR HEAD UP
Sheka
This poem really touched me because I have been in the exact same situation and I believe I am going through it AGAIN?! But my shout out goes to Preppie! Thanks to this poem I have the courage to stand up and forget about this boy. Thank you much
Zak
wow. thats all i can say . i know kinda how ya feel ya know i got a couple poems and they arnt as good and deep as this one. how did you come up with it??
Samantha
I liked this poem because the same exact thing happened to me.
ashley
this is a very sad poem but it is very good it sounds like it is coming from the heart and you should keep writing if you feel this way 5*****
jami
oh my gosh i love this poem,because i can so relate thats what exactly happed!i love this poem becaus its so true and touches the heart and really describes what gose on in a situation like that i loved it write more. ~jami quinn~
taylor
my sone loves someone.
alin
that once happend to me and it's pretty cool. it's all true i think everything goung right but then it breaks so it's a cool poem!
helen
I loved this poem when i was in 8th i was in a very abusive relationship. I stayed in it for a whole year always thinking that he did not mean it and when he apologized he really meant it and would not do it again. He would always say how i was not pretty enough and he would get into fights with guys that i talked to. I never really talked about it and i only told my newest bf 4 months into the relationship. This poem gave me the courage to finally talk about it and tell my bf thank you for writing this and i hope you keep on writing you have alot of talent.
cody
OMG this poem is the story of my life when i was goin out with one of my ex boyfriends i love it so much this poem is the best
natosha
this poem is sad i touchs me to kow there other girls out there that has had the same thing as me.
Janette
really touchin!
nicole
this poem is very sad. it reminded me of how it was when me and my ex michael were going out. thats exactly how he acted before we broke up.
kelley
heyy i really liked this poem!
Karen
I love this poem I dedicated this to my boyfriend to tell him how much I love him.
Markeashia
That is a nice poem
Georgina
this poem has touched me deep down I could tell the feelings of this person so easily. this poem made me cry
Noeleen
Just perfect!It felt good to read the exact words that are so hard to put into words by myself as i was there once too. All the best for more poems. its everything i expected to read! You've got what it takes to be a poet. I just hope nothing so heart aching ever happens to anyone!
Samantha
I really liked the poem it touched me so much. I can relate to it. Great poem!
veronica
wow. that is so awesome and very touching. Thats about how it was for me. this is one of my favorite poems.
kelly
9 1/4 ThAt WaS So GrEaT iT iNsPiReD mE. GOOD JoB
Katrina
I love this poem. I can relate to it so much. I like poems that I can relate to and poems that touch me. And this poem touched me and I can relate to it
Thao
Its a great poem that i had read. i love when at the first time i read it. I can feel the strong sadness feeling as i read it. well its hard to express the feelings. so just wanna say its a very wonderful poem n the author has a very good wrote n a very nice structure of this poem. atlast, Thank you very much for sharing the poem. n i would love 2 copy n keep it. !
Holly
this poem is very sexy
kassie
this is a really good poem, sad kinda feel sorry for u but it was good u know. keep it up hopefully none of this happens again
KRISTEN
This poem was so touching cause i know someone who is going through the same things, all we can do is move on
pratichi
hiya . tis is d only poem in d whole of ma life i was searching apoem whch will exactyl eman n defien wat i want n it has d material
ashley
this is a great poem it is true with me 2!
nola
Your peom was nice i liked the way you rhymed it.
Nana
As i was reading this poem it felt like about the same thing i was going through,He would tell me he loved me and that he would never leave, I see u went through the same thing but is there more 2 da srory??? He could of just told me and i would of left him but no, he would beg me not to leave him, but there he was doing his dirt behind my back, If i would of know back then, shit would of been different now. BUt this poem was BEautiful how Ironic that It went down on a Sat exactly at 10pm LIke it happened wit Me, And On everything I NEVER Sn!tCh3d, Take It from a woman who WAS also Deep In LOVe
kelly
the reason why this poem touched is because the way she said those things relates to my boyriend that i have right now but i can't see him for 4 weeks and he's not my boyfriend he is my soon to be husband or whatever it is that you want to call so yeah well anywho that's what i think about the poem and maybe one day again the girl that wrote this poem will find true love until then im gonna say good-bye, kelly ann eckhoff
rebecca
i like this poem a lot i really did it touched me however you guys want to say it because my ex-boyfriend did the same thing to me so yeah!
Brittany
this is a really good peom i loved it.
Rosa
yes this really touch me it made me think about what happenend
Ebony
I really liked this poem it told true meaning and shows what can really happen in a relationship.
Veronica
This poemis ill it speaks da truth sry this happened to you. peace
Britni
This was an excellent poem. keep up the good work.
carolina
the reason i voted this poem was becuz i had felt that way b4 and when you finally met that special sum 1 and stupid you 4 thinking that he was the one that you saw ur self with in the future and then you are blinded by the sight of not knowing wut was goin on so you think it was sumthing that you did and probably 2 days later he wants to come back to u and apologize 4 everything that he ever did to hurt you but rite then you finally realize that he is not worth it and knowing that sumthing was gonna happen and you'll here it on the t. v. holla girl luv ya even i don't no u loved ur poem hopefully you make more poems so i can read them. ur a good poet writer
XITLALIC
I LIKE THIS POEM TO CAUS EIT HAS A POINT TO IT AND I LIKE IT ITS NOT BORING OR DULL IT ACTUALLY GOT ME INTO IT ANDREADING IT
hillary
I thought this poem was very good and it is very touching i loved it explains a lot about what i am going through
Ashley
I love what you did with this poem. I know how you feel. I once went through the same thing.
broken
this has heppened to me so man times i feel your pain and i know that it's hard but you'll make it through
jessica
i really liked this poem. it is so sweet and i want to congratulate who ever wrote this because it is so sweet and hey maybe next time she/he can write one about me (lol). i really liked this poem.
heather
i really love your pome it says alot. it seems like all women do the same thing we want to belive that he is the same and you are the one to blame but thats not the case. i loved the poem.
Brooke
I really liked the poem. It is similar to what i am going through right now.
Jessica
I love it ! It's so true !
diamond
that was cold i like it
raghida
its wonderfull
tip
that was a very wonderful poem i know how you fell girl
lavina
his poem touchs people in relationships and that guys like that are jerks!
sindney
this is a nice poem i had sent this to my man and he loved it. you can write preppie
Raesheania
This poem is true for some girl. For me it was. Im a writer too i like write poems but there all sad and things. I really like this one. It was true for me.
lady
this is a very beautiful and touchin poem when i read this poem i got tears to my eyes it touched my heart it seemed so resl when i was reading it like i was the girl believe some of that poem remonds me of me. i hope u win hun. good luck!
April
I loved it i can relate to it in so many ways i was with this guy for 8 years and this exact thing happened to me it felt as if the world would come to an end i really loved this poem and it touched me in various ways
CORRINA
I LIKE YOUR POEM ALOT
Jasmine
Girl that poem was so touching and i loved it i write poems i hope mine be as touching as that but i am only 12 going on 13 and that has happend to me before. GOOD LUCK!
megan
that poem is very well written great job.
Shatica
THIS POEM WAS GOOD AND I REALLY LIKE IT A LOT U DID UR THING
gio
this poem was of the hook n i could deftinly re;ate to it
moon
i loved this poem. tonight im gonna share this with my boyfriend. i remember giving him nightmares but i went back to him. now i know what he must have felt!
adrianna
this poem was soo touching. its amazing. it reminds me of the troubles my bf and I are going through . you are an amazing poet
lucylu
OMG! guys r absolute idiots! eva heard of revenge? get revenge on him, find his new girls and make up lies about him, preti soon he'll wonda y they can't get away frm him fast enough! trust me. i'm an expert in revenge! ive had serius practice. btw, your poem rocked! keep up the gr8 worK!
Ashley
i LOVE the poem keep it coming
Nana-Boat
I'm so glad that I logged onto this poem, because it was sweet, this poem also related to my boyfriend and I.
Kayleeshia
It was real deep I liked it a lot
terasja
this peom is the boom
lindsey
I really liked this poe cuz this poem that yall wrote fits perfectly fine to me and my ex-boyfriend.
mercedes
I relly liked this poem if there was a scale from 1 to 10 it would be a 10.
amanda
this is such a good poem. ! i love it
Jasmine
It was so sweet because im going through something like that, and this poem was telling the truth every wor dwas about me
elizabeth
it was great and sad but still great
Erika
that is a great poem it really touched me alot please keep up the great work and i will read more. dont let anything get into your way
sade
I'm also a great poem writter. Your words were so well chose and deep. There so true and I can relate to what you were saying.
krista
omg ur poem is ssooo cute it reminds me of me and my friend haha
Crystal
I feel like this could be the best poem iv ever read
baby
this is true, jus what happened to me mine was a shock tho broke up wit me one day at work
Danely
very good i like it a lot
muhammad
I loved this poem. it touched my heart, maybe because i went through the same thing with my first luv. one day he was tellin me dat i was sexy and that he wanted to one day marry me. dat we was gon go to prom together and dat i would be wifey & we'd spend the rest of our lives together. BUT 4eva didn't last that long! and now i got me some1 betta. and ur poem helped alot! THANKZ!
TARA
SADDD. =(
leanne
i really really love this peoms coz my boyfriend was jst lyk it and den i found out dat he cheated on me
LeighAnne
This poem was Awsomeit really tuched me and i know what you went through Because i am going throught the same thing right now! REALLY GREAT JOB
chelsea
i love this poem. i can so easily relate to it. it almost made me cry. great poem!it touched my heart. I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.
Jamie
I can relly relate to this poem, i just went through the same thing last month.
Ariana
This poem is sooooooooo sad. I really enjoyed reading it. Good Job! :)
Ana
yeah I understand it has happened to me before and it really hurts!
Autumn
I really liked your poem and I know how you feel, I can relate but it was an awesome poem.
Emma
i thought this was a very nice poem. i'm kinda confused at the last paragraph though, but i still liked it.
kasandra
This poem is PHENOMENAL. Not only i have felt the feeling love, then felt pain, grief and became heartbroken, it has made me stronger in so many ways. I do not regret my days with the boy i called my own because the past makes you who you are today. He made me who i am today. Girls dont let a guy bring you down because you may not feel like your not worthly. Your worthly of any guy that enters you life. LOVE is a strong word and a fantastic feeling. You will feel it again one day, trust me.
niki
i well i just like this poem. it kinda souds like my life because my bf is kinda like a gansta and one time i was about 2 lose him. i think he was gonna have a fight at school, i almost cried, but i didn't. i'm so lucky he didn'thave a fight because if he had he would've been transfer in2 a different school. and when i found out he was a gansta i cried at night during the moon was out and everybody was asleep, sound asleep. i kept thinking he might be doing someth'in dangerous right now. u know, i saw a small boy smokin w/ his friend. then i thought of my bf, and if he smoke. i'll tell u a secret i hate smokers!
Mariah
This Poem is so Good. I Love it!
JASMINE
I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS GREAT AND IT SHOWS ME THAT NOT EVERYTHING IS WHAT YOU WANT IT TO BE
Nicole
I just want to say that I'm going through exactly what this poem said. and to hear that others are going through what I am, I know I'm not the only one going through it. I'm sorry that you had to feel this way. and I just want to let you know that this poem is great and no matter what any guy may tell you. don't listen to it until you know for sure that he means it. and sometimes you never know when he means it or not. It's something that you got to chance.
Mercedes
I just love this poem it relates to me and my ex-boyfriend,what he has done to me.
Clarissia
I THINK IS ONE OF BEST POEMS I HAVE EVER READ. THIS HAS HAPPENED TO ME ONCE BEFORE SO I CAN FEEL WHERE YOU ARE COMING FROM. KEEP YOUR HEAD UP.
Jessica
This Poem touched me so good that i feel like i can go on with my life and the same thing happened to me its just good to know im not alone Thanks
Amanda
this poem is ecxellent and really touched my heart. i can really relate to it because i'm going through it right now
Jordan
I really. really like this poem it really touched me. I think that this would be one of the best "Tenn Poems" that I have read so far. adn I really liked it!
jessica
I Luved this peom it touched me cuz me and my boyfriend were having problems with our relationship we broke up and now were back together but it was very touching
tiesha
that really touched me. im also in love with a boy very much he seems right i hope im not wrong.
Kellz
I can Relate to this poem because thats how i kind of feel right now
matica
I love it!
ally
I loved it! 'caz that realy happiens. It sure happen to me. this poem bergins memmorise. thanks alot!
Samantha
This poem realy touched me because it reminded me of a realationship i had in the past.
Chryistal
The poem was really sad!
cherwaylon
that is a perfect example of ky relationship
Nicole
this poem is really sweet and it is true
gLis
Beautifully done. I can really relate to this one. As i read the poem, my tears fell down. . .
sn00pygirl
this has really happened to me. this is how i feel with my bf
Desma
I really like this poem
wani
it is reali a sad poem. i almost burst out crying n ur words rhyme. i reali love de words u used in ur poem.
katie
i like it. It reminds me of a situation that i was in before.
princess
it is a very good peom
kelsey
i really loved this poem it was sad but true.
vanessa
this poem was so vivid i could really relate to it how one day things could be going so perfect and the next its like everything is the total opposite how u think u 2 r gonna spend the rest of ur lives together and a few days later u 2 are practically strangers
Ricca
This poem really reminded me of my boyfriend and it was kind of true. It the truth from top to the bottom.
emma
the poem was really good i sent it to my friend n she had tears in her eyes its brilliant
Steph
I really liked this poem because a lot of people are going through the same thing so if someone is going throgh this too then you know you arent alone.
Sammy
i really like your poem because it makes me think. and make me hope my love never goes in that direction!
tara
this was very touching i could really relate this poem to my life right now. i am glad you wrote this and i read it; it made me realize that the man of my dreams will never be like th wat he was before when we were going out.
Tequila
I LIKE THIS POEM ALSO. U CAN REALLY WRITE!
Whitney
wow. i've personally been through that and its true. thats basically how it happened too. i loved your poem, youre a great writer. i give it a 10!
Mandie
I loved this poem. I just broke up with my bf after 3 years, and It happend to be on a saturday at round 11pm, lol, It really touched me and i could really relate
Carolina
It reminded of me. I had a relationship like that and one day I had to let go. nothing is forever
tiera
this was a really good poem but i was really sad!
Christopher
I really like that poem. Thats how my ex-girlfriend treated me.
jasmine
I REALLY LIKED THIS. BECAUSE THIS EXACT THING HAPPENED TO ME JUST A FEW DAYS AGO. I WAS SO IN LOVE WITH MY B/F N HE WAS THE SWEETEST PERSON EVER. BUT THEN HE STARTED CHANGING N BROKE MY HEART N NOW ALL HE WANTS IS TO B FRIENDS.
Rahkeda
It was a very good poem.
Samantha
OMG yo i feel this poem so much! this was jus ike my last relationship, mths ago, and im still cryin over it! i gave him everything but sum ppl jus dont kno wut to do wen they hav everythang in there face. so im def. feeling this story!
Stephanie
Your Poem Was Nice
angelica
I thought it was really nice and i think you should keep on writeing peoms beause this one touched me I have not been in a relationship like this but if I did this would have made me cry because of the memorys in that relationship
Gabrielle
It really spoke to my heart and I felt this way last year with my boyfriend
Kirsty
This is a beautiful poem. I like it a lot, it's so sad and bittersweet. Well done, you did a good job.
jade
this poem is so sweet
jenny
i like ur poem u know i loved someone so mich tat i cyerd but now . i still remember him cuz he gave me my 1 kiss and also we love each other but then we didn't. keep up the good work on ur peoms
zari
this poem was so wonderful it touched m deeply
Clarissia
I just wanted to say that I understand how you must have felt when you two broke up. I recently experienced a relationship like that and I just wanted to say to never give up. Life does get better.
Chelsea
I love this poem,it was amazing,great job and i'd love to read more by you . :)
Anna
This poem is kinda what I went through with my ex and it was nice to know I'm not the only one.
carla
this really touched me b/c it waz sooo seet i loved this poem man i wish i would 've thought of this first! hahahaha well thats all so bye
Tiffany
I loved the poem it really touched my heart. I thought that my first love would last 4ever into he broke up with me 1 day and then he wanted 2 get back and i love him so i said yes but i wasnt the same so i ended up braking up with him a couple months later. But the poem was really good
jenny
this is the most true poem ive read, i love it!
jeanette
well yor poem touch me I am 14 and i am going threw the same all though he aint gone yet but could be he is going threw the wrong steps and ignores what i say to him it feels horable
Samantha
The reason why I like this poem so much is because this is exactly what im goin;' through.
shakira
I really think that this poem was very sad and touching. It was also deep
lauren
this is a really good poem. it's how my last relationship was. a lot like it. it's a very moving poem. good job!
heather
That was a VERY touching poem! It brought a tear to my eye!
Becky
i loved it and i hope you make more
sara
sweet! great poem hun, keep going!
Victoria
I liked this poem a lot. It reminded me of my relationship with my boyfriend. I just want all ya'll to know that sometimes love can be blind but no always. There is still a chance to find true love.
Corutney
this poem touched me because i have a boyfriend and i am experienceing these issues and i know how it feels but to me it jsut doesnt feel right to end it so i jsut let it go most of the time and so it gets to me and when i finally tell him about it we have a fight and we always think thats the end of it but then we talk about it and it passes over. i enjoyed this poem very well.
jackie
I really liked the poem alot and thought it was really good. Mine sound somewhatlike that. But it was really good :)
richelle
i really love ur poem its really good it was so sweet
sandy
Hi. A really very heart touching poem. but for my case HE should be replaced by SHE
chevez
i really liked tha poem you r a very creative person and it really touched my heart b cuz i wuz like dat once upon atime
TYRONE
I LOVE THIS POEM GOOD JOB
anna
this poem is good & it toched me and it is so deep and i rite poems to and ur real*** good at it and i think that you should work on it & youll be eveen better at it when ever you get older and i think that poem is very great. to be continued.
Desiree
This poem made me cry and touched me in a very special way. It reminds me of the way my ex-boyfriend used to be so I understand what you went through. I tried to forget about him and move on even though I loved him with all my heart. In the end, it is not worth it. All that happens is wrong so get over him and move on. I know it's hard but you can do it!
Sonia
wow,that poem was like the best poem I have ever read you reminded me of my ex boyfriend and how I was really sad for a long time. Preppie you are really good poet! you ROCK!
Niza
tis story really touched me because all that it said was all true
Phaletrius
I really did enjoyed this poems. You are a good writer and I wish you the best.
Dawn
I really like this poem and know somtimes I can relate!
samira
i think the poem was great. it kinda reminds me and my friend.
Jessica
I love this poem, It touch me in many of ways. This poem tells the truth, When u think or know u love someone and you know u are always going to be there for each other, it makes u think on life and u will share it with.
Tashawnna
This poem touched my heart. If i had to rate this poem from 1-10,I would rate it a 10. I fell ya pain cuz. We need more people like u who can explain other people pain while at the same time explaining yours. thank alot homie,I could have never explained my feelings better myself.
Naomi
your poem was great i love it. you really get the emotions of someone in that situation across. i went through that once and it was exactly like you described it in your poem. your poem has real meaning to people in that situation or who have been through it. keep writeing you have a talent for it.
PHILLISHA
THIS POEM IS SO TRUE ME AND ME BOYFRIEND WERE GOING THROUGH THIS SO I GAVE HIM THIS AND NOW HE GETS HOW I WAS FELLING SO HE CHANGED THANX SO MUCH FOR THIS POEM
sara
dis touched me soo much it reminds me of my life
brittany
hey i loved it because i had a boyfriend like that once and i thought i was going to die when he left me.
Jacqueline
i think this peom really opened anther side of me. Thank-you.
Yvonne
THE POEM WAS GREAT! I LOVED IT ALOT. I COULD REALLY FEEL WHERE YOU WERE COMING FROM AND I COULD REALLY RELATE TO IT!
Kristina
Girl i can totally relate to what you wrotw. it brings back the memory of my first love .
kathy
i really liked this poem because it really touched ma heart alot and when i was reading this poem the only thing i could think about is him but keep up the good work
LaQuita
I loved this poem. It was like reminiscing on a past relationship that I just had. I intentionally went through the same things.
Samantha
i really liked this peom it really tells how it was in my last relationship of 1year and 1/2
cassi
omg thts so sad it reminds me of my ex and wht happened i luv it! its the best ive read so far!
shannon
i really likes your poem it touched me cuz the same thing hgappened to me . shannon p. s. 1 bein the worse amd 10 bein the best i give you a 9!
amelia
that was great me and my boyfriend went through a rough patch but luckly we made up it was not your loss but his he wasnt worth it
dyna
the poem reminds me of my boyfriend centered friends. they gave up everything and end up in nothing
shai
I LIKED YOUR POAM DONT WORRY THOUGH EVERY THING WILL TURN AROUND I BROKE UP WITH MY BOYFRIEND ABOUT 7 MONTHS AGO HIS NAME WAS DANNY ALSO BUT NOW I MET JASON HES MY WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH EVERY THING WILL TUN AROUND FOR YOU ALSO
kelly
this helped me its brilliant its exactly how i feel
brittany
this poem was very good im very interesteds inhearing more from you in the furture
mandy
I liked this poem, it touched me i know what the person is going through i have gone through it with the guy i like more than anyone and he puts me down sometimes he says hes only joking but sometimes i don't know.
Nessy
Wow, it just amazing poem. I'm truly felt same way before. I just had to blame my feelings, but now I know. Sometimes aint easy for be in relationship if you truly sure if you in love with someone deeply and kept going and going all after that, it went harder not to think "this is not what happening" but it did. Turn out into bad sides and becoming emotional with the pain that cause be heartbroken. Keep writitng.
sarah
omg! this poem is amazin ur a really good poet !
jocelyn
wow that poem is good sad and very emotional but i have a question. di that really happen if it did soory i feel that som of those things happen
pimp
this is like the best poem I ever read
TWINKIE
this is so cute and all so true it really touched me and it made me cry
raechel
"wow" thats all i have to say about this poem it touched me inside . I really liked this poem it was amazing and sweetand raw and o my god do i like this poem it made me cry and think all at the same time wow ,wow ,wow, wow, wow very good poem!
Oriona
when i read this poem it put me in tears cause ma x boyfriens was also like this so i just wonted to tell you this is#1 in ma list
Charley
I love this poem it really does not lie. Because i've had the same type of relationship.
NISHA
Its fantastic. a clear picture of what happens in life. its true.
Tanyka
Nice poem!
jocely
i love this poem i wish i wont happen to me but its so cute
princess
I think this poem really tells the truth cause most guys are like that treat you like a princess for like two weeks then starts treating you like dirt so it really is a wonderful and truthful poem
Holly
Omg this poem is a perfect description of my last relationship. I can definitely relate to it!
Step
This poem to me was touching and out there. it reminds me of a relatonship i once had, i guess that's why i was so attached to reading it.
Kelsey
I just wanted to let u kno that I really liked your poem and that you have talent. Your poem really touched me cuz it reminded me of a recent relationship i had that went wrong. Keep doin your thing girl!
patricia
I love your poem because you wrote it with your hart and soul
rachel
this is so awesome! i love this poem it is exacally how me and my boyfriend are but i hope that the end of your poem doesnt come true in mylife
helaina
omg this is the best poem ive ever read in my hole life aye. its exactly omg. this shold be published or sumfing aye. awwwww wow its soo good
Jasmin
This was a pretty poem
Shardae
i really like this poem . this kina like dsscribes me and my love ife. if i had to vote from 1-10 it would be an 9.
Michelle
i loved this poem it was like what i went through with my ex shawn i thought he was great but i know now i was just wasting my time until i found my fiancee my one true love that was such a wonderful poem
sandra
I liked very much
regine
this poem can so totally relate to me except the dating part. there was this guy i really like alot and he was so nice to me then all of a sudden he started ignoring me and now i feel like he treats me less then the dirt he walks on. i feel so low.
bri
awesome poem, great rhyming, really gets the story and feeling across. love it!
Macaila
i really liked this poem it really felt like it was really happening it was like i was in tha poem tha way you expressed it i really like it
ASHA
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL POEM! PREPPIE, YOU REALLY CAPTURED THE WORDS BEAUTIFULLLY ON PAPER, THAT CAPTURED MY HEART. THREE CHEERS FOR PREPPIE!
Haley
Hey. wow that Poem was amazing! seriously! I'm a poem writer and that was better then any poem i have ever written and its right up there with one of the best poems I've ever heard! Keep writting! ~!~ Haley ~!~
breana
the poem wuz excellent
angel
WOW!It really does hurt when think something is going to last and all of a sudden it all ends. Great poem keep it up!
Samantha
i really liked this poem alot and i would enjoy if this person send me another one of there poems like this because just by reading one of these poems it inspers me to do better in life !
Ashley
This poem is far by one of the best I have ever read before, just by reading this poem, you know that this could happen to you one day. I love this poem so much your a good writer/poet
Trisha
this poem was a good one for real
Raven
I really love this poem because it has so much feeling and it is also deep . All I have to say is keep riting because you inspire me.
Christina
I can relate to this poem. I was just in a recent relationship that reminded me of this poem. I thought the poem was very deep.
CiNdY
That's a great poem. describes what happened to me once. Love it! 8)
sayo
omg i cried it was so sad and good it reminds me that love can be cruel and that maybe i'm not the only 1 hurting and that i should smile for the good times now because i might not be able 2 smile later
maria
wow nice poem deep too
farhiyo
i really love your poem and i really touched me cause i haev a lover like that so i hope everything worked out for you okay and keep on writing those poems for us cause people that haev been thour wht u have been thour will read that so good luck.
vanessa
I REALLY LIKE YOUR POETRY BECAUSE I FEEL ALL THE AMOTIONS THAT WAS GPING ON IN THE PEOM I REALLY LIKED IT GOOD JOB YOUR WORK HAS BEEN COMPLETE KEEP WRITING MORE POEMS OK
Blanca
I think it was a really good poem and u expressed ur self and those are exactly the words that i wanted to say to my ez boyfriend
Alisha
I loved this poem.
Jasmin
This is a really true poem. I think you did a really good job on it. Keep up the good work and be sure to write more poems, I'll be sure to read them. I've had the same feelings before and I didnt think any1 had been through the same thing and felt the same way I felt before. -Jaz
eb
i loved that poem is was very unique. i feel the same way bout my boyfriend. he was the nicest thing then one day he jus flip the script on me. love hurts. dont it keep up the good work
leemah
this poem was ment for me about my ex
Trouble
I really liked your poem, I thought it was good. Something like that happened to me and my boyfriend he broke up with me but now we are back together so hopefully it works out this time.
Jonathan
I love it. Who ever made wrote this, they should get a medal.
Darcel
This is a very good poem because it speaks out,and let people know that a man can hurt a women as well as she can hurt him!
jessica
i like it because it tells a story of what some women actually go through.
mini
I love your poem
Niki
This is a great poem it describes many teen relationships luckily I have not been in one of these relationships and I hope I never end up in one. I Love poetry I am a poet myself but I write poems of sadness and I got a few of Love that I had for a very close friend of mine. He was the best guy I knew back in my Home state. But this is a great poem I really liked it. Sincerly Niki Mckeag Age 17
Melisanda
I really like this poem because its true about do some of the guys out there. It touched me because the guy she was talking about is just like the guy I like and it wouldn't be a surprise that he come out in the news dead or in jail. It will hurt me a lot.
Terry
This poem really touched me it's like is exatly what I whent thrue. whith my boyfriend for like 3 years he was so nice and then 1 day he just stared treating like I WAS WORTHLESS! I'm really amazed your poem is very good you should keep on doing this it looks like your good at it.
Ashley
This peom was awesome. The rymes flowed together and it all mixed right. Be sure to keep writing! You can do anything with a little help from the power of words!
Genny
I love this poem it made me cry ,thats wat happend to me exeped the last part
Lauren
Your poem truly touched me. I am 14 years old and my boyfriend broke up with me recently. I truly think i was in love with him. Your poem sounds like our relationship and one day i hope he regrets what he did, but until then all i can do is wait.
jasmine
this poem was the bomb! whoever wrote this i give you mad props, i love poetry and this one by far was the best one. !
shanika
this is an sweet and true poem! keep it up!
Stephanie
I think this is the one of the greatest peoms I have ever read in my life! It's a very good peom.
Shelby
I like your poem alot it is really cool. It kind of sounds like me and i hope you can write more poems like that.
kirstan
keep up the good work!
Brittany
This poem really touched me it made me start to cry.
Chiquita
I feel you on the poem. Its like I just went through a situation similar to this poem. Good Job!
Samantha
I love this poem because it's how I feel about my boyfriend and I at a time.
debora
your poem is very nice. i liked a lot because i know that's true by self experience. good luck and write more poems
India
I loved what you wrote even though I was hoping it would end like a fairy tale. But thats life! It was so deep! But so beautiful Thanks 4 writing and sharing!
Brianna
This would describe my old relationship. Great Poem!
Tiffany
this poem was wat exactly happend to my best friend
Griselda
i really really like love this poem it so what teenegers pass through these days in theyre relashionships i would rate this poem 100
Sara
THis was touching because the EXACT i mean the EXACT same thing happened to me!
nene
i like this poems
michelle
i thought this was an exclant peom that realy move me althought im still quite young and have never experinced real love your peom was very touching cheers Michelle
whitney
i love it it reminds me of my first love matt i thought i loved him and i thought he loved me then a month later we split cause of his friends and i thought my world was coming to an end ut it wasnt and i was wrong so i picked up the pieces and moved on !
Isaiah
This poem was great. I was very touched by this poem because i'm really going through the same thing with my girlfriend
cynthia
the poem is true about me i know how you fell i had a boyfriend who was like that and that is a great to express you self.
Kathy
i love it i hope you win alot of money and great comments for your poems. its very touching
Lover
I don't know why but i related to every single word in this poem. Even the date and everything i really enjoyed it i even cried for my ex!
shauna
i love this so much
Cyndi
I really liked this poem I can really relate to it.
mandy
i loved it. it reminds me of myself in each and every one of my relationships
Adelina
This poem touched me so much i could of cried. This poem can probably relate to every single girl without a doubt. Good Work
Lauren
This poem has touched my heart in a thousand ways. I thought i was the only girl out there who was desperately in love with a boy. But Preppie, i have just read your poem which shows emotions exactly the same as mine. I know EXACTLY how you feel, because me and my boyfriend have just split up and i knew it was coming. I dreamt of marrying him and all the wonderful things you described. But teenage love isnt like that is it. It stinks! I thankyou for writing this poem, you have made me feel so much better now that i know i am not alone. Us girls should definately stick together!
melanie
i loved this poem because it touched me cause i know what it was like to go through it and have those feelings.
chelsea
This was a beatiful poem. It reminded me of what I am going through now. I love this guy, and we have been going out and breaking up for 2 years, and i always think it's my fault. I have to hide my relationship when i was at school. But that poem really reminds me of our history. One night he was sweet as can be, the next day it was like he wasn't the same person. We wouldn't grow together. It felt so fake at one point I wanted to give up. We are still together today. But I just wanted to let you know that it really hit home.
Jatoria
i like the poem because its a poem i'm sure alot of girls or maybe even boys could relate to. i never had a boy i was in love with end up the news but i can relate.
apple
after reading this poem, it really expresses my feeling as i am going through this stage now. everything is so unpredictable. we must learn to be strong.
shayla
man i really loved this poem cuse i can really relate to this this poem is so related to me afta i read it i juss cryed cause i kno how it is to feel like that and i kno it hurts and it is somethin that you wil neva for get ya kno well holla back at cha gurl
BNSG
I LOVED UR POEM, B/C IT DESCRIBES MY PRIOR RELATIONSHIP WITH A FELLOW STUDENT OF MY'N. I LOVED HIM DEARLY AND THAT'S WHEN IT ALL TURNED BAD. HE STARTED TREATING ME LIKE THE DIRT BENEATH HIS FEET AND WHEN I CONFRONTED HIM ABOUT IT, HE ONLY DENIED IT. I MISS HIM, I REALLY DO. AND IF YOUR READING THIS Z_C_ GON_A_ES,I NOT ONLY MISS YOU,BUT I LOVE YOU TOO!
Angela
this poem is so nice this is one of the poems that im gonna give to my boyfriend
shannel
I LOVED YOUR POEM AND IT TOUCHED ME SO VERY DEEP BECAUSE I WENT THROUGH THE SAME THING YOU DIDAND TILL THIS DAY I CAN'T GET OVER IT.
jerseylyn
wowwwwwwww! what can i say? this one really touched my heart. i can relate in this poem and i felt that its sincere. its the best,, its for every teenage like me who fell inlove.
kevin
thank you for this me and my gurl friend are suprised by how nicly vell this is.
Rebecca
This poem is AWSUM! :p . Its so true and is exactly how most relationships happen. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved it! it really touched me and i felt so close to the person who wrote this.
genesis
oh my god thats just how it is with me and this guy ryan and it sucks all he does now is treat me like dirt and it took me until now to come out and say it
abdul
amazing and lovely. but so true
cierra
this poem was excellent i really understand falling in love with the wrong man and believing that you could change him and his relationship with you was different. Remember you can do all thing threw Christ that strenghten you Phillipan 3:13. Be Good!
Ashley
????what happened to the boy???** Luved the poem. very touching. is it a true storey??
Catherine
This was a great poem and it really hit the spot. I have heard but like this one the best. I write poems all I want to know is what puts you in the mood to write poems.
nikki
good
mary
nice. it was sad. but i know one can do better. keep on trying ~mary~
Felicia
I really like this poem because it happened to me when i was going out with this one guy for a year and it really brought back memeries and i really wanted to cry when i read it but i didnt and now i am going to print this poem and but it in my box were i write my poems at so who ever wrote this thank you it really got me.
Kieara
I really liked it
Denise
hey, what's up? i know how you feel. i lost the love of my life.
olga
I could really relate to this because this is what the love of my llife did to me and now we are just friends but well that still works. I was so very touched and it was so well composed.
DOna
i like the poem and think the person that wrote it did a good job at writting it
priscilla
I think that this poem has a lot to do with my boy friend! I like everything but not the last part.
sasha
i love your poem
Ashley
my ex boyfriend was exactly the same way everything would be good and then suddenly it wouldnt. untill i found out he ws cheating on me with his ex. I still cry at nights whaen I think about how we used to love each other so much. but its all in the past.
Veronica
This poem remind me on what happend to me and my ex. I read it and made me cry. I give my congratulations on whom ever wrote this.
Roxy
This poem is really touching and happens often. 1st you think everything is going to perfect and then wow! Suddenly everything has change and you never expected it. You think why? But never really get to know the answer. This poems relates to many situations and I think that this poem is really touching and meaningfull. It lets you think about your own realtionship with the one YOU love. This poem has touched my heart.
Jenn
I really liked this poem i think its very true because somethin lik dis happened to me 2 before.
Kayla
I really loved this poem. It kind of made me think of my ex boyfriend. I was so happy with him, then he just changed. but any way's i love your poem. It's great. ~Kayla~
jade
i have only just began to get in to pomes, and with this one. it touched me in a way that i thought that has only happen to me with how yor ex has treated you and you thought it was your falt well our bad thank for this pome love jade
Shirley
I thought this poem was so beautiful it almost brought a tear to my eye. It reminds me of my ex-boyfriend. Wonderful Job!
meghan
i think this poem is great beause just abou the same thing happened between me and my exboifrind. just things went a little different.
Kourtney
Your poem is the best poem that i have ever heard. It had re***y tuched me i went through that same tradgic. He and I are so close now we are best friends I heard he likes me again and I hope that you and your boyfriend can become friends again like we are.
David
Right on. keep it up.
DASHA
i love this poem
alicia
i absolutely love this poem it touched my heart so much and i can relate to it so much i love this poem.
Marlene
I Love this poem it hits a certaint place inside and makes you realize it has happened to you.
Julie
Out of 1-100 I would vote this a 101 cause this poem explains everything bout me and this is how i really feel
sharon
Oh my gosh
Brittany
i just wanted to let you know that i love your poem and it touched me.
Vallencia
i love this poem because it reminds me of one of my ex boyfriends
April
hEY THIS POEM REALLY TRULEY TOUCHED ME BECAUSE ITS EXACTLY HOW I FELL RIGHT NOW IT MADE ME CRY I LOVE THIS POEM!
sabrina
tHIS POEM WAS SO SWEET AND IT REALY TOUCHED ME!
nesha
I really like dis poem it make me think real hard about boys like u don't know which one is Mr. Right but keep up da good work and may God bless with more poems to write.
Chelsea
I think that this poem was very touching because it talked sort-of about the real world. Because males in geeral will start acting different from when you first were with them. So i say that this poem was excellent!
ally
i absolutley loved it
corinne & christina
omgsh! this poems is so true. guys will be the thing you hope and pray for and then, he turns his back on you and leaves you cold in the dust. ladies be careful! much luv to all corinne and christina
lashona
HTIS POEM IS AMAZING IT IS SO TRUE! I LOVE IT AND I HOPE OTHERS WILL TO!
keepin it
i going through the same thing
Samantha
great poem! it was the best so far.
michelle
this is sooo close to home touched me very much i write dark poems and could never understand how to express love
Lyly
That is a great poem. It talks about something that can happen in real life
Mary
this poem was wonderfull. you have some real talent and dont let it die i always want to be a poet and poems like this well it inspires me. so keep up the good work. sincerly mary roman
andre
me and my gurl have some problems it touched me
Mysteryluv
Im trully touched by this poem. it seem like i have the same situation like u
amber
this is a very grate poem that reminds me alot of my ex boyfriend david who was all a suden there then found a new girl.
Michelle
this poem was really good cause it, kind of happened to me. it was good.
LaWanda
I had this kind of relationship with my last boyfriend, but the only reason why I didn't cry was because at the same time i was messing with someone who treats me much better. So I hope that u have meet someone who treats u like you his # 1 queen because I know that's what kind of boyfriend I have now and he is real good to me. Well I hope u keep writing the good poems because this kind of relationship happens to the everyday girl. Anyways, have a good life.
rebecca
THIS IS SOMETHING I CAN LOOK AT EVERY DAY
Elizabeth
This is a GREAT poem. I understand exactly were you were coming from. Love truly HURTS!
rachael
last saterday at about ten oclock i split up wid my bf lewis i thought he was so nice but he changed and i wondered y. the poem just fits so much i onli wish i had wrote it myself.
Jemma
your poem just touched me deep inside, it had truth about it as i could relate to it.
Jackie
I feel you truly my boyfreind did the sane. But, at least he didnt leave for another girl. I cried just like you. But, now I know life goes on. With or with out him. Even if I miss him so much. But that the way life choose it to be.
LaRosa
i like this poem
Brittany
this poem was so sad but good to this one is one of the best ones i've read
Jennifer
your poem was great!
krystin
This poem remindes me of some thing that happened to me . At first every thing was great then one day it went down the drane. I blamed my self for every thing that happened to us even know it was him . It took me a wile to get over him I thought I would never love again but give it time and rember there is someone out there that will love you like you deserv to be loved.
Tamela
I think this poem is alot like me and my boyfriend he is doing these exact same thing he don't call me i call him and he don't speak i have to speak he looks the other way.
Jade
I thought that this poem was very heartfelt and touching it sounds like it came straight from the heart and i respect people like that. Keep up the great work
florence
I like this poem i hope this author write more poems like this
keia
this poem was very good it touch me from the heart and im happy to say im not only one that feels that way.
Jorden
this is such a great poem it. i felt like i could relate to it.
Brittany
I think it was execellant it was so sad and iwanted 2 cry!
Delaney
the poem was exactly how i felt 2 DAYS AFTER MY B. DAY. he broke up with me. im only 13 but there is a lot of me!
Andrea
This poem is the very well like by me my name is Andrea and im 15years old and im was looking for a poem for a school project and im going to pick thins one its really helps and i will share it with friends
alexandra
this poem touched me ,because its ture . U think every thing is going great ,until u really get to know that person ,well
kisha
this poems was really touchin and i just had a friend pass away but i did not find out about it over the news i was talkin to a friend and she got a call tellin her that our friend kelly god rest his soul was just in a car accident and that he did not make it. i loved the poems and i hope to read more
Ebony
The only words i have is that it was great. keep up the good work!
La'Trese
This was very good. I can really relate.
amanda
this was great i mean it was exaclty how i felt with my boyfriend b4 he broke up with me.
army
it's nice!
faith
good
Stephanie
Hey my name Stephanie I will and always love this guy i dated. We have dated for i think two years on and off. And I do love him and everyone says its just puppy love. But he was so sweet when would go back out and then he just stop coming ot see me or ingored me when he would bring his friend around.
margaret
that poem was great my ex boyfriend did the same to me we are not together anymore he is with my best mate
Colleen
I loved this poem it was starting to make me cry. It sounds like my friends got love like that. Thanx it was a lovely poem. I really liked a lot!
coco
The reminds me of me and my boyfriend but he is still living but one minutes he is all sweet the next he is snapping at me
brittany
oh my gosh this poem totaly relates to me and my boyfriend now. i have tried tofind a way to keep out relationship true but he jsut ignores me. but my love for him is so strong that i cant bring my self to say goodbye.
andy
It's truly beautiful, I feel it is one of the best poems I have ever read.
Marissa
I rly liked this poem cause i can realte to it. I like that you wrote this poem about what was in your heart. They're not worth it hunny, i know it hurts but life goes on. take care! xox
desirae
I love this peom i can relate it to my ex-boyfriend leaving him was the best thing that can happen to me becuz now i am in love with this guy that cares for me the same amount as i do
Melanie
This poem was awesome! Good job.
Carla
i loved this poem i went through something like it with my boyfriend but fortunatley we didn't end in a breakup. everything got better and we are very happy now :-)
Riah Mae
It was pretty good!
Aarika
This was an awesome poem. It was written beautifully, I could easily relate!
brittany
I liked your poem it touched me because i have been thur something like that. keep up the good work.
tiara
i also liked this poem alot because it's so true, how things could be all good one minute and then take a turn for the worst because of no good reason
Lorraine
I loved ur poem, write more poems
gabee
this poem actually explains what i really felt with my ex-boyfirend and what happened
stephanie
That poem was really7 toching it gave me a tinkle
Shardae
this was vey nice
DANIKKA
WOW, THAT IS WHAT I AM GOING THROUGH RIGHT NOW. THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME WAY TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS.
Hope
This poem is NANG. Although it is very very sad. I hope she's okay, but i think that she should write more poetry because it is obviously a GIFT.
stormy
it was really good
stormy
it was really good
Autumn
Hey, I really liked this poem, though I'm not sure why, It touched me in some way, I've never been in a relationship exactly like that but one really close to it. But your a really great poet keep up the good work!
MIGUEL
I loved this poem bacause the things they are talking about happend in my relationship. All i can say is this poem really touched me.
Shakora
The Poem really touched me. The same thing happen to me and my ex-boyfriend.
kerry
This poem is so very true! thats exactly how it is too. im 15 and have had many b/f so far and they have all told me wounderful things and then finished with me like months later with no reason or explanation! I think this poet must have had quite a few moments like mine! and i hope shes happy now:)
hailey
kool
shanice
that poem reminds me of my experiences keep it up you will make it big one day! -shanice
ashley
i just want to say i love ur poem b/c that exact thing happened to me. i had a boyfriend and we were togther for 2 years and we were getting close we were argueing a lot here lately but then one day when i got home he called and said it was getting to serious and he needed space. so i felt like i was going to die b/c i loved him so much but we broke up a day after our 2 year anniversary.
Boom
I think this is a very nice poem. A little bit sad, but a nice one.
Olivia
good!
Amanda
This poem is really good. I loved it, it reminded me of me and my b/f. were just getting things back on track.
Alyssa
Wow, it makes you think of all the times that you had lost some one in a realationship. you have a mind dont let any body tell you different.
Lindsey
This poem reminded me of my first love, his name was Landon and I thought that it was very good. !
Zoe
Your poems almost made me cry. The same thing happened to me. he was my world and the same thing in ur poem happened when it sad he was sweet one night and two days later he started be mean well yeah one night my boyfriend curled up to me and told me he loved me so much and the next day before i went school he kissed me and sad i was the best then i come home and all his stuff was backed and said he changed his mind. i thought i was going to die and of course i tried to stop him but he wouldnt listen. But anyways sorry for boring but i just wanted to say ur peoms was great!
shorty
This poem is really good! my friend is going throw something just like this! I'm oging to send it to her. keep up the good work
Cynthea
I loved this poem it was very good and i know how you feel.
aurora- lee
love it!
Cayenne
I think this poem is great! I love the meaning and the point thats getting through. Its just what a lot of other people go through.
cora
i loved this poem it reminded me of me a month ago it was the worst day of my life i was just like this girl i thought everything would be so great but i guess everthing was a lie he was acting teh whole time o well though im so over it now i dont even care anymore i cried enough for that loser well i really liked this poem
Grace
This is the best poem ive ever heard. I am a teenager and this has happened to me until now people have said I was stupid for feeling like this and Im just really glad to know that im not the only one that feels like this. I just want to say i have heard a lot of poems and this one really touched me whatever dont stop writing poems you are such a good poet.
Lindsey
The poem touched me so much because it was all about pashenate feelings and true feelings.
erica
this poem touched my heart
Candace
This poem it has touch me in so many ways to the point i needed to cry. so many words can express but this one just not only express it has more.
brittnee
awesome
Capri
I loved the poem. I could really relate to it on each line. At the end, i was about to cry. I am 13 and have many love scenes like this one. I LOVED IT!
Brittany
Your Poem really touched me!I can really relate to it. Keep up the good work!You're great at it.
Noelle
this poem really touched me because this is how i felt about my ex-boyfriend. at first he was the sweetest person in the world to me and then he just changed one day and broke my heart.
misfa
i was really touched cuz it makes me think.
Charlene
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was sad and touching. It was deep with emotions and I felt your pain. I could ralate even if I didn't experience it. But I have went through something simliar to this. Great write. Keep up the good work :)
saysha
this poem was a really good poem it had a lot of meening and was very true
anthony
i liked the poem a lot. it was deep and very sophisticated
ashley
this poem really touched me ,it reminder me of one of my ex. boy-fds. it sad in a way,but its sweet
Heather
I think this poem was great, it didn't really pertain to me but it does to a friend of mine
Nastacha
A really liked this poems and i just wanted to say that you really touched me and that you have my vote!
melinda
This is a great poem. It really touched me.
Daniella
Wow that was so like related to me and how my relationship WAS! Really Great Poem!
Josephine
I Love it. Great job who ever wrote this poem.
shardaye
this poem means so much to me i absolutely luv it
courtney
Ive been through this situation not too long ago Im still not over what happened. this poem brought tears to my eyes as i recalled the night it happened.
paula camille
id like the way the words goes. it really help me to realized that in my case i haved so much loved the person that i thought that can be ith me for the rest of my life. its great and fun to read.
Kenye'da
i think the peom was very realistic. As young ladies we face these sort of situations everyday and it was so Intriguing to read such a creative way of speaking the truth!
sarah
I love this poem . Its so true first they love you then they dont. I guess there is no rose without thorns though!
Janae
This poem was really good! I loved every word of it.
Chelsea
I Love Your Poem Chick! It reminds me exactly of what this guy is doin to me right now. He tells me he loves me then he ignores me for bout 3 days then calls back and says he is sorry and he really does love me and all this junk. and i feel stupid cuz i keep going back to him and i know he is gonna keep playin me and crap!,
khou
this is such a great poem=)
Julia
This just happened to me my friends he said he loved me and he would do anything for me and i let him take advantage of me b-cuz i thought he really loved me but, it turns out he didn't now i kno justt b-cuz you love them doesn't mean they love you bck even if they say they do This poem means everything to me now !
diadrah
i really liked this poem! and it tells the truth about how some girls feel
ashley
I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE ME AND MY BOYFRIEND WAS GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING AND I WOULD ALWAYS TELL HIM I LOVED HIM BEFORE WE WENT HOME FROM SCHOOL BUT WHEN HE GOT AROUND HIS so CALLED FRIEND HE WOULDN'T EVEN TALK TO ME AND HE ACTED LIKE HE DIDN'T KNOW ME SO ITS OVER BETWEEN ME AND HIM NOW SO I DONT KNOW HIM EITHER! BUT I LOVE THIS POEM I MIGHT NEED TO SEND THIS POEM TO HIM AND LET HIM KNOW HOW IT FEEL'S! BYE YALL I LOVE YOUR POEM
verlyn
this ppoem relates to me in so many ways i treated him wrong and i regret .
MICHAEL
I LOVE THIS POME IT REALLY GOT TO ME
tanya
I like this poem because i went through the exact same thing, and it all happen the exact same night just an hour difference. I love this poem!
Teonna
i like that pome for some reason that sound like what im going though with this one guy but it all kool
Christina
great job
chloe
I loved this poem! It describes whats happening with me perfect!
Adienne
this poem really touched me because i been through the same thing and after this peom i really know now that's it's not my fault
Constacne
Hello my name is constance dear and i live in wichita ks. I am sixteen years old and this poem reminds me of my last boyfriend everything was going so good untill one day he ended up going back to the hood and it changed our whole relationship. he thought that he had control over me untill i told him that i didnt wont to be with him,he hit me and everything else you can name and now that i have the lord everything has changed. I write poems now check out some of the websites their beautiful. Talk to you kater your poem was beautiful
Angie
I love this poem! it is so true. I am going through the same thing. The only thing is that I haven't heard of the news wheter we are through.
Amanda
This poem is very youching. It in facts describes the feelings in which I am feeling tonight.
Candace
Me and my Exb/f are having prolems and this poem really sounds beautiful.
red
T he same thing happend to me. But it wasnt the same thing my bot friend went to gerat falls with my best friend. I know how u feel always red
matthew
it is cool. that i rapped it while i read it.
Courtney
This poem shows the real meaning and feelings of teen love. It show exactly how a male would act toward love from a female. I really liked this poem and whoever wrote this has a goog sense of creativity and is a true artist at heart.
ashley
this poem really means something to me, because this exact thing was happening to me. but just want to let everyone know that there is always someone out there that isnt going to hurt you and there is always someone that truley loves you!and i think i finally found that person!
Maggie
i loved this poem because thats exactly what happend to me!
Janette
I loved this poem, it reminds me about me and my ex. I broke-up with him last week because I was getting tired about how he was treating me and i feel better about the choice i made. I still love him because he's my best friend and i've known him for so long but now I just prefer being friends with him and we still talk and hang out but nothing more. So your poem really touched me alot. Thanks and keep up the good work.
Amanda
I luv ur poem so much it makes so much sincea bout guyz and keep up the good work!
Jamila
This is so beautiful. It relates to my very situation. Preppie, you are very talented keep writing from the heart.
tessa
this poem really touched me as ive jsut split up wiv my boyfriend that i ahd been wiv for 6 months, it al sounded just how our relationship was always so nice then right near the end jsut changed to beign horrible then nice for a week again then bk being horrible then it was over.
Brittany
This poem really got to me. I have been writing since i was in the sixth grade, so for 4 years i have been writing, and this is real. It touched me in the sence that, that's exactly how it is. You get to know him, fall in love, hope it never ends, and he breaks your heart, and you never want to forgive him. It happened to me, i never thought it would, but it did. He asked me out, i fell in love and i thought he felt the same way, and he broke my heart. I got over it but i still wanted him. We got back together only to break up ten days later, i loved him, and he left me, broken, cold, and alone. My heart was abandoned by my first love.
Gemma
This is probably one of the best poems I've ever read. It made me cry in the first stanza. This author is exellent! She shouldnt feel so down but if it takes all that to write poetry like this, then, YOU GO GIRL!
Claudia
I like this poem very much because I could relate to it. Just resently me and my boyfriend of 2 years broke up. I thought it would also last forever but it did not. I really love your poem! =D
lanae
I really did like this poem. Its very touching. Its real
nicole
this poem is soo true it happens to other people all the time.
Cedric
its true and inspiring
tiffany
this poem is very well written it shows alot of emotion that some one has for a guy then the relationship just end like that. i made me think that all relationship are not perfuct and every one will get hurt at some point in their life some sooner then others. who every wrote the poem was very good at poem writing.
Stephanie
This poem touched me directly because I was in a relationship just like this one so I understand perfectly.
Danielle
i really like it becuase someone i was in love with died becusae his bother shot him i cried for months and months i just not got over of it
stew
well i think this is true because if u love someone u then think they are perfect and u remember all the good stuff so when bad stuff happens u just think its a phase cuz all u remember is them being perfect. lifes good enjoy it stew
Kayley
this poem is so touchin, itz a great poem, and really touches ur heart.
Eva
This poem touched me so much. Although I am very young(14), I was in love with a guy and it's been 5 months since we've broken up and I do still think of him every now and then. I like to write poems and ever since that happend thats pretty much what almost all my poems are about. I really like to read other peoples poems and try to relate and compare with my situation. Anyways, I really enjoyed the poem and I will try to move on.
stephany
ur poem inspried me. i am in the same situation but gurl keep ur head up men come and go like water
ashley
I think this poem is very hart touching
Nicholas
This peom shows how most guys are and how girls love him even if he turnhis back on her until they find another guy
Danielle
it was awesome
sara
It whas evry taching. I love this poem very much. I can see this persion put a lot of thought in to this. I hope you can right a nother poem and sind it to me. I thank this is the best poem. I ever red, I even thank it's better than my poems.
michelle
hey preppie you might might not know me but i'm michelle i live in nogales arizona i read your poem and i loved it it really touched my heart a lot i had a problem with my boyfriend to he didnt do that to me i did it to him but i didnt mean it i still love him and i'm trying to get him back but i know that he wants me back too but he doesnt want to show it
lucas
i love this poem it really touched me and i can relate to it 100% great job. ps i hope you find someone that can make u happy again
dee dee
this poem really did hit the spot! the same thing happened to me about like a few months ago so i know where u been at that moment he called it quiets. So keep love alive and keep writting poems like this!
Emily
very true for some people and very touching
Emily
very true for some people and very touching
Babygurl
this was really good, i can totally relate! wow! i got a little teary-eyed.
Veronica
The reason I voted for this poem was because it touched me in a way no words have never touched me before. My boyfriend hangs around gang members and sometimes he does get mad at me when I ask him what is he doing or going to do with his friends. Every time he is with them I get scared that something is going to happen to him just like the boy in the poem. We do talk about spending together forever and getting married, but sometimes I think at the rate he's going we won't see that day.
Danielle
This poem reminded me of an ex-boyfriend. He was sent to jail for things that i will not mention. THe poems the exact same way that i felt and reading it made me feel alot better that someone went throught the same thing that i did. So i just wnated to take amoment and say that this poem really touched me and that poems are a great way to overcome your problems.
candy
you got a wonderful peom
vinny
hey, i love ur poem i thinks it gr8! i bin through it all n it herts real bad even wen ya no things aint workin. i aint long split up wiv my bf he was a bit of a twat n it felt like he was sartin 2 put me down n i started 2 h8. he used 2 cheat n lie wich i h8 sein as im a loyal n trustworthy person but im startin 2 get ova him but it still hurts n i wil neva forget wat he done 2 me luv vinny x X x
tasha
i like this poem it reinds me a friend,how he loved me for alittle while then,i realized he wasnt worth while.
Miranda
this poems touched me becuase my ex boyfriend done this same thing as the poems was telling and it happen to me but I was crying for days and I still feel heartbroken becuase I know him for 8 years and we love each other so much and now it came to crushed life between us and now he wont talk to me becuase of what he has done to me
ashley
Your a really good writer u should keep it up. You really know how to use your words to hit somebodys feelings. Keep the poems rolling in.
ashley
it showed me a meaning of love that i m going through right now and it helps me express my feelings with the person that im with. i love that poem
jozzellee
This poem is really beautiful i really,really like it!
Jon
This poem was tight made all kinds a sense i could really open your eyes to how some guys treat thurr ladies, i thought this was the tightest thig i've ever read
Kaitlyn
This was great it meant a lot to me
lauren
i am all choked up too i mean this has actually happened his name was damien i cant beleave how much this has in commen with my life its so touching!
Monique
I think that is so tru because somrthing like that happen to me but nine mouths later some came out
jesse
this poems the best i read and i like it
Kayla
every thing you say in this happend to me it was so bad and motionly and i was hurt so bad it took me forever to get over it that is why i understand what you are saing
Gliselda
I really like what it said cuz it so true and i really touch me alot cuz i might be going through that right now!
emily
i love poetry and your poetry touched me thank you
Michele
I so love'd your poem. It's so true! That same thing happened to me with one of my previous boyfiend's. We went out for three week's. And those three weeks were all suspicious, cuz when I'd call to talk w/ him he would alway's be busy. I turn's out that he had gotten back with his ex!
Bridget
OMG! u r such an awesome poem writer! this poem relates 2 me so much as i just experienced the same thing with my boyfriend. thankyou 4 writing this poem, u hav inspired me a lot
Tinisha
This poem made me remember how i felt not to long ago because the same thing happend to me a couple of weeks ago! I love this poem so much! Good Work!
Andrea
i liked the poem it reminded me of some one
Kiara
This poem was great it really touched me. I can really relate to this poem because i have been in the same relationship and please believe i know how it feels. Keep doing what you do.
venessa
I really like this poem I guess it touch me alot
Tyleshia
out of 1 to 10 grl u so got a 10! this is a really cute poem. it really touched me! i just hope thats not how it works out with me and my bf cause im in love with him! i hope u move on and u can go get someone better! good luck grl! *Tyleshia*
Miss
This is a wicked poem and reminded me of when I spilt with my ex, I couldnt see it happening but now I look back and think he wasnt worth all the pain. Really cheered me up!
Jazmin
the poem was good
Brooke
you dont know how much this poem touched me! i went through the exact same thing with my ex-boyfriend. he would be soo sweet one minute and tell me he loved me so much and then the next minute he would be so mean and he would ignore me. it really hurts when guys do that and i totally know how you feel. it got so bad that i ended breaking up with him i couldnt take it anymore. i ended up crying myself to sleep everynight. good luck to you! i feel your pain. and to all you guys out there. be sweet don't ever be mean to your girl! heartbreaks really hurt!
Joana
I love your poem, you have a gift of putting words toguether and making wonderful poems. I am suffering 4 long years of depression and everithing it says I can relate the difference is that I couldnt die I tried so many times but god never took me I wonder why???? but I love your poem it made me cry. I hope you write more. Joana
wendy
hi i loved ur poem. there are somethings in your poem which i can relate to. i love poems that i can realate because everything in there is just true. well thank you for writting poems which people can realate to
wendy
that was a very good poem trust me i write poems too. well im sorry if ur love didnt come thru for you but theres other guys for you. well continue with the good work. good luck with the votes.
jenay
your poem was so nice and touching. i have felt that why before about a guy. i just want to let u know to keep up the good work and keep write poems.
Jake
this poem made me think,"what if my girl feels the same" i will never mistreat my girl bcuzz of this poem and becouse i love u lindsay
Erika
This poem really touched me because this is tha way i felt about my ex-boyfriend. I thought that we would last forever then from one moment to the next things changed so now we don't talk. But I really did love this poem.
xenia
i really did fell in love with this poem. anyone can feel like they found the one but then after it's not the one. you think why did this have to happen why couldn't we be happy all the way? it's a really good poem though hope you do some more great ones after too.
tanisha
i think the poem was great and it reminded me of some past relationships i've had. i would rate this poem a perfect 10!
Angelica
This poem was so great it felt like my life was in there somewhere!
senia
very touching and made me think to becareful with who ifall in love with
Kristina
Wow. when i thought what i was going through couldn't be put into words, this author did it! Alot of teenagrs are also going through practically the same thing. this poem is perfect because it is realistic and people can relate!
Melanie
that was so cute. sad. and touching at the same time
Larussia
this poem is the best poem I ever read in my life the poem really sounds kinda like my relationship.
Jenna
This poem is awsome! its nice to know someone went thru somewhat the same thing as i did not to long ago, only difference is we were together for 2 years, planed to get married and he left me with a child. to all u girls that r going thru the same thing, hold in there u'll get thru!
Laura
When You Love Someone is a beautiful poem. I was extremly touched by it, as I went through the same emotions with my first love. Throughout my relationship with "him", I felt as though no one understood-or cared enough to try-what I was going through. All these new feelings, the good ones at first, the bad ones toward the end were all foreign to me, and I needed someone to understand and to ease the pain. This poem was my reasurance that someone out there knows how I feel and that I am not alone. So Thank You.
Nicole
Wow. your poem was so touching. I think it's so loved because so many people can relate to it. I can right now, too, myself. I got tears in my eyes when I read it. Believe me, it touched base. It's almost freaky how much it is similar to what I'm going through.
nickele
i love this poem it is really helping me through my breakup
maggie
I LOVED UR POEM. i'm in a relationship that stared 3 weeks ago, and i also have problems with him. Danny is such a dumb person to let go such a good person like u. It's good ya'll broke up cuz he ain't worth it. soon u'll find da 1. ur poem was touching.
Mallory
OMG that is so ironic. this poem is exactly what i was going thru with MY ex b/f DANNY! We were together for about a year sometimes he would be so sweet other times he would ignore me and treat me like crap. and now we don't talk anymore after breaking up in november. I thought we would get married someday and be together forever i loved him with everything. But i guess some things dont always turn out the way u think they will. Great poem.
Monique
I liked the poem although I personally can not relate to it because I have never been in that type of situation. Knock on wood.
nyaziah
that waz nice
Hannah
I loved it u remind me of a very close friend of mine
Lindzie
This poem is exactly how i feel right now. although me and my boyfriend haven't broken up this is how i feel right now. Like I am nothing to him. It is a great poem!
Alysia
OMG!This world seriously needs more poets like you. I LOVE that poem. It describes my boyfriend so well. At first he treated me like gold and then it went from gold to i was a **** and not talk to this person or that person and then he would treat me like gold again. Most of the time not . The sad thing is i'm still putting up with it. I kno it hurts but hunnie no person deserves to be treated to cruely and your lucky that you got out of it. Keep up the GREAT work
Kayla
I think that you know what your talking about. I went through the same thing. almost. but close enough. keep writing and the best of luck for the future! You'll go places! :)
Jessica
I really liked this poem because I could identify with it. I'm going through a similar experience and it helps to know that I am not alone.
Elyse
This poem was VERY good! and it is really strange because i have an ex boyfriend named Danny and this is the exact samething that happened with me! great job!
Thomas
I read this poem just after watching the movie thirteen, this mmovie is emotionaly touching, in such a diferent way as this poem, but they made me both stop and think. Its enough to make a grown man cry.
Cassi
I think this poem is very cute and good i love poems and urs is one that touched me
Heather
I like this poem, but its kinda sad. I don't think anyone should let someone treat them like dirt. I see where your coming from though. I think every girl does. Its really hard to stop liking a guy. Especially one who pushes you away.
Jannie
I just love this poem! They all rhyme and just speaks out the real situations lovers have! Soooooo much toushed!
Sharla
This poem is so real i Totally Respect the author. if i had to rate it 1-10 i would give it a 10+
Tiffany
Well all i wonted to say was that everything in that poem is so true and u did a wonderful job on that keep up the good work p. s. This poem must just help out my relationship
Brandi
hey this is the best poem when it comes to "explaining" how MOST relationships go it sounds like this was your first love ,that's when it really hurts
soon
its shows the a real emotion and feeling of someone and its kinda touching. its like ure throwing all ure agony,sorrow,pain and yet some love and happiness at this masterpiece. you write this poem thorugh ure heart,soul and emotions while most peots just wirte what the see and think. very nice poem
tabbatha
your poem was good it reminds me of my ex he thought he could do any thing with me but one day you have to becare ful if you find some one you lave he could do any thing to you becouse he will say if you love me you do this and i did do some thing becouse i was stupid ang young i dated him fora year and then when i had sex with him he boke up with me
samantha
that was a very very touching poem i loved it
Tena
I like this poem because it relates to me more then anyone could ever imagen.
Natalie
The peom is good. You should make more. :)
Veronica
This poem is very good. I could relate to it so i really loved it a lot. The poem really expresses how she felt about this guy.
katherine
I loved your poem so much, it reminds me of me and my X Josh.
Ryan
That was a beutiful poem. i liked it
Lacie
i loved this poem it touched me so much. it was as if someone had read my mide and wrote a poem.
Casey
yeah, this touched me so much! It reminded me of a guy i loved so much, he said we would always be together. but then he asked me if i loved him and i said yes, and he said prove it to me! well i had sex with him then the next day he broke with me for my so called best friend! all i could say is why. i never would have imaged him to do that to me after i gave him the one thing that i cant get back! thanks your peom really touched me!
Brittany
This poem sounded like what happened to me but we were olny together 1whole year before we broke up. Well I think the poem was great and something to think a boout.
kayla
i love that poem i know how you feel and i feel the same way with this same boy
monique
it was probably for the best and i'm hoping by now you got over him because you know what girl you don't need a man to make you complete you find what's missing in you on your own threw life,threw friends that don't put you down. just remember that from one girl to another.
Blondie
i think this was a great poem it made me think a lot about muh boyfriend because we were having some problems one of his best friends were trying to break us up bc his best friend is my ex-boyfriend
heather
Wow! We really have alot in common! My ex boy friend was really only using me. I thought i knew him but the truth was all lies. He lied, cheated and used me. I pray for him everyday. We broke up 31/2 months ago. Yeah we still talk but i will never forget the pain and torture he put me through. In fact im still healing.
Danielle
This was a great poem! It fits the relationship i had with my boyfriend of 11 months. It was just like in the poem things were going great until he just changed, but the weird thing is i still love him. But I feel like this poem is the relationship i had. THIS IS A GREAT POEM!
nikki
I loved this poem because it reminded me of me and my ex-boyfriend. Its a great poem!
taryn
i like the peom alot it brings back many memories, i will surely sare this poem with my friends i know they will like it. Me and my best friend get in the computer and look at peoms and this is the best one we have read and we have been friends for five years! i love your poem please keep up the good work and keep them going it was great!
zadeea
IT WAS GREAT I LOVED IT IS SO REAL
Jazmine
Preppie I loved your poem gurl it made want to cry because I thought that i was the only person that was felling that way. You feel just like i felt when i broke up with my ex-boyfriend Sheldon but am over him now well alittle over him peace out and holla at ya gurl Jazmine
daysi
i think this poem talks about everything that happened to me so i want u to know that i am so glad that someone finally wrote something about this.
Nikki
I can relate to this poem 100%! The same thing happened with the guy I use to like, He was the greatest guy ever then all of the sudden he began ignoring me and putting me down. It really hurt but at first I thought he was messing around so i hid it from him. Well, now can't look at him without wanting to cry. Thing that sux is I see him every week. Man, guy's are stupid. He's was prolly the first guy I could prolly say I loved. The way I felt about other guy's in the past was completely different, with him it was something else, something special.
kristy
i think this poem is really good i know how u feel ive been in the same situation and it sucks i dont understand why guys would want to do that to us girls. keep the good work up!
Sami
I loved this poem. It really is true to feel that way, I know I can recall it and it hurts and is all you want to do is crawl up in a hole and cry and cry. And you think why me, but soon you'll figure out that he's not worth your time. its just so hard to face reality. But i was really touched by your poem and I truly loved it.
keisha
i really love this poem. i'm having the same problems with the guy i like. it was nice to read a poem that someone wrote especially about something like this this. also to know that i'm not the only one.
Joey
I think this a great poem. I have never had it happen to me but I am very much in love with someone right now and I hope this does not happen between him and I.
steve
I really liked this poem, you have alot of talent. It came from the heart. Excellent!
Saeed
. its a very lovely poem.
deedee
i liked it a lot because it is a true poem that everyone can relate yo
Victoria
I really liked this poem. It really meant something to me. It also reminded me of an ex-boyfriend of mine, Jon.
alexis
i reall y like this poem it had alot to do wit love and how its blind you think that its going good but thats want you want to see. over all i like it and i well tell more people about!
Talia
~i thought this poem was so touching it brought tears to my eyes~
candy
I really think this peom fits alot of ppl and i think that its a really great peom! good job
kelle
This poem was so beautiful, and so true. When i got my first boyfriend, i felt the same. He was so perfect, but so artificial. This poem expresses true feelings, and things that readers can connect with.
kindra
I love this poem, i am still yong but the "love" of my little life did this to me, and it hurt like nothing had ever hurt before. I applode you on writing it so well and useing just the right words in the poem, thank you .
Crystal
Oh my gosh! im in the same situation! but it;s okay im better off without him.
Charlene
this is a great poem and i am trully touched by it
carissa
this is a great poem!
alicia
i love this b/c it is how i feel about my boyfriend
Christina
Hey there I just wanted to le tyou know that this poem touched me so close because it totally fits what I am going through right now. The other night when I came in from work my best friend told me that she caught him cheating on me with another girl right in front of everybody no less. when I confronted himn about it he totally admitted to it. then told me tha the never really loved me in the first place that I was nothing but a pawn in his game. I was crushed. all I could do that night was lay there and cry my eyes out liek a little baby.
Michael
I really liked, is a good poem and it made me think, things that had never I thought before.
Kristi
This is a great poem,it is so true when it comes to me and my boyfriend. so it really touched me.
ashley
That was the best poem i've ever read i wish i could write like that. Who wrote this? well i really really like it it tells the truth about some guys.
Joanna
Even though I'm not going through this problem, I know it's very true in many teenage girls lives. But I do know that God's way is always the best way.
twila
I really like this poem, its deep and i could really relate to it.
Melanie
This poem seemed so real and it was just so awesome! Keep up the good work.
Jennifer
awws i think i like this poem too. Most of these poems here are quite sweet so i like itt !
Sarah
This poem is really good,it made me cry the whole night. It made remind of someone i love.
heather
my boyfriend and i broke up all most 3 months ago. we went together for 1 year 1 month and 5 days. one day he got drunk and cheated on me and i had enough. i would always put me down like your ex boyfriend did, but we both can make it alone or with someone new. i may not know you, but im very proud of you for going on without him!
Jessie
I really liked this poem a lot. I could really feel what was happening in this poem
crystal
I think this is a good story and I like it alot.
ryan
i love this poem because the same thing happen to me and my boyfriend of like 7 1/2 months i love him so i tryed to stay with him as longas it would last but in the in all there was was my broken heart
Heather
I love this poem it is really sweet then its sad i hate when that happens cause u love someone so much then they do u like that they are like users but this is the best poem ever. :)
tacarra
This poem is really good. It has so meaing in it. Keep up the work. :)
Lily
Your poem reminded me of an experience i had before. Its so deep and true. The emotions are so well expressed. Keep writing poems.
toya
i love this poem it fits perfectly with my siduation. keep up the good work!
ambyr
i love this poem! i read it a lot. i recently have had trouble with my best friend(a guy) and this is so him. it really helps me get thru the days where he makes fun of me in a mean way, then ignores me. then he just simply acts like im not even anything to him! thanks again for putting this on here! i really do love it! keep it up.
shayla
this poem is real good
kimariz
this poem is so good it relates to me in alot of ways
Kasey
I love this poem! Thank you so much for writing it its super good! I can really relate to it! Which is why its soo good! Your a really good writer and ya not much ese to say except good job and im glad im not the only one out there that had to go through that!
Jessica
i like this poem. i can relate because one day my 3 month boyfriend turned all different on me. rgiht then and there i broke up with him. keep up the good work
laurie
omg dis poem iz nice! u r rilly gud at ritin poemz. i rilly luv it. though i kant relate 2 it. mah frenz kan. well thankz 4 ritin dis poem. ish so gud! xp
Ashley
this poem tells how every person feels or even tells people how hurt someone can feel when they loved someone so much. I can really feel how you felt durning this poem. all we can do is to move on and learn from our mistakes.
scoobs_vera
I thought this poem was great and I feel the same way about a guy I used to like but now I moved on and looking for a guy.
Rosalie
I love this poem it reminds me of me and my ex- boyfriend i was with him for one year and he stared to hit me and ty to tell me what to do and what not to do and i would let him couse i loved him so much then one day i found out he was playing me
Brittney
i love this poem! it totally reruns everything that happend in my recently ended relashionship!and i am glad that i am not the only one out there that can relate to this sad happening!
eLmO
i had the same problem as you girl. so0o don't stress about it to much. everyone has to get hurt someday and us girls have to put up with this crap is everyday. i gave my man to many tries until i read your poem. now i know i'm not the only one that has to go through it,so it's time to let him go. thanks to you, i can finally move on
Erica
i love this poem it remimends me of my boyfriend that borke my heart it was sad but the day i was i cried for hours but then it was really over
Sarah
I really like this poem!
tracey
i think the poems was very down to earth and sad and i loved it it was just what i was looking for cause somthing similar happened to me recently and it practically described everthing bout my situation i loved it it was great i looked every where for a poeem like this and i finally found it.
JAMIE
This poem is relating to me right now. my boyfriend is doing the same things the poem said. 1st our relationship was good, then bad, it keeps going back and forth. GREAT POEM!
Herbrecia
hey girl that poem is so sweet u need to come out with somemore i mean like it almost made me cry it was so good
anon
what a beautiful poem!
Danny
I Love this poem, it reminds me of me and my ex-girlfriend. We loved eachother for so long, but we had our problems I admit I was unfaithful a couple of times but we always work it out and I told her the next day every time it happended. then she cheated on my and ended up pregnant.
KIARA
I REALLY CAN RELATE TO YOUR POEM IT REMINDS ME OF THE RELATIONSHIP I`M IN NOW. YOU`RE A GREAT WRITER.
Dianalyn Rose
it was a beautful poem describing how girls fall in love. I once felt that way.
claire
Wow! i have been trying to get over my ex boyfriend for so long. I can really relate to your poem because he treated me really bad and he dumped me on homecoming night and wow. your really talented! i write poems too but i really love your style! keep it up!
Kelly/Amber
We loved this poem. we cried and cried because we both had the same thing happen to us recently. The hurt is still there and when we see those guys our heart goes to our feet. but your poem has given us strength! Thanks!
lauren
i thought this poem was true its like other peoples relationship especially like my friends.
becky
this is a very good poem. it fits perfectly with my life and how every thing is happening with me and the one i luv.
Shatoya
I have to give this girl her props. this is a very sad and emotional poem. I have never been in a situation like this and now that I'm in high school it might come up. This is a very beautiful poem.
Em
I think this poem is great, i can relate to it i know how it feels to be treated like this. it was beaudiful girl, ur real talented!
judy
i loved this poem. this is something a lot of teenage girls go through. i know i did. i honestly rate this poem a 10+. good job. you know how to express a lot of teen's emotions in such beautiful words.
sienny
I really like this poem because it makes me remember about my experience. I've broke up with my boyfriend about a week ago but I'm sure that I'll get better than him. This poem is so true, I like it very much.
Terra
This is a very good poem, but im wondering what happend in the end
Hopie
I think this was a great poem. It really touched my heart. Keep up the good work!
Sarah
this poem is really good because it made me feel more open to talk to guys!
nicole
i loved it it said just what i want to hear.
janet
its weird how i thought i was the only girl who had this problem. this poem is really good. it brought some tears to my eyes but i like the poem. my boyfriend treats me the same way and i think we are not going to last long. we have been together nine months but im sure its not going to last anymore
Kerrie
I love this poem. I know exactlly how she must of felt.
Triasia
I think the poem is very touching and very sad. Some peolpe just can't get enough of being in love.
Ayana
I think that this poem was the best poem I've ever read in my life and I just have to give u your props cause this is a Great Poem! Keep up the great work!
Aniyah
I'm really feeling this poem ,because I understand what you feeling I feel the same!
Samantha
I just wanted to say your poem as brung back so many memories. It was really sweet and so true for many couples
Mel
Wow this is awesome, I can realy relate to it right now, sometimes he can make me feel hot, then cold. Mel I really agree with what you said!
Mikeshia
I give the poem a 25 on a scale 1 to 10 it is soo much like what I'm going through right now! thanks chick
Michele
This is so weird. My boyfriends name is danny. IT almost the same with me and him. He's been ignoring and everything. I just can't take it anymore so i'm gonna break up with him even though i love him more than the world! ur poem relates to me so much!
jane
i think that this poem is a good poem, and is very true .
Kelsey
I Loved It's wonderful and beautiful
mida
you have a very nice and sweet poem. keep up the good work.
BabyTiff
hey i love the poem i love to write a poem one day
Kathryn
I really can relat to your poem i've been dating this guy going on 8 months and now he's acting shady because i won't move our relationship to 3rd base!
Nicole
Awesome poem! Real talent you got girl USE IT!
Michaela
Great
Michaela
Hey. I can really realate to your poem. I wen't through the same thing with my ex-fiance. I found some things out about him that I didn't want to be true. But one day I caught him red handed and knew it was over when in my heart I didn't want it to be. I really loved him alot and part of me still does. I'm tearing up inside wanting the pain to go away, but truly. I know it never will.
melissa
That was so sad. Yo, 4 real that jumpoff brought tears to my eyes reading that. Who ever wrote it, u got some skills, keep that up.
Jasmine
This poem is good I like it alot because it is about rality
Danielle
that was so great no lie i really loved it and i could so relate to it for real great job.
Sean
Hey, that was a wonderful poem, i know im a lad, but i think it was well put to gether, Maybe i havnt felt that way before but when i rad that poem, i could imagine being that girl, really got to me. really good poem :) Keep it up
Stephanie
this poem made me cry cuz ive been hurt so many time befor and now i have a boyfriend and im really wishing that it dont happen again like all the time befor!
amanda
This was an amazeing poem i related to it so much. Keep up the fantastic work give us somemore to read.
Alyssa
i like this poem because my cusin had problems wit her b/f n she had reliaze it wasn't true she wasted her time with him
Amar
Really reall loved this poem, i know how it is to be love then suffer the pain
Chelsey
The Poem was great
Chessie
Girl. that poem is very nice. i can so definitely relate to that. that is what happened to me and it wasn't so pleasent should we say. On that night ( saturday by the way) i cried and started writting and i wrote something similar to urs. thank yo u for opennng my eyes a little more to feeel that i'm not the only one that felt like that. i got over it and i now am getting to know a very nice guy older but very well respects me. take care
Ashlea
I loved your poem 'When You Love Somebody' It is the perfect poem that all girls can relate to. It really made me cry when i read it after my ex and I had broken up. We were together for a year. And that night he broke up with me, I happend to come by your wonderfully written poem and as I cried, I realized how much the poem was like our relationship. Keep up the wonderful work. You are an talented writer and should do something with that when you get old enough.
Amy
this one almost made me cry, i am having rough times with my partner at the moment
gabriela
HEY. I LOVED THE POEM. IT REMINDED ME OF A TIME WHEN I THOUGHT I WAS IN LOVE. IT IS SO TRUE. I AM GLAD THAT ITS OVER BECAUSE HE TREATED ME LIKE DIRT. WELL GOT TO GIVE YOU YOUR PROPS, KEEP IT UP.
Amber
I can really relate to this poem. That has happened to me many times. This is a great poem and I really really like it!
Gloria
This poem is exactly how I felt at one time. And this is what my bestfriend is going through. So it's just so beautiful and perfect.
Crystal
i think the poem was good and i liked it cause it relates to actual events and thats how i felt except for the last part but thats how things go and i think this person had the courage to say things like this and it was good
Alaina
i thought that this poem was good, cause that's how i feel right now about this guy i really like.
Rakeya
i love this poem it is so touching because the poem is like almost the same thing that happend to me girl i love your poem it almost mad me cry when i was reading it
Mel
This poem reminds me that we are on HIS schedule and of the faith we need when HE reschedles HIS appointments on our behalf. And the assurance that HIS plans are so much better than ours. THANKULORD
nikky
I think that the poem is soo moving i realy understand where your comin from so much emotion i am realy glad that you moved on and were able to express your self so freely keep up the good work
Elise
! i love this poem i dated a guy for 9 months he was my first love and i miss him so much i see him all the time with other girls and its so hard also because the day after we broke up he asked my good friend out and she said yes. i still miss everything about us but this is the way it is but i love your poem it is so relating to me and my experience your a great writer ! :)
Maria
WOW. What a great poem. even tough i can not relate to it i know that it is sometimes true. this poem was so beautiful and touching.
Jamekia
This poem is so good. I can relate to it so much right now. I'm going through the same thing I'm just praying It'll all get better
leeann
one word sums this poem up FANTASTIC
Jennie
Oh My GOd. IM CRYING!
christina
i reallie like this poem! i felt the same way toward my 4th grade love! we were gether for 3 years and he did the same thing for three years i always said that it would get better but it never did! he ended up hittin me that were it stoped! good job!
Lori
Hey i just wanted to tell you that i thought your poem was tha best i ever heard cause it was so true about what you said.
Qu33n
That poem was such a good poem. Oh my god its so beautiful. GREAT JOB!
Amber
I loved your poem. i am going through the exact same thing right now with my boyfriend. I thought I was the only one with a problem like that. How did you stay strong???
Brittany
I loved this poem.
Heather
i like this poem alot because this realted to me one time my second boyfriend acted this way but now he changed and i'am going out with him!
Rosalie
I LOVE THIS POEM IT KIND OF TELLS ME ABOUT ME AND MY BOYFRIEND BUT NOT A LOT!
ANTOINETTE
i really like ur poem thats really true about this poem keep up the good work.
jolynn
the poem was really great it really does remind me about me x boyfriend how he treated me at first and now he just ignores me but now its over. GREAT JOB!
kiki
i love this poem! i can totally relate to it. i have experienced this hurt and i think there are alot of other girls out there who would have experienced it too! this poem is sooo real! keep them coming!
samantha
OMG, i totally loved your poem. and that is exactly what happened w/me and my boifriend, but yeah all i wanted to say is that i loved your poem.
dream
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I related to it alot and made it seem as if someone else understands the way I feel.
Aly
That is so true.
Talesha
EXCELLENT POEM COOL
Melanie
THIS POEM HS A LOT OF MEANING. I KINDA KNOW WHAT PREPPIE WAS FEELING WHEN SHE WROTE THIS AND I WANT TO CONGRATULATE PREPPIE ON THIS POEM. GOOD JOB GIRL!
Lorna
just to say dis is a GREAT POEM! well it happenin to me now n stuff so i can relate to wut u sayin
jessica
this is a great poeam for every one who has ever been in love. cause it happens to every body at least once. and you never for get it no matter how hard you tri. and dont tri too cause what ever dosent kill you makes you stronger.
mary grace
Thanks for the poem!it is so beautiful!
Jody
this poem was was very good
Nana
I know what you've been through because I have too. That poem was real nice
jamie
You have a real great talent. Keep up the good work!
donna
I really love your poem because it's about what really happened to me a while back when i was in a relationship. Thanks for writtin such a great poem.
bRoKeN
Hey. luv ur poem. it soundz exactly like my situation. n my ex has da same name. except hiz name iz Danial. but we call him Danny. He wuz so sweet n almost perfect. But till now,he iz ignoring me 4 no reason. I have no idea y. it hurtz so much 2 c him walk away frm me. So. juz tellin u tat ur poem iz gr8.
Michelle
This was the best oem ever!It reminded me so much of my previous relationship!
Lara
Great poem i really like it as it is well written and expressed but maily because i can totally relate to it, probably along with many other girls, and know exactly how you feel. Congrats on a great poem!
jazmin
this poem was reaay good and to think it is so true i just finished the same experience and it can hurt alot
ashianta
it is so fabulas that iam in love with this poem
ashley
WOW! this is my life in someone else's writing! i can totally relate-i feel your pain preppie!
whitney
i love this poem. it relates to my problems.
Heather
I really loved this poem i can totally relate to it because the exact samething happened to me. and its not a very good thing for that kind of thing to happen to you
Kaylicia
i loved this poem plane and simple.
mayra
Thatz a Tight as Poem Girl. !
Amber
I love this poem it is wonderful
Starr
I really like this poem a lot. It has a deep meaning to it. Great Job!
Monica
this is so true and i hope you keep this on
nicole
thank for writing this peom
Courtney
This was such a good poem. It is very true in some cases. Great work
Rachell
this was really good! :)
lou
I luv this it would make a reat song if you added a chorus between each verse
Seana
This is a beautiful poem. I love it. Keep up the good work!~
alma
i loved your poem it reminds me of my ex boyfriend who woukd treat me like very bad but i still couldn't help "loving him" until one day it ended and i tought it was my fault.
Madison
I loved your poem
Me
This poem actually reminds me of what i am going through now. Me and my BF broke up cuz he changed and I didn't know what i did. You're poem is soooo great i love it.
Carly
I think this poem is great and alot of people including myself can relate to. I was with a lad 4 ages when he cheated on me thanks for this amazing poem
thelm
I think your poem is good
kim
dude ur poem kicked it remined m alot with my relationship awesome~!
candi
oh my god this poem reminds me sooo much of my best friend shannons relationship with her boyfriend ricky he acts the same way! its sooo weird she deafantly needs to read this!
Nicol
This was a really inspiring poem. I can relate to this poem in many ways. Keep up the good work.
arymi
I REALL LIKE THIS POEM. I CANT TOTALLY RELATE TO IT. GREAT JOB!
CASEY
THIS POEM WAS THE BEST EVER KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Lisa
I think that this was a great poem that almost every girl who has ever had a boy friend can relate to. It reminded me of a guy who I thought I liked and I thought liked me but I was wrong and he had treated me the same way.
Maria
i lkie this poem alot
Maria
I would just like to say this poem is very true because it has happend to me before.
staci
This was an awesome poem!It was trult how I felt in A few paragraphs.
Jenny
I thought that was so sweet but than again it's was like a nightmare it's like what i tell my friends all guys are the same but the only differce on them are their faces and if you are the one to be an angel towards them than i guess your one of the lucky ones. but above all that i know how that feels to lose someone you've loved so much i've been there. your poem made open my eyes.
Cheri
wow! great job. i've written a couple poems like that, and it's those poems that really truly punch you in the heart. those poems come from someone who's experienced the pain of love, and o give you props for doing it so well. right on. i love the poem. but i'm sure theres more to come. but hey, life goes on!
KP
I really liked this poem it is so true. The best thing to do is just to forget him/her. They were no good anyways if they made u feel bad.
meeh
hey Preppie, i reallie loved ur poem. i just found out tonight that my boyfriend is over some girl's house right now. and i ust left him an hour ago. i couldn't stop crying until my friend made me read this poem. i thought we were in love. but i can reallie relate to ur poem its reallie inspiring. thanks
Karen
This poem is very well written. Danny must be a very talented poet. His words seem to carefully chosen that when i finished reading all i could say was WoW! =0)
Teddy
I liked the poem. It was really good. Unfortunate for the circumstances it came from but I really liked it. It held so much meaning. She really cared and loved the guy.
Ali
Hi i just wanted to say that this is one the best poems ive ever seen.
Dee
This is really good, like many of the other ppl who've read this i can relate to it!although the guy that i was thinking about didnt come back to me just ignored me and anything i tried to say to him anything he wanted to say to me i heard through someone else good huh?Still havent gotten over him!but hey what can u do! Keep writing girl this is good stuff!
Jenny
I thought this poem was really good because I as well as other Gurls can relate to this poem and because of it conclusion to the situation alot of girls find it hard to trust a guy.
Mona
That poem touched me so much because that jsut happened to me this summer. Things were good in the beginning then the putdowns and then i was like another thing to do. That was really good and i hope you keep up the good work.
russ
wow! thats all i really have to say about this pem it is one of the best i ever heard
jessi
i really liked this poem me and my sister are going through the same thing thankz you really made use get up and do something about it
teese
this poem is so true i went through the same thing
Kay
i loved your poem it hit me right at home with me and my ex im still in love with him i thought he was the one until he started treating me bad i loved this poem it really got to me thanks for writing it keep it up your awesome
Cassi
I love it it reminds me of all the poetry i write. but am way to chicken to put on here.
alexa
unfortunately all the good things in life end too soon
atdw
this was a beautiful poem. i think a lot of people can relate to it. keep writen beautiful poems. this one really touched me and my sister.
vang
love the poem, it deserves its place in the top 100.
JAANN
THIS POEM REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART AND I HONESTLY FEEL THAT IT SHOULD BE VOTED NUMBER ONE!
tasha
your poem was really great. it had alot of good meanings in it
love
hey this poem is nice and touchin the person who wrote this poem got a heart.
Flame
I really like this poem it kindof says how i felt/feel about my ex, this poem deserves to be remembered for the times to come.
Tracy
I totally feel you! I was with a guy for 3 1/2 yrs. and I ended up getting pregnant with his baby. See you were smart though you got out before it got to far. As for me I am now an 18 yr old single parent. And all because I was to blinded by his love to see what was right in front of my face. Dont get me wrong I LOVE my Baby girl! I just had very bad judgement about her father. Keep writting your poems you have real talent!
l
I LOVE ur poem i have been in love wit this guy fo ova 4 yrs. we have gone out and broke up about 4 or 5 times, it exaclly wha im goin threw-- Great Poem!
wes3
Very Truthful this poem was! If he wasn't a tipical guy. He sould have just told you that he felt it was to serious and he couldn't handle it instead he puts you down.
kayla
i read your poem and it inspired me a whole lot but what i didnt understand it what happened in the end. it was a great poem
sam
i cryed
Mia
I can relate to this poem. After i read it, it was like my life with my first love of my life. This poem really touches me. I love the poem and you are a great writer.
karla
its really deep and good
Shawn
That was a sad story I really like it alot it reminds me of someone I know!
Tiff
That poem was so true when it comes to love i thin k thats the best poem ive seen yeat !
Cryst
Youre poem was very true a lot of times people want love so bad they make believe it is right before they know for sure. love always has been and always will be uncertain.
JoAnn
YOUR POEM REALLY GOT TO ME I FEEL LIKE IM LIVING IT NOW, WITH MY BOYFRIEND DANNY. YOUR POEM GAVE ME ALOT TO THINK ABOUT.
Katie
True true - great poem
kelly
that was a sad poem i'm so sorry about the whole boyfriend thing i hope your ok
shell
you poem is so true. i was with my ex for a year and a half and i thought he was the one for me til one day it just ended we dont talk anymore and if we do we fight your poem is very inspiring and made me realize that there are other people who can relate to what i went/going through now.
Babygirl
This Poem is wonderful. It is exactly how i felt about my ex. he was 19 and i was 15 he thought he could do what he wanted to me and it didn't work. So he broke up with me. Keep up the good work.
Bess
Hey I love this poem. Its so real to life!
sammi
omg i loved your poem! i can relate to it so much!
aggie
i loved it
Renea
I know how that goes. My first love and first real boyfriend who taught me stuff broke up with me after a year. During that year things changed and he did too. Now almost two years later we are best friends. I guess that it wasnt meant to be but because of him I meet a totally great guy.
Carri
This poem is so sweet yet so sad. I know how the author of this poem feels. I almost cried when I was reading it.
rache
yeah this poem hit me hard cuz its almost the exact thing i went thru. scary huh?
lil
Well love hurts i alwaiz thort id b with this guy 4ever i told him i loved him and he told me the same the next week later we had broken up never tell someone you love them unless you mean it and you know for sure you will last coz i didnt last i was verry upset
Bates
Your Poem was great! I have had the same thing happen to me! I'm sorry you had to go through it. i wish nobody had to because its the worst feeling in the world! But you'll find the right guy.
KELLI
Honey child i know exactly what you're going through. My ex did the same thing and i took his crap for a whole year turning down some better offers all because of love.
anGeL
hey gurl, i came to dis site to find sumthin to relate to my own situation and ur poem was exactly tha 1! itz a beautiful poem, keep on doin what ur doin! thanx for puttin it on so all tha ladiez can also relate!
Elizabeth
I just have to say one thing - i love this poem
becci
this poem is really good and i hope you publish more
chels
i mainly liked the words you used to rhyme with your other words. I think it will find someone reading this and relate to them. It will oneday inspire.
Jamie
This peom was great. I liked it cause i am in this situation right now, my boyfriend says he loves me, but then he is mean so i know one day it will all be over.
sweet
this is EXACTLY like something that happened 2 me!except i wasn't goin out wit the guy.
cryst
i can relate to this poem alot. My boyfriend says he calls me names because he loves me. But I don't know. this was a great poem.
Cassi
I really like this poem it makes me think of when I had a boyfriend just like this!
manda
This was such a good poem u should be a writer. Did this really happen to u?
Amy
I Love your poem . Keep up the good work.
Carol
I have been in this type of situation. I thought it was great and so true. Sometimes love can hurt.
amanda
hey this was a really great peom! i love it so much i sent it to my friends. you should keep up on writing peoms you really good at it! i hope this never happen to you, sorry if it has but just remember it happens a lot
ellen
i have never had a bf but i have this going on with my crush he knows i like him but torments me so we are all in the same boat it seems
rubecka
great poem this has never happened with me but after reading this poem i have started thinkink tht life can be that miserable at times
chick
i love that poem it takes a lot of talent to write like that and trujst me me u have it.
Dasha
well I know what you mean this is a very wondreful poem. this poem had me thinking about my own relationship. I think me and my man should have a nice little talk now. keep writing these good poems thier very heart touching.
sunny
this poem was very breath taking i cryed all threw it this poem really reminds me of my ex boyfriend your very good
Mir
Hi preppie. i know what you went through. i am going through that with my boyfriend right now. i dunno if something is worng in his life because he wont talk to me. but i am worried. i think this poem is very good because it tells how real life relationships don't turn out to be a fariy tale like in the books. life sucks sometimes. it is a great poem!
Jen
this was a really good poem it hit close to home!
miranda
i can relate to this poem .i was in love with a guy for 3 yrs but when we broke up i had found out he was cheating on me for two yrs with my bestfriend.what a bi***! this poem is really good.
Liz
I like your poem, it is bitter sweet. You must've written in with all your heart
jessica
i read your poem for the first time and it reminded me of the guy that i just broke up with i loved him i thought we where together for 3 years well your poem rilly opened my eyes and made me rillies how some guts are thanks for righting this poem you helped me alot
Madvisa
Your poem is so inspiring! Ive gone through the same thing, and I still am. thank you so much.
Betty
i really liked your poem it seems that you but a lot of emotion in to it well thats all i really have to say good job!
me
So true!
Rachel
I really like this poem. It really touch my heart. I am in love with this guy and we have been to gether since grade school. So it has been about 7 years. That is really long and now we are in Highschool. Now I am wondering if we are gonna break up.
Michelle
Hey that was a great poems, U descibed my life with my ex so well. It touched me so much and I want you to keep on writing.
hayley
i can very obviously tell you have been deeply and emotionly hurt i can relate to your poem and my reaction was strange to me i was very upset as i read it but however it is such a wonderfull and true to life poem keep up the good work and prehaps next time you can write about the joys of love instead of the more painfull side!
buffy
Hi! i really think that your poem it really reminded me of my ex.he cheeted on me with my best friend but i really liked it. I think that it was really touching
jackielou
this is a great poem i gve it a 10, i have some similar poems. i was in a relationship for two years and it was really hard to hear himn say that he wasn't into me anymore because about a month earlier he told me that he wants me to be his wife and that he loves me so much. Then a week after our two anniversary he broke up with me. It takes time to heal but reminiscing moments spent with him makes me a better girl to my boyfriend now.
stephanie
great poems i would like to hear some more thanks i think u r great
Tiffany
I know what u mean at this time im sort of goin through the same thing.My ex boyfriend did me the same way and to this day he is still tryin to play with my emotions.I know it's hard and wish you luck in the furure.
Preciousangel
This poem describes exactly what is going on between me and my boyfriend Nick it gave me chills when i read it!
Deyanira
i can relate to this poem. i love it. i was once in love for 2 yrs and love hurts sooo bad.
Shanice
I love your poem so much that when everday I sign on,I come to your poem. I realize that this poem means everything to me. I enjoy it so much. And I thank you for submitting your poem.
brandy
the poem was really good i know how that girl feels. guys should treat women good.. and not play with our heads
CHANTIA
I THINK THAT POEM REALLY MADE ME THINK ABOUT MY RELATIONSHIPS AND THATS WHAT IS REALLY GOING ON.IT MADE ME SEE THAT I NEED TO WAKE UP AND REALIZE THAT I CAN DO BETTER BEFORE THE END.I LIKE THE POEM SO MUCH AND I THINK IT MEANS ALOT TO ALOT OF PEOPLE.
yOshi
hey grl! i love your poem.=] it's so emotional n it's the true reality. Good Job!
Angela
This poem was really good. It is very true and it has helped me to remember how much the love between me and boyfriend is so fragile.
Gerri
im 13 and i felt the same with someone
LaQuinta
that was great
samm
I think that this is a really good poem. and it is what teens go through each and everyday
nbgurl
good I loved it
Jennifer
this poem is rely good i like it a lot
April
Wow.. That poem is the most saddest and heart filled.. Im so sorry that it happened to you, The same thing happened with me and my first love, Now Ive got a real man who I so badly love, I hope he never turned out like danny did.. But I know he wont.. Good luck
Choti
this poem was really good
Erin
This poem reminds me of my relationship with my boyfriend Shawn. Everything happened the same. Even the saturday night at 10:00. This is a great poem!
stacie
this a great poem i loved it because i can relate to the words good job
Erica
I loved this poem it is really beautiful and it touched me. It should be dedicated to girls who are going through this
alena
i really felt for this poem and it bought back a couple of realities to me aswell
MaryAnne
whoaaaa i like dis poem its sooo sweet and cute an sad an so on but keep up the poem writing!
Ashley
Your poem has inspired me and thats what I'm going through right now, I love my ex very much and he says he loves me to but i'm not sure of that
Anna
My boyfriend and I had the same problems in our relationship. Honestly,
J
This poem really hit home for me. My boyfriend and I broke up from a 24 month+ relationship and everything that was in this poem was exactly how things between him and I
Tricia
it was a verry kool pome i liked it i would injoy to read more like that one
rocker
nice!
CuteNnice
WOW! i am really shocked from what i just read! it is sooo true i just wanted to say that Preppie this was great! it totally touched my heart!
karis
This waz a really kool poem!
tasha
i liked that poem it sya so much on how guys react to serious relationshps! it was really great
Alex
This poem is realli good and it's also realli true
VaNeSsA
Oh my goodness! It's terrible the way so many other girls have had this happen to them.Anyways, It was a very well-written and deep poem.
Daniela
THIS POEM RELATES TO ME AND MY EX And the bad part is I really loved the meanie that he was and then i guess I actually opened my eyes. I think that love can only make you blind for so long but I am better now and I have a great guy and I think your poem is great. Keep up the great work because that is a great poem!
chuin
great poem..
Jessica
i like this poem alot cause i can relate both ways from a guy and for a gurl so i totaly relate to this peom great job Preppie..
JR
This poem is soo cute.it reminds me of someone i like.
Kim
Hey, I liked your poem alot, it reminded me of what I went through with this guy. Its an excellant poem.
jennifer
That poem was so great it expresses all my feelings that i wish i could have written down about my past relationships. Thank You
Bridget
This poem is so true i give respect to the author for putting down the words that i couldnt for so long. Thank you.
jules
Exact thing what i'm going through right now....but i can't let him go no matter what he does cause i love him so much.
Phoebe
this poem is just "PERFECT". you seems put alot efect on it. I had one of this experiment too, but after two weeks my boyfriend turned backed to me. GOOD LUCK TO U !!!
ARMINTA
YOUR POEM IS SO TRUE I CRIED WHEN I READ YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF MY EX WHO I STILL LOVE AND I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I LOVED YOUR POEM IT WAS REALLY DEEP AND TRUE
Julie
Very beautiful and deep. I love it!
Albert
Your poem took my breath away it's so romantic and shows emoshins . I can tell it came your loving heart . I hate it .
Lauren!
Hi ya1 I think your poem is just the best poem on this site! It is so true and i will use it for my drama piece at school! cheers so much!
Brittany
this is so werid cause i have had a experience like this before and i really want to talk to the person (preppie) cause i think that she was in my head writing this story exspeaily for me
Farah
This is a real sweet poem. I could really relate to it. and it helped since i just broke up with my boyfriend yesterday. i really love this poem. it's lovely, preppie. you have a talent.
illscoobydoyou
Your an excellant poet, and I just wanted to say "Thank You" this poem has touched me unlike any other : )
ginette
this poem reminds me of my ex-boyfriend and it makes me feel so relief to know that I am not the only one that feels or felt this way.and for everyone who experienced this I hope that you have gotten over it.
Angel
This is a kick butt poem
Dan
Hey Preppie, I just wanted to say you poem was touching and very true. My friend has the same problem today and I try to help her. Your poem is the best and don't stop making them.
Amber
Hello! I just wanted to tell you that I loved your poem and it reminds me of my "relationship" right now.
tegan
this is the best poem i have read , it reminds me so much of my boyfriend (ex).
BabyGirl
I luv this poem and it is so true because i want thru something like this about 2 months ago this poem is good
Kay
Your poem had a good meaning behind. And it also reminded me of a love that i wasn't had.
Nicole
This is a very well written poem! It is so true!
Baby
This poem reminded me of me and my ex-boyfriend before. His name is also Danny.
ashley
i like this poem it is a very good one! i enjoyed it alot!
LAURA
I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM MAYBE BECAUSE THE EXACT SAME THIG HAPPENED TO ALTHOUGH HE NEVER FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM THAT'S THE DIFFERENCE WELL ANYWAYS GREAT POEM, KEEP IT UP!
Crystal
i really like this poem. it has a lot of true info in it, and i like that. i have gone throught the exact same thing as this girl has and it really hurts. i am so glad that she had the guts to write this.
Sarah
well this poem is good but also kinda freaky cuz my boyfriend of a long time broke up w/me on a saturday night at around 9. and i felt the same way w/him. he also kinda ignored me when he around his friends and then all sweet to me when it was just me and him. so it ended and it was really really hard on me. but i love your poem
FINA
I read your poem and I just loved it and it touched me in many ways. I hope that you continue to write more poems like this one
brawdy
i think the poem is so beautiful and it made me cry.i'm going through the same situation right now..thank's for listening
Stephanie
This poem is so sweet and as I read it I thought of my ex-boyfriend, who I just recently broke up with. I read this poem and it brings back all the pain but I know that everything happens for a reason and I know I have to be strong, but this poem is really sweet and I luv it!
ELIZABETH
i love this poem cause it has happen to me real resent and we was ingaged and he changed real quick after that and i love him very much
Midnight
I can really relate to this poem. I know exactly what the situation is. I have been there and this poem was a way for me to realize what really was going on with my boyfriend and now I have broke up with him!
LUCYCAR
THE POEM IS REAL GOOD SEEMS TO HAVE PUT LOTS OF THOUGHT TO IT
blue_fires27
I loved that poem. It remindes me of my ex- except i was stuped and took him back and we went through the same stuff untill i got smart! Keep on writing you have a great talent!
April
I love your poems it is so true about some guys but not all of them.
Faith
Realy great,it touched me deeply.
Alisa
I know exactly what you are talking about. I am really a person who keeps her feelings to herself and sometimes it backfires. I realy love your poem and I think you should continue on with your talent!
cinthya
this is exacly what happen to me i know how u felt
ashley
This poem really touched me. I know exactly how this author felt. I have been in that situation and it hurts. This poem has alot of emotion in it unlike some poetry which is but rhyming words.
Marissa
I think that poem is sooo cute! it reminds me of what is happening to me now* thanx for writing it and keep writing more***
Shameshia
I went through the same thing, but i caught my man cheating. and where still together; that's how i knew i was in love. another thing i found out was, because i treated him so bad that's what mad him try to cheat he claims he did'nt do anything but i think he did.So i realized that you really should'nt treat someone like you wanna be treated.
Lindsey
This is such a great poem. As I read it, I couldn't believe the exact resemblence it had to a situation I was in a while back. Again, great poem and keep on writin'.
Mari
I thought it was a really great poem. I know a lot of people who can relate to this poem. Good job.
Danielle
That was an awesome poem! I feel that way about this guy in my life! Great job!
Keri
i loved this poem! it reminded me of a relationship with i guy i was going out with for a while. When You Love Someone was also kind of sad to me because when it said that all you felt to him was dirt, that really made me sad. is this poem have to do with a relationship you are having or had?
Quantisha
This was one of the best poems I have heard you can go some where with poem.
jessica
This poem is very good! It has a lot of meaning!
Desamber
this poem is like when i was dating a guy named Gary but he didmt call me for a week and he also dumped me on christmas of this year but he hurt my feeling i also turn alot of guy for him and i feel the pain that he puts me through
Crystal
I seem to like your poem. It seems so true to my relationship right now. I mean there is this guy he is 18yrs old and he is telling one of my best friends one thing and telling me some thing a whole lot different. What should I do? But I like your poem so much and I think that you should just continue too write more poems like theses.
Traci
The Poem you wrote was great!So real!I loved it ,it reminds me of my past love lifes!
Shannon
Your poem is right and just how i feel right now. Your writeing helped me thanx
Eric
THAT POEM WAS GREAT
BRI
I thought your poem was really good!
neha
i think that this is a really really sweet and great peom i luv it and u surly have my vote thnkx bye
CASEY
THIS POEM IS SO COOL
Jason
I really loved ur poem becouse it happend to me and my girl she dumped me and i triyed to get her back and she said things that really made me happy but the next day she said she changed her mind
Heather
I really like this poem. It describes the relationship between me and my boyfriend right now. I love this poem.
Jazmin
I really appreciate that teenagers are really in love an can express them-selfs all along!
Eric
I LOVE THE POEM!
monica
This was a very good poem and you should have the credit for it.
Iva
This poem just reminded me of myself and my current situation. And it made me confront things that are going to happen with less pain and fear.
AMBER
I LOVE IT. IT REMINDS ME OF HOW MY FIRST LOVE DID ME
Krissy
I just love this poem.
Trista
This poem reminds me of my best friend's relationship with her ex-boyfriend.
annie
I felt just like this at one time this explained just the way my guy was once. I would enjoy if this perosn wrote more peoms like this because i am a teen and i think alot of teens think this way and understand what this peome meant! thank you
Nikki
I Loved this poem because just recently I went out with this guy and our relationship went just like the poem, one min. he loved me and the next min. It was like he hated me. And all the while, when I actually thought that he loved me it was just all one BIG lie, and the break up was so harsh we now dont talk. I just wanted to say that this poem was the best b/c now i know that I'm not the only one who felt this way.
Molly
This poem describes EXACTLY how i feel about this guy i am in love with. This pooem has really helped me! Thanks
NAOMI
I really like this poem, because i can relate to it. Keep up the good work,and God Bless.
Sunshine
This poem most definitely relates to me and my ex-boyfriend
nick
I liked your poem
Jessica
I love this poem it reminds me of me an my last boyfriend! I twas the same way with him!!
ashley
i like this poem because it is very true to many people and i dont like how that boy put her in that much pain and i feel sorry for what she went through
kim
i know exaclty how you feel hang in there and be strong.
dan
I think this poem is really sweet and very true.
Pati
I know how hard it is.Becase im going threw it wright know.Hes ben gon for a week,and he dosent answer my calls.I find my self crying constently and im so sick of crying.I start to get over it but then i bump into him somehaw and im miss him even more.Your poem is touching becase i hate the truth to. Sincerly, Sara*
sarah
thispoem is so sad and i know how the girl who wrotee it feels. Been there done that.
GiGi
Hi Preppie, How r u? I love this poem u write. Because i had same problem like that. After reading that poem i realized that it not that bad to lost someone u love.
Tina
I love your poem. It is just actually how me and my best boy use to be. I mean we still mess but he treat me like a piece a shit and at times I just want to let go. We stay at peace as friend but it just hurts me that I can't say we go out. I dunno we are just friends.
john
wow that was a wicked good poem i mean i never read anything like that you are good if ya have any more email them to me please my email address blinkmannn182182@aol.com
Brice
i loved your poem. it has inspired me to be a little more aware to what girls are like to me. cause there are some that i know like me but i kinda dont pay much attenchion to them. and i think that i need to be more resopsive to them. well please email me back and give me your oppion as a girl. thankyou
cordea
that was true. I* liked that poem write some more like that.....and send them 2 me please....well wrote to tell u how i liked your poem... thank you cordea
cindy
it was a nice poem and it feels so real it mad me cry
Amanda
I love it, It reminds me of a relationship I once had.
Stella
This poem is really good:) I thought that it was very life like. Good job.
cristy
ur poem is very touching
michelle
i thought this was a very good poem the auther expressed herself through the poem which made it better i love poems that have to do with love and i also like poems that are very well thought out
christy
this poem is so true about me and my ex. i'm glade that there is someone out there that knows how i feel.
Scarlett
This poem is so true! It is exactly what is happening with my boyfriend and I. He went from sweatheart to ignoring me and pushing me away. This poem is awesome.
Roxy
It is a very nice poem, I congratulate you on this poem, and hope that with my e-mail, you can send me some more of your poems. That is if you want to. Bye!!
Annette
I liked this poem because I felt like I can relate to it. Now I know that NO guy deserves to have a great girlfriend as I was to him.
Mahogany
I loved your poem, I experienced the same thing you experienced and it hurt, you described a situation some much like my own.
carrie
its like you took the words from my mouth... that was really good i can relate to that alot...
Raynetta
This poem was very good. You expressed what young teens go throungh every single day. Good job!!!!!1
courtney
this poem relastes to me, i love it. u r really talented. e-mail me clscho@juno.com! Courtney
neesha
i think this poem is great it has really inspired me this person has mentioned every thing thats got to do with love i hope you keep it up Preppie God Bless Ya
Charles
This poem was the best poem i ever heard in my whole life
sandy
i really love you're poem it was very sweet but at the same time it was very sad. i know love could be very hard sometimes but i guess live should go on in this world. take care and erite back to me.
Jessica
This poem so much reminde me of me and my ex how it was what I thought how we were both wrong it just wouldn't work.
mamela
whao!! i just think that this poem is really deep to me and made me realize that love is a really powerful thing, i have never experienced something like this before, but poem makes me think about the relationship i'm in right now and it's just reminds me of myself because now i would know what to do. i would like to thank the author af this beautiful poem cause i think it is really going to change my attitude towards everything. thanks a lot
Charity
this poem really opened my eyes becuase it is exactly what I feel in my situation. it is beautiful
monequa
this poems is true to a lot of people im so glad its never happened to me. you are a very good poet, and i myself write poems to but only about what has happened in my life and my relationships. GOOD JOB! but always remember most of the percent of guys are all the same, so dont waste your time on someone that is just playin with your heart, that has cheated on you, or is just using. waste your tears on someone that you really love for a very long time, someone that wont treat you like dirt, someone that will be faithful to you, and you and your partner will be happy for a long time.
minh
this poem is really good and i like it?
Mailene
solid!
monica
this poem is so nice
michelle
that was a really good poem
lynn
This poem was breath taking. I felt the exact same way when my boyfriend and I broke up, and the weird thing was it happened exactly the same way and even on the same day and time, which made things even weirder.Never give up your beautiful talent on writting poems, I admire someone to express there feeling like you did. I have written many poems about how I felt, but always to scared to let other people know how I felt because I was afraid of being laughed at and being told that I was to young to be feeling the way I did.
NANCY
this is what i feel now. u perfect express out the feeling. i like this poem.
Nancy
This poem was so great it explained a lot about how I felt about my ex boyfriend.
Ashley
This poem was good
Lillian
I think this poem iz really good.
jennifer
i thought it was very good
Jenny
this is so sad.. this is what is just happening right now to me and my boyfriend. well, i am on the stage where he is putting me down. are you alright now? i dont think ill ever be alright again. even if i did, it will never be the same.
JoJo
I really like this poem for many reason. It is written beautifuly and the exact same thing happend to me and we just broke up a week ago. I still love him dearly but we had to end the realtionship because he kept hurting me. We now dont talk which hurts even more and we arent even friends after 8 months. To loose someone you love is very hard and i can totally relate to this poem. i really like it.
Samantha
I really liked this poem.I sort of went through something like that. You should keep on writing.
Melissa
i think this is one of the best sad poem i ever read..i think you're doin' a pretty good job..so keep it up..i like it because it rhymes and it has a meaning to that poem..not those one we read in class.
chassity
I LOVED YOUR POEM! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I ABOUT CRIED WHEN I READ YOUR POEM I HOPE IT HAS THIS MUCH INFLUENCE ON THE OTHER READERS
kartik
it was very nice
BETTY
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. I READ IT THE DAY MY BOYFRIEND AND I BROKED UP AND I WAS FEELING REALLY BAD BUT BY RESDING THE POEM I NOTICED I COULD REALTE TO IT AND IT KIND OF MADE ME FEEL BETTER.
lilsexyt
this poem was so good this poem remind of my ex-boyfriend keep uo the good work
Tesa
I love this poem. It reminds me so much of what I went through!
nicole
this poem is great it is so perfect for me as i recently broke up with my boy friend and that is just so wonderful.
Joe
This poem is awsome and it makes me think about someone i loved
victoria
i really loved the poem. you can always know if a poem or story is good if it relates to people.And this one related to me.
SHEHAAM
I THINK THIS POEM IS GREAT BECAUSE I'VE ALSO BEEN GOING THREW SOMETHING SIMILAR BUT I DID NOT BREAK UP WITH MY BOYFRIEND.
heaven
i lik this poem because it reflcts on my life i had a b\f like that i always said he could do no wrong but i guess that was a lie.....
Mailene
i love dis poem..keep on writing.you're really good at it!
Jenny
I could really relate to this poem. It is very real and very true. Although it was depressing, I really enjoyed this poem.
Jessica
I think this is a really good poem! It's so strange cuz the same thing has happened to me! And girl i know exactly how you feel. It's like you wish you could go back and relive every kiss and touch!....keep writing poems , and i hope you find a better guy, cuz i know i have!
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